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Hidden 6 yrs ago 6 yrs ago Post by Inertia
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Here's my jab at it, hope it's alright/fits the theme of what you were looking for.
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And finally, here's your old buddy and tsundere rival Ffamran! I tried to make him a worthy enemy/rival for Ravness, but I realise I may need to change a lot for the history section. It's just that I spent pretty much the whole day writing this down on my phone, so I wanted to get it out there before he got completely beaten out of the running by everyone else's way better characters!

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If you still didn't fix it, here ya go. It was something with the list.

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Oh my god thank you. I can never figure out what the hell on doing wrong, so it probably would've been stuck like that forever.
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@Lyla How is She?
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@Lyla Yeah, I can see in hindsight that I may have gone a little far with the power level. The thing I was going for wasn't that he was the best mage ever, just that he somehow had near limitless 'mana' if you would, which actually held him back in some ways because it meant that he relied on overwhelming his opponents rather than using magic with any tact. Let me know if this is better - I tried to nerf him down from 'campaign breaking' to just 'powerful wizard' level; he can still alter reality with his mind, like any good wizard, but hopefully he's been nerfed in some ways that will make it easier to fit him in. My goal with him wasn't to be the most powerful character, just to explore how he reacts to his power, what a person with his capabilities would become, how he relates to the world, etc.

That being said, I also like the idea of his legend growing into his being 'the best wizard ever', so in regards to his myth, that can be taken as hyperbole.


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@Raging Fenrir - Not sure what you mean? Edit: I added some clarification perhaps - please let anyone else know if you notice issues with their CS, including the already approved one.

@Rabidporcupine - Hm, I'll have to think about that... I don't want there to be too much conflict that they can't work together. -_-

@mercenarius & Everyone Else - I'll look over the character later! Got errands to do today. =3
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@Lyla You skipped my CS? 😥
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I'm working on my healer, right now. Let's hope I can get him in before I'm outclassed by everyone else. ^^;
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Look at us go, all making a balanced party of adventurers. I love all these Cs's.
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Accidentally pressed quote again because of my stupid, fat thumbs!
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@Lyla
Yeah, I get what you mean. In my CS, I made it so enough time ends up passing that they'd probably be able to get over most of their problems before too long, and with the respect he grew for her over the years of fighting, and hopefully vice versa, they may even be able to transition from rivals to friends fairly quickly. Maybe a small fight right at the start or a lot of arguing between them, but they'd both know not to let their anger control them. Well, not too much at least...

Assuming you've seen it, the best I could compare it to is Viral and Simon from Gurren Lagann, with Ffamran as Viral and Ravness as Simon.

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@Lyla And Ovelia as Kamina, now that I think about it...
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@Apocalypse - I didn't skip anyone, but I've been out all day and now my back is killing me so I'll be a bit slow to go over everyone's CS.
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@Lyla take your time, and take care of yourself. Hope you feel better soon
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@Lyla
I agree with Merc. I hope you feel better quickly, at least in time for when you read mine. Don't want you in a bad mood when you start looking at Ffamran, otherwise there'll be no chance!
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Just popping by to compliment everyone on the CS. Very interesting cast we have going!

I've started working on my boy. He's a major in healing and a minor in swashbuckler.
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