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@Lugubrious I'm going to play Papyrus as my 'second' character, I understand the character a bit...too much lol.


Sounds good to me. He has an excellent reason to be in Snowdin, as well.
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@Lugubrious Looking for his lazybones brother. Nyeheheh!
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@Lugubrious Just letting you know Laharl took as many Draugr spirits as he could get as 'Strikers'
NOTE: Also I know I didn't specifically say it in my post but he might as well grab the Chilfos if nobody else is, otherwise if someone does he wouldn't.
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And I'm almost done Papyrus too so yay!
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@Lugubrious Oh btw, how would you let Papyrus's Bone Magic work? He can magically generate bones, but usually it's of any shape and size. I just need help with this one thing than I'll do his power.
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The number is Strikers that Laharl can have is equal to his level.

If Papyrus's bone magic let's him make bones, that's what he can do. 'Any' size and shape is a bit much. Let's say that the bones have to be classically bone-shaped and can't be any bigger than trees or smaller than normal bones. Of course, since Papyrus is such an innocent and well-meaning soul, it's not like he'd push the limits of bonemaking anyway.
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@Lugubrious Alright so Laharl will take 2 Draugr. And out of frustration crush some into equipment (more like one).

So Papyrus can still shape them silly too though right? Like spelling cool dude. Also can he use it to heal himself?
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If he can do that in Undertale, my only concern is that characters don't have fagame-breaking or disproportionate abilities, and neither of those sounds like an issue.
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@Lugubrious Oh I get what you mean, I'm basing a lot of his abilities off things I can glean from the official undertale wiki as well as personal experience. I also used powerlisting to look up specific abilities tied to the characters. Right now I'm working on weaknesses.
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If he can do that in Undertale, my only concern is that characters don't have fagame-breaking or disproportionate abilities, and neither of those sounds like an issue.


Hm, well in the game no. It isn't very specific how he could heal. I mean I'd imagine normal healing doesn't work on him.
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Just remember that everyone starts with just one power, no matter how many one had before. And I'm sure healing would work on him, it fix broken bones all the time. Unless a certain type of healing specifically harms the undead.
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@Lugubrious His power is going to be his Special Attack, the bone magic seemed more a strength. So I'll just say it doesn't also heal him.
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I will say it is a strength because Papyrus mostly uses it to make obstacles, or for throwing.
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If it's a supernatural active ability, it's a Power. Strengths are passive stats or talents.
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@Lugubrious Hrm, it'll take me quite awhile to figure out a new strength. I want his power to be Blue Attack
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@Lugubrious Do you have any suggestions?
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Cooking? Confidence in bad cooking? Being heartwarming?
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@Lugubrious I put the bad cooking as a flaw, as he could improve if only he ate it. But confidence in general could be something. Anyways I'll be done like in the next couple hours.
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@Lugubrious And I'm done.
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@Lugubrious And I'm done.


Generally I'd prefer seeing new apps in the OOC and not straight into the area where accepted characters go. As for the sheet itself:
-The backstory ends with a non-WOL related cliffhanger, which isn't a huge deal but a little out of the norm
-The suggestion I gave you for bone magic shouldn't have been pasted into the power description since personality details don't need to go there. I'm more interested in how he creates them; do they poof in from nowhere? Drop from the sky? Appear in his hands? Rise up from the ground? And so forth
-Philanthropy is the act of charitable donation, not just being nice. Another word might suit that strength better
-Cold immunity is already mentioned under skeleton physiology, so you could replace it with something else. 'Incorruptible', maybe?
-Sans already appeared in the RP, so he doesn't need to be a kindred
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