@Lugubrious And I'm done.
Generally I'd prefer seeing new apps in the OOC and not straight into the area where accepted characters go. As for the sheet itself:
-The backstory ends with a non-WOL related cliffhanger, which isn't a huge deal but a little out of the norm
-The suggestion I gave you for bone magic shouldn't have been pasted into the power description since personality details don't need to go there. I'm more interested in how he creates them; do they poof in from nowhere? Drop from the sky? Appear in his hands? Rise up from the ground? And so forth
-Philanthropy is the act of charitable donation, not just being nice. Another word might suit that strength better
-Cold immunity is already mentioned under skeleton physiology, so you could replace it with something else. 'Incorruptible', maybe?
-Sans already appeared in the RP, so he doesn't need to be a kindred
