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Shweet, now just to figure out Callsign and homeworld, then I can move on to the rest of the sheet.
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Shweet, now just to figure out Callsign and homeworld, then I can move on to the rest of the sheet.


Doesn't matter what your callsign in, bro. Everyone is just gonna call you 'The Human'. Haha
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Still recruiting here or are you guys approaching full?
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Still recruiting here or are you guys approaching full?


Still recruiting.
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@Gcold awesome, I'll have a read of the other sheets and see what I can come up with.

After a quick glance at the sheets it looks like you guys are without a medic. Permission to take a stab at the job?
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After a quick glance at the sheets it looks like you guys are without a medic. Permission to take a stab at the job?


Stab away, doc.
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Great! I'd rather have a flesh and blood medic than one of those faulty 2-1B droids. No offense, NED.
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@Lord Greshh yeah yeah...save it for the RP, bub
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Just saw concept art of a Dug firing a blaster with its feet and now a small part of me wants to make a Dug medic for no reason other than imagining the look on peoples' faces as my character commences life-saving battlefield surgery by picking up a scalpel between his toes.
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Just saw concept art of a Dug firing a blaster with its feet and now a small part of me wants to make a Dug medic for no reason other than imagining the look on peoples' faces as my character commences life-saving battlefield surgery by picking up a scalpel between his toes.


The look would be horror and immense pain, but people under heavy anaesthetic and shock seldom quibble
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@Gcold - been lurking awhile now, do you guys have room for a rust bucket like me?
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@Gcold - been lurking awhile now, do you guys have room for a rust bucket like me?


Not for you. You tend to suddenly disappear for years.
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Not for you. You tend to suddenly disappear for years.

Damn, really living up to your name. But yeah, fair enough.

Wishing you guys a good run with the RP, looking forward to reading it.
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Alright, @POOHEAD189, your guy looks very promising. However, there's a bit more you have to do, before we accept him.

  • The image is not very helpful in terms of appearance, since most of what we see is Cleomenes' helmet. I'd like you to replace it with a Zabrak face, if possible.
  • Related to the above, I need more written details on appearance. What does he wear when not in combat? In what way does his movement "command respect"?
  • Expand the section regarding Cleo's service with the rebellion. Was he a sympathetic mercenary or part of their main forces? Scarlet Moons wasn't with the Rebel Alliance until very recently, so how did Cleo find them?
  • Where and how did he defeat a Madalorian? Also, having a full suit of Mando armor without being a Madalorian is pretty rare. It would be more reasonable if several pieces are broken.
  • Not respecting command in itself is not a weakness. What negative consequences did Cleo suffer as a result? Maybe he disregarded intel and stepped on a landmine?


Other than the above, your character is well-constructed. Keep up the good work!
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How's it going, @Zarkun?
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How's it going, @Zarkun?


Got the next couple of days off, so I should have something done. Just need to finish before Iceborne comes out XD
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@Gcold

  • Added his casual clothes and how he moves in the appearance section. I also added a secondary picture with his face.
  • Went into detail on his rebellion campaigns, and how he defeated a Mandalorian Bounty Hunter and received his armor.
  • Gave him an extra flaw.
  • Explained how he was added to the Scarlet Moons
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Well done, @POOHEAD189. Just two minor notes before our good captain is approved.

1. Since the main Alliance task force rendezvoused with the Scarlet Moons at the beginning of the RP (three months after Endor), we can say Cleo arrived a month earlier with a smaller unit. This gives him some time to integrate.

2. I assume his Mando armor is the basic configuration, without a jetpack or built-in weapons?
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Quick question, you mentioned in the opening post that the RP would have three episodes, following rebel infantry, imperial agents, and mercenary pilots. Did you mean that you wanted everyone to make a Rebel for the first part, an Imperial for the second part, and so on?
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