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That sounds quite reasonable and I will fluff it to be outside of fate. I would like some type of rivalry or animosity with some faction that seeks to maintain fate. I may create a small cult unless there are already people that would want to hunt the character.
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That sounds quite reasonable and I will fluff it to be outside of fate. I would like some type of rivalry or animosity with some faction that seeks to maintain fate. I may create a small cult unless there are already people that would want to hunt the character.


You'd be hunted by multiple factions already, but none of them seek to maintain fate. If you want to add another one on, feel free too.
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Perfect. Time for flavor and write-ups. Thanks for working with me on this.
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Tag me for any edits! I just kinda went for it @Burger


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@Buzzkill OH NO, CARROT TOP. It's nice. I like it. Feel free to move it to the CHAR tab.
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@Burger Hey, I really like the idea of your roleplay. Having read the OP, I think I'll work on a character for submission if that's okay.
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ye that's fine
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I'm still here btw just haven't had anything to say
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@Burger Here is my character submission. I hope it's okay. Let me know if anything needs to be changed.

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@Concept I was on edge at first because _another_ EDENPOL officer. Thankfully, I think the angle of a cop turned enforcer is _just_ enough to differentiate. All you have to do is remove the image at the top (and maybe add a short sentence or two added to the appearance) because I'm a stickler for cohesion and we're all doing text appearances now.




Please no more cops. there's so many
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@Burger Lol, my whole intention was to have a character deeply embedded with the Ito-Gumi, but as I was writing the history it just made sense that his parents would ship him off due to his behavior and their pride. However, I have backstory with the Ito-Gumi planned so hopefully you'll appreciate the setup later.

Gotcha on appearance.
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Damn, EDENPOL is straight up hemorrhaging officers.

I feel like I may have unintentionally started a trend......
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I seriously meant for my guy to be totally in with the Ito-Gumi lol. I see the trend though. Makes me want to run a second character that's got nothing to do with EDENPOL whatsoever if it'll balance things out a bit.
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Makes me want to run a second character that's got nothing to do with EDENPOL whatsoever if it'll balance things out a bit.


It's fine as it is, me thinks. I was mostly worried about "Hey man, I was a cop!", "Same here!", then it turns into a buddy cop RP.

Thankfully, we get nice juicy intercharacter drama with "EDENPOL brotherhood REPRESENT" and "fuck the police lmao". Which solved what I was worried about most.

but please no more cops, you can be practically anything else
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@Burger

Now, do you prefer if we @ all of our messages in OOC? The other RP I'm in prefers if we do.
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Good to hear. Although the prospect of that buddy cop RP did have me curious for a second or two lol.

EDIT - Good question^^^
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Do it if you want to ping them. Like how I want to ping you now. I don't mind if people ping or not.
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I would also like to say, having a bit of buddy cop interaction wouldn't be an inherently bad thing; as long as it's just one character dynamic rather than eating up the entire RP. We'll have to see if anything like that develops, though.
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The issue would be less "two people are buddy cops" and more "four people could have been buddy cops".

As it stands, we're all gucci now.
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