“Though the journey will, of course, be long and enduring, the end goal remains the same: advance her power to the point where it can make brains bleed.”

“That’s not up for negotiation; that’s going to be the end goal.”

@TheWindel

The personal formatting choice threw me off, as did the use of modifying the template image that served as a placeholder. You didn’t need to insert your FC in there, but neither of these things will affect your review in any shape or form.

Konohe Junko seems fine enough, but there are a few things me and Pirouette were discussing we’d like to see elaborated on or added into the sheet before we accept it into the cast of the roleplay. I’ll throw the softball thoughts first so we can get those out of the way. As it currently stands, I don’t see much of a mention of her physical description beyond her casual attire and her gas-mask. What about her height? Explaining or describing her inverted pupils? I’d like to see these things so I can reference things when it comes to the classrooms; to help me visualize the student population. I guess that leaves some of the non-softball issues.

My biggest worry with this is well, this is an assertion that feels more reflective of the progression of a villain. We want to define heroes here, though there is room for changing thinking processes and some would-be heroes might be more brutal than others in their personal philosophy. But there’s nothing in your character’s backstory to indicate where this end goal comes from nor is there any indication of why this goal is important to the character. Characters that are brutal and obtuse in their heroic thinking exist in the canon (such as Katsuki Bakugo) so this is something we can potentially work around if there are proper elaborations and edits.

This kind of reads problematic to me and I think the assertion that on a player-to-GM basis is probably unfitting. We need to make sure everyone is collaborative here and wants to work together to create something. If this is just awkwardly phrased then I apologize for jumping down your throat but I am very worried about these kind of things given the nature of these roleplays.

I want to give Junko a fair shake, I do. But these are some of my thoughts that I want addressed.

Explosions aren't exactly heroic either, yet he's learning to be a hero.

Eurthermore, this section of the CS skeleton made no mention that this had to be relating back to the character's backstory;

it is something I won't budge on but instead can be worked with in flexibility.

@Pirouette

Ink and I came up with this description, a psionic barrier is formed around the object which is what gives it edges and makes it sharper. For example, around a sphere would be a dodecahedron with lots of sharp edges. This also explains why larger objects progressively become less sharp. The barrier has more to cover. Does that make sense?