@Sinsystems Seems Alright by me. The only thing that has me confused is this:
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Are you speaking of cutting as healing because of surgery, or do they have magical properties that allow you to heal with them? Just have to be sure here. Wait for @LuckyBlackCat 's approval to post in CS Tab!
@Suneli I feel like you focus a bit too much on being ''fair'' and ''not overpowered''. Those are definetely rules, but they're also much more a guideline. I wouldn't necessarily mind if your Power was a one shot kill anything as long as it's properly used and difficult to perform - high risk/high reward kind of thing. The thing though is people that go that route has to prove they can write compelling characters and fight scenes without abusing their powers. It's very do-able.
I'm saying this mostly because when I read the description for the Hanged Man's, that's what I was feeling with all the restrictions that seems to be a bit random and too complicated for the Magic. I absolutely love the idea of the random powers for the Tarot Cards draw. I do not even deem it necessary to be one power per day.
I would have gone with something more akin to being able to draw cards as much as she wants, but can only draw the same card once per day, let's say. With that route, you could even start with a bigger cards decks and make the pwoers a bit simpler, but have more.
Or you could go with a different limitation - such as your Pixie's magical reserve.
In the end, it's your decision. Your character can be accepted as it is, just keep me updated on what you decide to do, okay? OS: I just love that face claim.
@Mistress Dizzy Hey ! That can happen. Personally, I tend to go fish for pictures or musics that strikes or inspire me, and I flesh out a character from there. I hope that can help.
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@Killy Sorry! I missed it ! No personality? Is it still a WIP? Just gotta be sure.
The constructs are a bit liek Green Lantern's constructs? Also, there's one thing bothering me a bit. The Pixie's transformed state is supposed to be something mundane to hide as. Marilyn can totally rock a Crown if you so wish it, I just need to specify.
Did I miss anyone? It would very much be like me. Sorry if I did, just poke me anywhere !
Also, again, I strongly encourage everyone to join the Discord if you are able to. :P Even if you are not too active, I try to build of a small community of nice people and it's easier to everyday discussions as well as RP updates. @Sinsystems THank you for the update, I will see to it to post a non-outdating one.
Ok, sorry for the delay everyone ^^; Anyway...
@Sinsystems I like it, although yeah the "healing cutting" thing needs clearing up. Am I right in thinking you're referring to magically enhanced surgery? Once that detail is clarified, consider the CS accepted.
@Suneli Ah, sorry if I intimidated you yesterday! For the most part it looks good, it's just that yeah, you seem to be a little worried about making your character overpowered, and underpowering her instead. I'd personally relax some of the restrictions on The Hanged Man, especially as she isn't guaranteed to get it at any one time. Very creative though, and I like the personality changes as a side effect of her powers.
@Mistress Dizzy Yep, that suggestion seems like a good one to go with. Considering things weren't at all easy for black people in the 1800s, a servant background would be likely. As for the magic, got to say you need to elaborate on it. The versatility looks good though, and I'm interested in seeing more details.
@Killy Once you write the personality section, your character seems fun, especially with the bug magic! That's pretty unique.
@Vega7285 Hehe, classic light and dark, lawful good and chaotic good duo. I'd recommend having them both as foils, although it's understandable if you only want to go with one. You'd always be able to bring the other in later.
@Majoras End Yup, vampire concept looks good so far! Let us know when the CS is complete.
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Whew! That's way more characters than we expected. It's probably time to close applications, and start the RP soon.
Ahh, yeah I get that often. It kinda became a habit to heavily restrict abilities I think could be considered OP, thanks a bunch for the suggestions btw! I love the suggestion of drawing however many, but only once a day! I'll upload the sheet after implementing a few of those suggestions, tysm!
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