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Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by RavensMuse
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RavensMuse Girl with the Infinity Gauntlet.

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Done! I'll get to work
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Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Morningstar
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Got any ideas for a new character? I am all out of them...
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@Morningstar If you're having trouble coming up with a character, I find that looking for a face claim is a good source of inspiration. There is also tons of resources in the Roleplaying Discussion section here on the guild and in the Articles & Guides that could be helpful! This guide here may help: roleplayerguild.com/topics/175127-sta…
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I'm thinking something along the lines of Absorbing Man.
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@Morningstar That would be acceptable powers wise ^^
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@Morose Here is my submission!

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@Achronum Okay, few things
  • 1) The color code looks to be either too close or identical to Tome's - so please switch it out.
  • 2) Try to expand on his personality some more - the two paragraphs are looking really light and it's important you can really dig in here to understand your character
  • 3) Since he's born in Astoria Oregon and I'm assuming that's where his family businesses are, how is he going to end up in Washington D.C.?
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@Morose Thanks for the feedback! I went in and focused more on the personality section like you said and changed the color coding. I also clarified his Uncle's business was in D.C. and he returned there after school for a formal apprenticeship to get some more hands on experience. I also added an additional habit.

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@Achronum
  • The color code looked close to Cannonball's, but I compared them side by side and think that it should be fine.
  • All of the events are starting in the Washington D.C. area, so given his backstory, he would start in the Millennium Plaza Strip Mall area, where we have two characters already. Both of those are mutants who'll end up running from Purifiers/Police/No Spoilers soon
  • So....move him on over to the CS tab! :) You are clear to jump in and start posting at Millennium Plaza. Here is a brief rundown of the spots there:

    • Nail Salon
    • Bank
    • Comic Book Store
    • Secondhand Book Store
    • Jeweler's
    • Boutique
    • Subway
    • Dunkin' Donuts
    • Candy Store
  • I'll send you the Discord code and back up forum link in a moment.
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I need senpai to be a part of the RP... (AKA Wade Winston Wilson! <3)
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@Morningstar While I appreciate your enthusiasm for Deadpool, please refrain from posting in the OOC here unless it's with questions or concerns related to the RP! (Or of course, a character submission!)
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@RavensMuse Okay, so characters need to be submitted to the OOC tab for approval and not the CS tab as indicated in the rules. I'll be contacting a mod to delete your post shortly.
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@RavensMuse Okay, so characters need to be submitted to the OOC tab for approval and not the CS tab as indicated in the rules. I'll be contacting a mod to delete your post shortly.


Purged, sorry! I was writing this on and off and apparently replied on the CS copy instead of OOC.
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@RavensMuse No harm done, we all make mistakes. I'm reading over your CS now and will be giving some feedback shortly!
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@Morose Thanks, I have a habit of having two windows open, one of the CS to get a feel for the other players and one OOC. I keep forgetting that the forum copies what you have typed to both windows.
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@RavensMuse

  • The face claim - I feel a bit gutted since there's no way you could have known this, but that face claim is in use by another RPer for this universe of Rp's. So I am afraid that you cannot use this face claim and I do apologize for that. As an alternative, might I suggest Lizzy Caplan in her role of Janis in Mean Girls? She has a similar vibe and looks!
  • For birth place and powers, the code has an error - it has the entire line colored and bolded. Same thing is happening in habits, character quote, and anything else. And in the appearance section and relationship status.
  • Powers - I know that we discussed essentially that she can draw an animal and it comes to life. It's just confusing the way you've worded it in the sheet and I'm not getting the same meaning from it? And her telekinesis of course.
  • Take out free running under general skills - just have it in combat
  • Under possessions, make sure to include her clothing
  • Missing something under the anything else as well
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@Morose Noted!

Also, wow, that is horrible luck >.<

I'll definitely swap to your recommendation, thank you.

I'll try to reword the powers better, sorry, I think I'm just a little tired and need to reboot before I attempt to make sense.

I think it's because I freaked out and copy pasted from the cs without grabbing the raw. I'll fix the code...sorry >.<
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@RavensMuse Get some rest, make the edits tomorrow. The CS will still be here.
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@Morose Am I allowed to make my character a friend of Colossus/Piotr?
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