Identity: Tomtabeg is one of the many children of a fairly wealthy merchant and trader. And as the 6th in line to inherit the family business he was always put on the back burner. He began life being trained into the role of a doctor-surgeon, a profession of enough class to suit his family's status but nothing that might threaten his sibling's firm positions as business mogul heirs and heiresses. However, he paid no mind to this, as he was perfectly happy flying under the family radar and spending his time getting into minor trouble and being an overall daredevil and speed freak. He found himself in the business of Cleaning more as a hobby than as a means to sustain his life. Given he has access to pretty major funds anyway. However, apart from an extensive suite of cybernetics and enhancements, he lives a seedy life. Preferring instead to live the life of a minor criminal than the boring luxury of a merchant's son. By his teen years, he was already extensively modified, both cosmetically and functionally. He naturally picked up the habit of the usage of many different 'mind-altering substances' and a fair few body-altering substances as well. He lives a hedonistic life of savage violence, white-knuckle action, and drug-fueled partying. One might find him somewhat entitled, given he was gifted with so many advantages in life and chose to blow them all on drugs, crime, and action; but he considers it to be a simple matter of rebellion and rejection from the lifestyle the was pre-determined he was meant to live.

Armaments: In a scrap Niid tends to go back to the basics, favoring a blessed heavy machine pistol and a large blessed machete. He wields them with superhuman speed and strength given his augmented body, which allows him to easily wield a rather monstrous E9-EWV, a .41 Magnum-firing machine pistol. Stuff that'll easily tear up unarmed civilians sure, but against the supernatural? It's hard to tell how effective his non-magic weapons and body will suffice. He supplements his basic weapons with a generous assortment of chemicals, including a wide range of combat stimulants, painkillers, psychedelics, and genuine medicinal concoctions. Finally, Niid carries a well-hidden relic in a small case affixed to his left breast with a rod of Asclepius symbol adorning it. Inside it is a CAT in the form of an ampoule. Niid theorizes that the liquid is some kind of form of liquid Vita. It's clear in colour and contains a full 5 doses of the substance. As well as the ampoule he keeps a handy auto-injector for the emergency administering of the substance. When injected into a patient's bloodstream the highly concentrated Vita is added to their Vita source, if ingested orally the results are unpredictable and likely hazardous. Niid has yet to use it on anything orally.

Abilities: Niid is an ex-street brawler and knows his way around a fight. As well as the typical advantages of augments (i.e. superhuman strength and reaction speed) Niid is capable of self-administering large doses or a wide variety of chemical substances he carries on his person. He can almost dose other people, and provide various first-aid as well as being reasonably skilled at Ghetto surgery. He also has access to an apartment and a slightly more-than-necessary amount of funding.

Other: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PRHCP-Czj0Y

Identity: Tomtabeg is one of the many children of a fairly wealthy merchant and trader. And as the 6th in line to inherit the family business he was always put on the back burner. He began life being trained into the role of a doctor-surgeon, a profession of enough class to suit his family's status but nothing that might threaten his sibling's firm positions as business mogul heirs and heiresses. However, he paid no mind to this, as he was perfectly happy flying under the family radar and spending his time getting into minor trouble and being an overall daredevil and speed freak. He found himself in the business of Cleaning more as a hobby than as a means to sustain his life. Given he has access to pretty major funds anyway. However, apart from an extensive suite of cybernetics and enhancements, he lives a seedy life. Preferring instead to live the life of a minor criminal than the boring luxury of a merchant's son. By his teen years, he was already extensively modified, both cosmetically and functionally. He naturally picked up the habit of the usage of many different 'mind-altering substances' and a fair few body-altering substances as well. He lives a hedonistic life of savage violence, white-knuckle action, and drug-fueled partying. One might find him somewhat entitled, given he was gifted with so many advantages in life and chose to blow them all on drugs, crime, and action; but he considers it to be a simple matter of rebellion and rejection from the lifestyle the was pre-determined he was meant to live.

Identity: Tomtabeg is one of the many children of a fairly wealthy merchant and trader. And as the 6th in line to inherit the family business he was always put on the back burner. He began life being trained into the role of a doctor-surgeon, a profession of enough class to suit his family's status but nothing that might threaten his sibling's firm positions as business mogul heirs and heiresses. However, he paid no mind to this, as he was perfectly happy flying under the family radar and spending his time getting into minor trouble and being an overall daredevil and speed freak.

He found himself in the business of Cleaning more as a hobby than as a means to sustain his life. Given he has access to pretty major funds anyway. However, apart from an extensive suite of cybernetics and enhancements, he lives a seedy life. Preferring instead to live the life of a minor criminal than the boring luxury of a merchant's son.

By his teen years, he was already extensively modified, both cosmetically and functionally. He naturally picked up the habit of the usage of many different 'mind-altering substances' and a fair few body-altering substances as well. He lives a hedonistic life of savage violence, white-knuckle action, and drug-fueled partying. One might find him somewhat entitled, given he was gifted with so many advantages in life and chose to blow them all on drugs, crime, and action; but he considers it to be a simple matter of rebellion and rejection from the lifestyle the was pre-determined he was meant to live.

Tomtabeg is one of the many children of a fairly wealthy merchant and trader.
This is fine; calling him a merchant and trader is a bit strange. Generally, if there's something to inherit, you'd phrase it in a way to denote it. Something like head of a company/corporation/conglomerate/chaebol. But it is also a weird anachronistic world where crown-magistrate is a position.

And as the 6th in line to inherit the family business he was always put on the back burner.
A weird way to phrase it. Probably remove the preposition (And) and add a comma to denote the dependent clause.

He began life being trained into the role of a doctor-surgeon, a profession of enough class to suit his family's status but nothing that might threaten his sibling's firm positions as business mogul heirs and heiresses.
This is an pretty long sentence that is meant to convey information, but gets pretty lost.

However, he paid no mind to this, as he was perfectly happy flying under the family radar and spending his time getting into minor trouble and being an overall daredevil and speed freak.
Another long sentence. When you compound long sentences after each other, they kind of get difficult to track as there's so much going on. Splitting it into two would make it a bit more readable.

He found himself in the business of Cleaning more as a hobby than as a means to sustain his life.
This one's fine. I don't like capitalizing cleaning because it just looks wrong to me, but it's whatever in the scheme of things.

Given he has access to pretty major funds anyway.
I'm pretty sure this is a fragment (I think it's a dependent clause; I'm not the most accurate at identifying them)

However, apart from an extensive suite of cybernetics and enhancements, he lives a seedy life.
This is probably fine. I preposition > dependent clause > independent clause sometimes and I've never actually checked if it's correct to do that.

Preferring instead to live the life of a minor criminal than the boring luxury of a merchant's son.
I think this is pretty weird construction. I think it's a dependent clause.

By his teen years, he was already extensively modified, both cosmetically and functionally.
This one's a comma splice, pretty sure.

He naturally picked up the habit of the usage of many different 'mind-altering substances' and a fair few body-altering substances as well.
You can shorten this a lot (see below). Also, it's pretty weird to scare quote mind-altering substances. It signifies that they weren't actually mind-altering substances.

He naturally picked up the habit of taking as many different mind-altering and body-altering substances as he could stomach.

He lives a hedonistic life of savage violence, white-knuckle action, and drug-fueled partying.
This one's really good. I like this line. It's like it punches me in the face with exactly what he is as a man (which is a very good thing).

One might find him somewhat entitled, given he was gifted with so many advantages in life and chose to blow them all on drugs, crime, and action; but he considers it to be a simple matter of rebellion and rejection from the lifestyle the was pre-determined he was meant to live.
This one is also kind of weird. It has a comma splice and restates some stuff. Making some changes smooths it out. Compare it to:

One might find him entitled given that he was gifted with so many advantages and still blew it all on drugs, crime, and action. Nid, however, considers his lifestyle to be a simple matter of rebellion from his predetermined upbringing.