Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by ihinka
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Looks like you are in need of another older person I shall endevour to give you a CS shoulder
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by NinaDivine
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I'm interested in joining. Will do my best to get a CS up tomorrow if there is still time to join.
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Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by BlueSky44
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@ihinka

Sorry for the late response, been doing a bunch of stuff all day. She's good to move over and I'll add you in when I post the next update... Might message you something for your character to start off with not sure yet.
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@BlueSky44 No problem. I've got stuff to keep me busy
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Dutchess Sarah AKA Lavender James

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Here's my two cents! Let me know what you think?
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@Dutchess Sarah Sorry for the delayed response, Blue is busy this week and asked me to look things over -

  • The age/birth date is wrong, as the RP begins in October 1983
  • He has too many powers, especially with one as strong as Chlorokinesis.... Two powers is the limit
  • Death can't be used as a fear, since everyone is afraid of death and that's assumed
  • "Fluent in English, loves Germanic languages" <--- Doesn't need English as a skill unless it's not his first language
  • Too many items under possessions - believe the max is 10. Remember, this is what they generally own/have on them.
  • Mutants most likely wouldn't have been taught in school - since this is when basically mutants were universally hated and feared. Not a subject that public school or even private would have brought up. Don't ask don't tell would have been their best case scenario.
  • Since this is 1983, Xavier hasn't established his school yet...
  • Believe you're missing something under the anything else

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@Morose

In that case, I am bowing out.

Good luck!
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