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Edited now. Feel free to take another look.
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Thanks for the tips. I went over her again and edited her.
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@Fiscbryne If I may, where will the RP be starting out at? Right after the crash, directly before, a bit after? I'm just interested so I can accurately determine how much I add to the backstory.
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I've got my (GM)PC posted now, though I had wanted to add more art; the waist-up portrait there is the only thing I could finish quickly enough. The profile itself is around the same size as @Fiscbryne's and I wouldn't expect anyone to match it, but we're looking for CSes on the meatier side!
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@Fiscbryne Edited Delste's backstory to reflect more of her relationship with Nikdoris and the Order. :)
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@boomerremover I like the new additions; it's interesting to think of Delste as a bit of an enigma to her seniors in the Order, some of whom would sympathize with her while others might want her gone entirely.
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@seonhyang Thank you! Delste started her time as Nikdoris's Padawan when she was twelve; so although she has seven years of training under her belt (as she's currently nineteen), it's been a year and a half since she's been left in Ilum. She's not happy about it. Considering her reputation and the length of time she's been training, I would imagine there would be a wide variety of Knights and Masters familiar with her and her ... enigmatic behavior.
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I took the liberty of matching y'alls formatting.


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I like Garner’s haughtiness! He seems full of himself in the way a lot of younger people are when they’re not quite self-aware of their flaws and foibles—it’s very true-to-life! I particularly love that he’s putting on airs—his character feels youthful in a really genuine (if awkward to live through) way.


Thank you. I'm glad you noticed. I've been itching to try my hand at a realistic child character again, as I find them significantly more challenging. So hopefully Garner proves to be a success on that front. Anyway, anything you'd like changed with the CS?
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I am also not opposed to redoing a CS as the Jedi Knight in my backstory since you only have padawan applicants. Just let me know.
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@Fiscbryne I looked for a solid age range bc I was thinking it was 12, but everything I found on wookiepedia did not specify except for if you look at the younglings page, it talks about being in a clan from 4-8 and then The Gathering happens. I can age her up a year if it helps.

As for the spelling, I will go back through it tonight. I was typing that at like 2am, so I am sure there were mistakes.
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This still open to new players? Also, if so, what's the decision on "non-canon" races?
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