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Glad you're still with us, @redbaron1234!

The concept is promising. However, we've already filled our human character slot, and since Imperial organizations don't like aliens, this character is going to have some problems. Still, I can see ways to make it work. Go ahead and give us your pitch.
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I was thinking of making the character's flaw being their dogmatism. They were a true believer of the Empire before, and damnit they can't be wrong twice! They would be very hard headed and stubborn. Ah well, can always use that as a flaw later.

Perhaps the fact that the empire doesn't like non-humans would fit into the backstory? Could very easily have them been a 'leashed crook' sort of deal under a particular ISB agent (Who would be my character in the next part)? I like the idea of someone who is trying to use the Rebellion to get a new start in the new regime that it will bring on.
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I was thinking of making the character's flaw being their dogmatism. They were a true believer of the Empire before, and damnit they can't be wrong twice! They would be very hard headed and stubborn. Ah well, can always use that as a flaw later.

Perhaps the fact that the empire doesn't like non-humans would fit into the backstory? Could very easily have them been a 'leashed crook' sort of deal under a particular ISB agent (Who would be my character in the next part)? I like the idea of someone who is trying to use the Rebellion to get a new start in the new regime that it will bring on.


I like it. This is a neat idea.
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Cool, I will try to build the character this weekend. Any recommendations or things I should be aware of?
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Cool, I will try to build the character this weekend. Any recommendations or things I should be aware of?


Nothing in particular. I'll let you know once we see the sheet.
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I've added the points previously mentioned, hopefully to a satisfactory level. Sorry this took so long! You know how it is, life is hell, etc.
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Fantastic, @The Fated Fallen. You got all the points I asked for. Ashti has my approval, and once @Zoey White gives it a pass, you add her to the roster!
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Fantastic, @The Fated Fallen. You got all the points I asked for. Ashti has my approval, and once @Zoey White gives it a pass, you add her to the roster!


I'll just remove the WIP tags, sorry it took so long!

Feels good to to have a (almost) finished product
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@The Fated Fallen hell yes very cool force user
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Okay, finally got this character in a place I am happy with, how does this look?



Edit: added Binary to her languages, forgot it in the C&P job I had from my notepad
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@redbaron1234 looks great to me. she and @Torack's character can be ex-empire buddies, though Arosha is far more removed from the Empire than Zed.

but this is my a-ok. Gotta wait for the big GM though. If you want, you can mark which one of her characteristics are her primary and secondary.
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I just realized my backstory caused a bit of an issue continuity wise for airs Thorne. It says Zed landed on it and was found by Moon soldiers, but the RP is about to start with Moon invading them?

Also do we have a discord or Telegram chat?
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@redbaron1234 Huh, I guess I didn't make that connection. I guess you could just change the name of the planet from Ord Thorden to something else, good catch.

edit: we do have a discord, let me look for the link
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NEW REVISION OF ZED.

Mainly changed where she was found by the Scarlet Moon, fixed some typos, and gave her the ability to speak Binary


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Derp sorry double post
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Well done, @redbaron1234. Zed is approved.
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Here's the insignia for each rank. Also added this to the ranks hider in databank.



Enlisted troops wear their insignias in the form of coarseweave patches nano-sewn onto uniforms, while commissioned officer insignias are magnetic buttons attached to rank plaques. Depending on the wearer's species, their insignia may be worn on the chest or shoulder of their uniform.
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Still around, @Torack?
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