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To confirm then, the modernization of these methods only improves the efficiency of the enchanter, yes? The DHA hasn't actually gotten to the point yet where they have enchanters capable of producing supernatural effects that are totally separate from the ancient texts?


Yes and yes. They can't replicate what isn't said in text.
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We seem to have enough people for me to warrant a Discord as it'll be helpful to me for organizing things. Only join if you've been approved and accepted in the RP.
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Repost with expanded ability section.
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We have our second true devil. Put her in the Character tab.
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I can put a time limit on the pact, no problem. We'll make it extremely temporary, about a fine minute timer sound good? Can also throw in that it drains more energy from Adam the longer it goes on, and the more the subject struggles. I'm definitely going for a double edged sword type of deal with his abilities more than anything. Powerful but costly.
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We'll make it extremely temporary, about a fine minute timer sound good? Can also throw in that it drains more energy from Adam the longer it goes on, and the more the subject struggles.


If you mean “five minute timer” then that works. Both of these are good for him.
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Aha, I did indeed mean five minute timer, not fine. Sorry, waking up is hard.
I updated the ability on his bio.
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Accepted.
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Hope I'm not too late.

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Accepted. Place him in the Character Tab.

Given we're running out of slots, you'll most likely be the last DHA player @Flood, as we just got two more accepted ones. That said, I will no longer be accepting DHA characters for the time being. Devils and Youkai positions are still open.
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Your character is interesting. However, there are a few points, we'd like to address.

The implication that he's a being without any manner of form or substance at all is a little worrying and needs more elaboration. Being basically a thought entity makes him even more invulnerable than a ghost. Even if he has a current body, from the way he's written up, the loss of it doesn't seem like it'll affect him at all.

Also, a better idea of the strength and uses of his barriers would be good, we just want to be sure we are on the same page when it comes to his capabilities to avoid any unforeseen surprises.
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Her enchantments on her weapons make sense given her home as well as coming from the South American branch so I see no immediate problems there. The rest of her checks out so accepted. Place her in the Character Tab.
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I would also like to point out your creature needs to be able to eat people for sustenance since that's the main drive of demons hunting humans. He's not really capable of that as a "thought experiment," @samakama.
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So demons are obligate man-eaters? I don’t suppose they could survive off other demons or animals or something. Okay, let me make amendments.

He may have been more conceptual at birth, but has since become a regular devil. He is now so closely linked to his human body that he cannot leave it without some kind of exorcism. If the body dies by natural means, he will remain, trapped in the corpse until some supernatural force like a demon or a devil hunter kills him, or he starves to death. And if he were ejected from the body, he would be something like a ghost, with a defined spiritual form open to attack.

As for the barriers. Each barrier is anchored to a reference location, either himself or a massive body like the Earth. If a particle hits a barrier that it cannot pass through, it will reflect off elastically. His barriers offer zero protection against spiritual or magical attacks, and hold up poorly in the face of such supernatural things. A blessed pebble would pass through and destroy a barrier without shifting in trajectory, but an artillery shell would just ricochet. In other words, someone shanking him from behind with the right knife is more of a threat than launching him into the Sun.

Using the barriers offensively is possible by placing one in front of someone moving too fast to brake. But a barrier will be stopped upon contact with a stationary solid because of the lack of motion in the solid, so it cannot be used like a sword. As for non-combat uses, he can split molecules and atoms apart, and assemble complex structures atom-by-atom over a very long span of time using elements in the environment.

The upper limit in size is around that of a domed stadium for a single contiguous barrier, which is very taxing to maintain for more than a minute. He can also make numerous minuscule barriers, even at sizes not visible to the human eye, but the smaller and more intricate the barriers are, the harder it is to maintain. Barriers the size of human cells would only be able to cover a small door at most. Also, he can only create barriers within his field of vision or around his body, though he can maintain them without looking.

I will tone things down if need be.
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Feel like you could probably tone them up, if ya want.

On the topic of demon cannibalization, it's rather inefficient and unfulfilling. Depending on the type of demon you are though you can be a coward and have them just sip incremental bits of blood or something. Think that's reserved for weak ghost-types though.
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So demons are obligate man-eaters? I don’t suppose they could survive off other demons or animals or something. Okay, let me make amendments.

He may have been more conceptual at birth, but has since become a regular devil. He is now so closely linked to his human body that he cannot leave it without some kind of exorcism. If the body dies by natural means, he will remain, trapped in the corpse until some supernatural force like a demon or a devil hunter kills him, or he starves to death. And if he were ejected from the body, he would be something like a ghost, with a defined spiritual form open to attack.

As for the barriers. Each barrier is anchored to a reference location, either himself or a massive body like the Earth. If a particle hits a barrier that it cannot pass through, it will reflect off elastically. His barriers offer zero protection against spiritual or magical attacks, and hold up poorly in the face of such supernatural things. A blessed pebble would pass through and destroy a barrier without shifting in trajectory, but an artillery shell would just ricochet. In other words, someone shanking him from behind with the right knife is more of a threat than launching him into the Sun.

Using the barriers offensively is possible by placing one in front of someone moving too fast to brake. But a barrier will be stopped upon contact with a stationary solid because of the lack of motion in the solid, so it cannot be used like a sword. As for non-combat uses, he can split molecules and atoms apart, and assemble complex structures atom-by-atom over a very long span of time using elements in the environment.

The upper limit in size is around that of a domed stadium for a single contiguous barrier, which is very taxing to maintain for more than a minute. He can also make numerous minuscule barriers, even at sizes not visible to the human eye, but the smaller and more intricate the barriers are, the harder it is to maintain. Barriers the size of human cells would only be able to cover a small door at most. Also, he can only create barriers within his field of vision or around his body, though he can maintain them without looking.

I will tone things down if need be.


I think this could have been worded in a less confusing, or at lease more graceful, way. I feel like he's alright (especially when compared with others in the RP) but his but the description of his capabilities don't sound clean enough I guess.

As for sustenance, it's as @ERode said.

You can live off of other demons, it's just a comparatively worse source of food.
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As KoL said, it seems he's generally alright then though wording it in a less confusing way in the CS might help. In terms of his powers, he seems fairly alright but I'd like his background to reference more how he's in a flesh and blood body now.
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