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@BenG85 This has potential, but I feel it needs some revision to meet out standards. Perhaps a slight re-work and an addition of a bit more depth?

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@BenG85 This has potential, but I feel it needs some revision to meet out standards. Perhaps a slight re-work and an addition of a bit more depth?@tobiax

Sure, no problem. Were you just needing more detail, is there something there that doesn't fit well, or is there something in particular you want to see?

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@BenG85 A bit more nuance and texture to the character would be nice. But I have to point out we're kind of overbooked, so not everyone who has currently expressed interest can get in, sadly. We have nine active interest seekers and 8 spots, but the game was more geared towards 7. Sorry if I was unclear before.

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@tobiaxNo worries. I've made some changes, his background is just a little more detailed, now, with some actual hints at personality this time :P and best of luck to my fellow applicants ^_^

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Oh, also he has no last name.

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@tobiax Now he does

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Awesome character @BenG85!  I look forward to reading what you all come up with!

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Um, hi... can I help you?

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@BenG85 I'm not really sold on the character in his current state.

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revisions taking place, trying not to rush this, but I really want the part!

Update: lots of revision, but, hopefully this is a more cohesive, coherent bio/background! Still came out kind of long, but, at least it all should fit together better.

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Finally...it's being 100 years but I finally finish it. Heres a "trying to make a friend but doesn't know how" girl and a "jerk with a heart of gold" digimon!

Name: Elizabeth "Beth" Azurine
Age: 17
Crest: Kindness
Appearance: 

Bio: 
Beth feel like a bird and her cage is her own home. Ever since the day she was born, her mother expect Beth to be perfect "Just like her" that what her mother say to her. everyday of her childhood, her mother give her one of those ridiculous perfect classes, to piano, all the way to ballet, everytime she made a mistake, her mother would scold her daughter and say awful things to her. Beth envy for the other kids of the outside world, they go outside and play all day and make new friends, friends is something that Beth really needs, she needs someone that can love her, hangout with her and be on her side, that what she needs.

By the time she turns seventeen, she decided to run away from home and try to live her life on her own, it's not going to be that hard...Right? "You should have punch your mom in the face, I would do that!" "Not writing on my bio, Danny!"
Other: color code-8493ca 


Name: Danny
Personality: Danny is what everyone called a troublemaker and he likes it that way, he loves to shows how mean and crazy he is. Danny shows everyone that he doesn't have a purest heart.....Or does he?


Stage- Baby
Species: Kiimon
Attribute: Free
Technique-
	1: Pushū


Stage- In-Training
Species: Yaamon
Attribute: Free
Technique-
	1: Paint Splash
        2: Rolling Black


Stage- Rookie
Species: Impmon
Attribute: Virus
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	1: Bada Boom
        2: Infernal Funnel
        3: Pillars of Fire 


Stage- Champion
Species: Wizardmon
Attribute: Data
Technique- 
	1: Thunder Ball
        2: Vision of Terror 
        3: Meteor Squall


Stage- Ultimate
Species: Mistymon
Attribute: Virus
Technique-
	1: Core Dart
        2: Blast Fire
        


Stage- Mega
Species: Dynasmon
Attribute: Data
Technique-
	1: DNA Disintegrator
        2: Breath of Wyvern
        3: Dragon Collider 

Other: color code-662d91 

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@tobiax
Sorry about the delay, other things had been taking up my time. As for the issue of acceptance of Churches in Japan, I'm going to edit my backstory to make it clearly an international cult from the start. And Masato's mother would definitely be viewed as an outlier in Japanese society. Expect the edited backstory tomorrow.

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@Le Fay You don't need to edit it so heavily. Just understand that it's very abnormal for Japanese society. Adjusting small details accordingly is more welcome than large changes.

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I'm a little confused, about the digivices- the characters I've seen portrayed with art (great, btw) are holding gen1 Digivices, but the one pictured in the intro almost looks like something designed to fit on the wrist and forearm? Which one is actually being used?

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@tobiax
do I move to the character tab?

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@sassy1085 Yes, please do. :]

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Edit: Forget I asked- I'm going to be patient, and I apologize for being impatient. 

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Edited my character sheet slightly. Hoping it is acceptable now.

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@Le Fay It works now. Thank you for your cooperation. Masato is accepted.

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