This has way more interest then I thought. I suppose by now I should just realize I make absolutely banger top tier RP's, huh. Alright, lets see here...turns on Bloodborne OST

@Pyromania99
Akyasha, huh. Short simple, sweet and I find nothing wrong with the CS overall.

@Princess Peril
A vampire warrior, huh. I see I see. Overall, I find nothing objectionable here. Simple and sweet and nothing needs to be changed, I think.

@Cu Chulainn
Honestly, absolutely phenomenal work as always. I love everything about this. I'll shoot ya a question on discord but for now I see nothing that needs to be changed.

@VitaVitaAR
Smol vampire is a welcome addition. She behaves exactly as I'd expect a vampire too. That is to say, for now nothing needs to be changed.

@Dead Cruiser
Arrogance, even for a vampire hm? I'll assume that he has the standard fare of blood magic and some alchemy related stuff. I see no errors or anything that needs to be changed.

@Asuras
I'll wait until the whole thing is finished to render complete judgement, but just to make clear - You seem to be going for Enthrallment and charm as abilities, correct?

@Psyker Landshark
Oi, you can't just show up out of nowhere. Back ye, back!

Jokes aside, I approve. A regular old Darknight with good ol' blood magic and necromancy with a personality to match. I see nothing that needs changing here, good job.

@Click This
Good work as always. I see nothing wrong with Giselle.

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We seem to have quite a few blood magic users, huh? No one wants to do something fun with other forms of magic? Oh well, guess any other NPC vampire lords I make get to have fun with other stuff, heheh.

Anyways. Good work everyone, glad to see everyone is mostly hitting the mark with what I envisioned for the rascally little vampires we'll be playing as. Once everyone gets a CS in or one week from when the thread was posted I'll make my final judgements and acceptances.

For now, I'll probably be adding some NPC profiles to the Character tab over the course of the next few days. The Undead queen herself along with some NPC vampire lords that you can also, if given the opportunity, could resurrect.

hrm...tentative interest if not able to join just waitlist me. Definitely not gonna steal the concept of a vampire doctor from Vampyr tho no siree~

I'll wait until the whole thing is finished to render complete judgement, but just to make clear - You seem to be going for Enthrallment and charm as abilities, correct?

More or less, with some added counterspell-esque stuff. All things "locking down the board". A filthy Esper mtg player.

@Dead Cruiser
Arrogance, even for a vampire hm? I'll assume that he has the standard fare of blood magic and some alchemy related stuff. I see no errors or anything that needs to be change

Yeah, I'm hoping to use blood magic to achieve effects like vicissitude, or possibly later the coils of the dragon.

I guess I assumed I could have blood magic and one other aptitude. I almost went with terramancy but I wanted Muscle Magic real bad, haha.

I just went Blood Magic because you told me what I did was Blood Magic ;;

That said, I am tempted to focus more on Crimson Star stuff. I say 'tempted' because I'm honestly not keen in writing a third sheet.

I went blood magic because I was dead set on it from the start, eheh. Using to create mostly peaceful arts and crafts felt fun, too~

Once I settled on a basic concept, my whole idea was she just goes crazy with making weapons from blood magic and I didn't realize everyone else would also focus on it. ^^;

All these Blood Magic copers.

Rune:

Generally, I would say having some skill in blood magic plus a secondary affinity would be a good idea.

Also Rune:

"why everyone take blood magic"

Rune:

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Also Rune:

"why everyone take blood magic"

Did I say that? Tee-hee~

Anyways, for those interested, I added the Queen's name and the name of the other NPC vampire lords to the character tab along with a brief description of each. These are characters, any character you make should know at least in some capacity even if there is no real relationship there aside from just knowing they exist. You don't have to do anything with them, or even mention any relationship at all, but you can know them if their name comes up ICly.

Its ok, Akyasha's focus is Divine Magic because Blood Magic+....

Also summoning Ichor's Divine Monstrosities or something.

Decided to change up Aleksiya's powerset so she's not just using even more blood magic like my original intent.

@Rune_Alchemist

Since all other deities are long gone, would I be privvy to making one up, or would you want me to run it by you first? Their actually existing/having existed is unimportant, I just wanted a deity to name-drop for Luna's background.

@Asuras
Uh yeah, sure, if you could at least run the domains/aspects/what they were the deity of by me first that'd be great.

I doubt there would be a problem since aside from a few certain deities that are pretty important its pretty much free real estate. Off the top of my head Time/Cycles, Moon, Sun, Eternity/Stagnation, are the only domains that would be unworkable.

Just wanted to have Luna be a former priestess the a diety of water (specifically freshwater, rivers, streams, lakes, rain, etc). Didn't need to go into details beyond that, since it's ultimately just a former life (and former god, lol). Didn't know if you needed any particular aspects reserved or what not.

@Asuras

Yeah, that sounds fine. Go for it.

I've put some more thought into it, and seeing as there's so many folks raring to go with more thought in their ideas already than I have in mine, I'll just go ahead and bow out; Liked the concept, just not chugging how I thought I would mentally when I put myself time to think. Godspeed everyone!

Just wanted to have Luna be a former priestess the a diety of water (specifically freshwater, rivers, streams, lakes, rain, etc).

Useless goddess, no wonder they died

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Useless goddess, no wonder they died

Someone likes their rivers tainted and full of cholera.