Hidden 3 yrs ago Post by rush99999
Raw
Avatar of rush99999

rush99999 Professional Oddball

Member Online

@ClocktowerEchos

Is magic a thing?
Hidden 3 yrs ago Post by ClocktowerEchos
Raw
OP
Avatar of ClocktowerEchos

ClocktowerEchos Come Fly With Me!

Member Seen 12 hrs ago

@DegenerateThree That'll be interesting, a member of a Great House working with the Choir.

@rush99999 There's no magic like wizard academies. There's folk lore with like hags and witches that are more superstition than actual magic users.
Hidden 3 yrs ago Post by John F Kennedy
Raw
Avatar of John F Kennedy

John F Kennedy The New Blood

Member Seen 1 yr ago

Hopefully I am not too late to the fun here, would you mind taking on another person? I was thinking about taking on maybe a lesser noble, someone with rumors about their heritage being related to some sort of hag in folklore, likely in support of Anyamara?
Hidden 3 yrs ago Post by BCTheEntity
Raw
Avatar of BCTheEntity

BCTheEntity m⊕r✞IS

Member Seen 22 hrs ago

Hey! I've been introduced to this game relatively recently, and I have a character in mind. Watch this space!
Hidden 3 yrs ago Post by ClocktowerEchos
Raw
OP
Avatar of ClocktowerEchos

ClocktowerEchos Come Fly With Me!

Member Seen 12 hrs ago

Just updated the two claimants. Now both of them looked up to the Crown Prince, Anyamara is less blood thirsty and more "ruthlessly efficient" and Sharles while kinder is also a lot less experienced and stubbornly believes that the Choir isn't a threat to the nation as opposed to Anyamara who can see the damage they will do not just to the nobles but to the rest of the country as well. And neither of them have any actual blood claim to the throne aside from "I was close with the Crown Prince therefor if you liked him then you should support me."

Sharles of Bremerant
Sharles is from the very distant cadet branch House Loyce-Bremerant and has no claim to the throne. However, he was very close with Crown Prince Daymian and the two were close companions and inseparable friends. He has rallied the former supporters of the Crown Prince, declaring that he will heal the realm with the kindess that separated Daymian from Colyt II. However, he has lived a sheltered upbringing and is widely seen as naive and too trusting for his own good yet stubbornly refuses to change his views. He advocates for giving power away from the Great Houses and nobles to the smallfolk. This combined with his misplaced belief that the Twilight Choir is not planning a revolution but only a peaceful petition even as their crimes mount has made some nobles uneasy and question the wisdom of such a pampered prince.

Anyamara the Bastard
Anyamara is the bastard daughter of the Mad King Colyt II and was also close with Crown Prince Daymian, looking up to his strength and his cunning and believing him to embody all of the qualities that would have made for the greatest king of Adanion in centuries. She is staunchly against the radical ideas of Sharles and places emphasis on traditional power structures and is known to generously reward those who follow her. Despite her bastard status, she still presses a claim to the throne and claims to be a new Queen Omera for this age and while inspiring and reassuring to some Great Houses, others have also found suspicion in her utterly ruthless methods and brutal retaliations against those who oppose her, conjuring up bloody memories of the Mad King.
Hidden 3 yrs ago Post by ClocktowerEchos
Raw
OP
Avatar of ClocktowerEchos

ClocktowerEchos Come Fly With Me!

Member Seen 12 hrs ago

Hopefully I am not too late to the fun here, would you mind taking on another person? I was thinking about taking on maybe a lesser noble, someone with rumors about their heritage being related to some sort of hag in folklore, likely in support of Anyamara?


Still open! I'd say try not to lesser of a noble otherwise the Great Houses might not have less interaction with you because of the rank difference. Its also fine to say that your house is believed to have been descendants of wild hags and tribal shamans prior to Adandum's conquest.
Hidden 3 yrs ago Post by Xol Raiyel
Raw
Avatar of Xol Raiyel

Xol Raiyel The Malevolent Devourer

Member Seen 5 mos ago

I have been summoned and will be answering the call! I'll get my babes finalized this weekend. Work has been hectic and left me mentally spent this week.
Hidden 3 yrs ago 3 yrs ago Post by BCTheEntity
Raw
Avatar of BCTheEntity

BCTheEntity m⊕r✞IS

Member Seen 22 hrs ago



Hidden 3 yrs ago Post by John F Kennedy
Raw
Avatar of John F Kennedy

John F Kennedy The New Blood

Member Seen 1 yr ago

@ClocktowerEchos would you like the character sheet and domain info here or PMed to you?
Hidden 3 yrs ago Post by Saix
Raw
Avatar of Saix

Saix

Member Seen 1 yr ago

@Pagemaster She has been updated. Let me know your thoughts!


Hidden 3 yrs ago Post by ClocktowerEchos
Raw
OP
Avatar of ClocktowerEchos

ClocktowerEchos Come Fly With Me!

Member Seen 12 hrs ago

@John F Kennedy Put it in here.
Hidden 3 yrs ago 3 yrs ago Post by DELETED32084
Raw

DELETED32084

Banned Seen 2 yrs ago






Hidden 3 yrs ago 3 yrs ago Post by John F Kennedy
Raw
Avatar of John F Kennedy

John F Kennedy The New Blood

Member Seen 1 yr ago

Name: Filiberta-Marie II of House Marietta
Titles: Duchess of Inge (pronounce ing-ay); Countess of Lake Bruna, Gotlinde upon Ingfried, and Diemut; Lady of Lake Bruna
Description: Filiberta-Marie is 38 years old, although she looks rather young for her age like many women of House Marietta. Her face is pale and her nose is thin, her lips are somewhat pronounced while her eyes remain deep set. She carries in aura of authority without any crown or headwear, letting her curling black and grey hair tumble down. She wears a long woolen cloak with white fur as a collar, usually with some sort of cotton dress of a deep and dark color beneath.

Claimant: Anyamara







Let me know if this is good enough or if more info is needed.

Hidden 3 yrs ago Post by ClocktowerEchos
Raw
OP
Avatar of ClocktowerEchos

ClocktowerEchos Come Fly With Me!

Member Seen 12 hrs ago

@John F Kennedy The information looks good, the only big thing is this bit:

Men of House Marietta are known for suffering unfortunate fates and untimely deaths, while the women of the house either have unnatural and unholy youth in which wrinkles never form, or they have wicked faces and crippled bodies. This is attributed often as a sign of the house's foul heritage.


This sounds a little too much like magic for what's in the RP, and more specifically the coinflip of having "unnatural and unholy youth" or looking like the Baba Yaga. My own suggestion would be to change it to something more tame that can be explained by a genetic mutation or disorder that because of a lack of knowledge of genetics is commonly attributed to magic (you don't need to directly say it if you don't want).

"Men of House Marietta are known to often be born sickly and more commonly than not possess frail bodies and weakened immune systems. The women of House Marietta however seem to be mostly immune with the large majority of them being born healthy. The women also often appear younger than one would expect of their age. Popular superstition of House Marietta among the smallfolk says that this is a sign of their foul lineage and that their blood is cursed with the women taking the vitality of the men while still in the womb some how."
Example


Realistically this could be explained by some sort of recessive trait that is expressed through the Y gene so only men get it. Looking younger in old age isn't that uncommon irl either and there could have been a degree of natural selection: House Marietta was known for being shady even in the old days meaning only the most beautiful would be able to break through the dark reputation. This has probably subsided since the start of political marriages though.
1x Like Like
Hidden 3 yrs ago Post by TheRedWatcher
Raw
Avatar of TheRedWatcher

TheRedWatcher Stabby Shadow

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

So Merta is finished, he's connected with @BCTheEntity character.
Hidden 3 yrs ago 3 yrs ago Post by ClocktowerEchos
Raw
OP
Avatar of ClocktowerEchos

ClocktowerEchos Come Fly With Me!

Member Seen 12 hrs ago

@TheRedWatcher Two quick questions.

1. How long ago was the Frozen Tears incorporated into the kingdom? This is more of me asking for a clarification, I don't need a specific time just something general, but the modern shape of the kingdom has been in place for about a thousand years now. My current understanding is that they've always lived there but because they're isolated by rough terrain and weather and because people didn't think they were anything more than just cold mountains, you weren't really "discovered" until more recently when all of the stuff happened.

2. What is your relation to House Vyjapult? Are they directly sworn to them? Or are they sworn to someone else who in turn is sworn to Vyjapult? Basically where are they on the pecking order?

Speaking of which, this is a more general thing I was going to add properly somewhere but I'll put it here for now. The social order of Adanion go:

King > Archduke > Duke > Count > Viscount & Knights > Smallfolk/Commoners

Pretty self explanatory, the reason that Viscount and Knight are at the same rank is because they're the two sides of a coin. Knights are the lowest rank of nobility, granted through acts of valor in combat and being knighted while Viscounts are the lowest rank of nobility given to people who have shown exceptional skill in management, leadership or administration in their local area. Basically they're the military and civilian title of the same rank. Uniquely, the rank of Viscount/Knight isn't hereditary and each new generation must be "confirmed" for the family to keep the title (happens more commonly among Knights) and the rank also doesn't usually give land (Landed Knights and Landed Viscounts do exist tho.)

The Great Houses are always Archdukes or especially powerful Dukes and while the path above is typically followed, there are also plenty of cases of Counts sworn directly to Archdukes or Dukes as the direct vassal of the King.

The term "lesser noble" is used to describe anyone who is a Count or Viscount/Knight as they have rulership of a fraction of the land that a duke or archduke does. Thus some of them have joined in with the Choir sort of out of revenge against the "upper nobles".
Hidden 3 yrs ago Post by TheRedWatcher
Raw
Avatar of TheRedWatcher

TheRedWatcher Stabby Shadow

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

@TheRedWatcher Two quick questions.

1. How long ago was the Frozen Tears incorporated into the kingdom? This is more of me asking for a clarification, I don't need a specific time just something general, but the modern shape of the kingdom has been in place for about a thousand years now. My current understanding is that they've always lived there but because they're isolated by rough terrain and weather and because people didn't think they were anything more than just cold mountains, you weren't really "discovered" until more recently when all of the stuff happened.

2. What is your relation to House Vyjapult? Are they directly sworn to them? Or are they sworn to someone else who in turn is sworn to Vyjapult? Basically where are they on the pecking order?


1) You would be correct. This was a more recent discovery. Since they were so remote, no one knew that anyone was living up there. The Great Grandfather of Varan is the one who discovered the Silver and the people of the mountains.

2) And they are directly sworn to the House Vyaput.
Hidden 3 yrs ago 3 yrs ago Post by ClocktowerEchos
Raw
OP
Avatar of ClocktowerEchos

ClocktowerEchos Come Fly With Me!

Member Seen 12 hrs ago

@TheRedWatcher Alright, I would suggest a slight editing of your background to make more reference to House Vyjapult since if the King directly contacted and brought you into the kingdom, they'd most likely make you directly crown vassals because of the silver. It could be that House Vyjapult, who had more exprience in the mountains than the troops of the crownlands, managed to send messengers and peacefully brought you into the fold with the promise of stopping the very greedy then-king from just taking all the silver his men could load on to a cart.

The other issue is House Echo claiming to be a Great House through the already existing Great House of Vyjapult but I have a possible explanation since normally Great Houses are not vassals of anyone but the King. One of the clauses in the agreement that brought them into the kingdom was that they would be "elevated to the same status as House Vyjapult", not really knowing they were a great house or what that even was. Knowing this, the Vyjapults agreed since they knew that in your isolation from the politics of the kingdom, you wouldn't really know how to press your privileges and rites as a Great House or that you even could. Plus it seems that Merta specifically wouldn't care for that stuff even if he knew the details. Plus your silver wealth would likely have played a part in your recognition.

Otherwise, I can't spot anything that really jumps at me and so I declare you Duke Merta of House Echo, Lord of the Frozen Tears! Try not to kill too many zealous preachers who go galivanting into your mountains for gods know what reason and be active in the story, even if you are an otherwise isolated people.

EDIT: I realized that I kept mispeling Vyapult as Vyjapult. I blame EU4 for this and country of Vijayanagar >_>
Hidden 3 yrs ago Post by TheRedWatcher
Raw
Avatar of TheRedWatcher

TheRedWatcher Stabby Shadow

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

@TheRedWatcher Alright, I would suggest a slight editing of your background to make more reference to House Vyjapult since if the King directly contacted and brought you into the kingdom, they'd most likely make you directly crown vassals because of the silver. It could be that House Vyjapult, who had more exprience in the mountains than the troops of the crownlands, managed to send messengers and peacefully brought you into the fold with the promise of stopping the very greedy then-king from just taking all the silver his men could load on to a cart.

The other issue is House Echo claiming to be a Great House through the already existing Great House of Vyjapult but I have a possible explanation since normally Great Houses are not vassals of anyone but the King. One of the clauses in the agreement that brought them into the kingdom was that they would be "elevated to the same status as House Vyjapult", not really knowing they were a great house or what that even was. Knowing this, the Vyjapults agreed since they knew that in your isolation from the politics of the kingdom, you wouldn't really know how to press your privileges and rites as a Great House or that you even could. Plus it seems that Merta specifically wouldn't care for that stuff even if he knew the details. Plus your silver wealth would likely have played a part in your recognition.

Otherwise, I can't spot anything that really jumps at me and so I declare you Duke Merta of House Echo, Lord of the Frozen Tears! Try not to kill too many zealous preachers who go galivanting into your mountains for gods know what reason and be active in the story, even if you are an otherwise isolated people.


Will do. BC and I were still working all of those sort of background stuff out, its why I hadn't added it, but I will.

And Awesome. We House of Echo do not kill people, the Deities hands take them.
Hidden 3 yrs ago Post by John F Kennedy
Raw
Avatar of John F Kennedy

John F Kennedy The New Blood

Member Seen 1 yr ago

@ClocktowerEchos

Thank you, I made the necessary amendments to the character sheet. I just used what you wrote if that is okay, because I felt like that was a very good way of keeping the same superstitious feeling while keeping it within your vision. If there is anything else you think of feel free to let me know.
↑ Top
© 2007-2024
BBCode Cheatsheet