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@Silverwind Blade: While there's certainly going to be plenty of dark elements and moments, I'm not looking to make something totally miserable without any hope.
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Damn I was looking to make everything worse
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Considering taking a crack at creating a character sheet. Aside from Gundam and AC, are there other inspirations? I'd like to find a mech design that fits in the universe.
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@LongSwordMain: Those are the main big influences, and if you need a little more every accepted sheet has a good idea of the range in looks they can have.
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Considering taking a crack at creating a character sheet. Aside from Gundam and AC, are there other inspirations? I'd like to find a mech design that fits in the universe.


I think the tl;dr in terms of design inspiration is real robots, but not to the extent of, say, Battletech. As long as it isn't close to a super robot or a brick on legs it should be fine. Of course, Vita could also say a brick on legs is fine, who knows?
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@Psyker Landshark sums it up pretty well.
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I saw that some Mobile Armors have a more insectoid design. Is it possible for AUGs to possess features of animals? For example, a mech with a tail and digitigrade legs?
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@LongSwordMain: The legs are pretty likely, you could install a tail but I'd recommend it have an actual purpose. Overall I wouldn't go too animal-like overall but like, digitigrade/reverse joint legs are definitely doable.
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@VitaVitaAR I have my mind set on something, but I'll OM it to you to see if it's okay. If it's not, then I'll start hunting for something else. ^^
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@Silverwind Blade: While there's certainly going to be plenty of dark elements and moments, I'm not looking to make something totally miserable without any hope.


Superb. I'll see if I can concoct a character sheet and submit it for your approval as soon as I can!
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Here we gooooo.
I had a different idea for appearance/race/etc originally, but I wasn't sure if it would fit the setting, and if 'altered' humans were allowed (i.e. a human who was anthro), so for now they're a normal human.
I was also undecided about which gender to play originally, as there's a lot of female characters, but I went for a guy in the end.
Also, I invented a lot of lore for people who live and work in space... I hope that's all right. I had a flash of inspiration and ran with it. If it's not, I can come up with something else.



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@The World: Okay, I'm going to admit I'm a liiiittle bit overwhelmed by the mecha specs, it's just a lot. ^^; I think my main issue at the moment is that it's too blatantly the Guren from Code Geass, and while I'm not going to be a stickler for not using canon inspiration/images for mecha this one just feels a bit too obvious in both appearance and weaponry.

@OwO: Accepted.

@Silverwind Blade: Okay, the two main things that stick out to me immediately are the fact the tech company is directly from UC Gundam you should change the name, and similarly to the first bio on this list it's the mecha waaay too obviously from a pre-existing property. At least scrubbing the big Gundam logo off and changing the color would go a long way.
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@VitaVitaAR Quick question while I work on my character's backstory: I take it humans haven't encountered any other sentient races in the galaxy, but what about animals? For example, have any lifeforms on planets colonized by mankind been more or less domesticated in a manner similar to cattle?
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Totally fair. Will change when back at a computer. Any general advice?
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May as well ask after that esper stuff, is that something PCs are allowed to have, or is that a story thing?

And for a mecha, is it fine if I just grab an AC6 build and use that?
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@Silverwind Blade: Okay, the two main things that stick out to me immediately are the fact the tech company is directly from UC Gundam you should change the name, and similarly to the first bio on this list it's the mecha waaay too obviously from a pre-existing property. At least scrubbing the big Gundam logo off and changing the color would go a long way.


I can certainly change the name; I left it the same as a homage, as my line of thinking was that this is (obviously) a separate setting from UC Gundam, so just borrowing the name would be a bit of fun. But I can change it.

Obviously, it's a lot harder to change the colour image of the mecha itself. I don't have the skills to edit it myself.
I can use the line art versions that don't show the markings and colours, and then add into the appearance what the colour scheme is, if that's better?

Short of that, I'd have to find something else to use that I like as much, and TBH, the Gundam aesthetic is my preferred one, especially the S-Gundam. And Gundam was mentioned specifically as one of the inspirations for this setting, so I thought it was a fairly safe bet.

If we aren't supposed to use mecha from pre-existing properties, that should probably be made clear.
It does also limit a lot of the mecha that can be used. Though it's not like this is going to ring any alarm bells with any corporate interests.
I've rewritten the entire backstory of the mecha as it is, and changed a lot of its' features and abilities from Gundam Sentinel, called it something different (but still a homage) and so on, in order to distance it from its' origin.
About the only thing that is the same is the appearance, and the weapons fit is vaguely the same, though without UC Gundam's terminology and background.
I'd look past the appearance, since we're going to be playing via text, and what it represents and can do narratively is a lot more important than how it looks. I just chose it because it looks cool and it's a personal favourite, and because everyone else had chosen things that look completely different from one another. There isn't exactly a coherent aesthetic at play here.

If that's not enough combined with the change of colour/art, I'll reluctantly find something else.

EDIT: Changed the corporation name, and the images used for the mecha to lineart. Added a completely different colour scheme in the description.
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@LongSwordMain: There hasn't been any domestication of any extraterrestrial lifeforms.

@The World: I'd try and make things a little more concise just because it was a lot and extensive technical specs in the context of an RP bio can be a bit overwhelming, but my main points of advice are just to try and change up the main weapon and its appearance enough to not basically just be the Guren. Maybe something plasma-based could fill a similar role?

@Kero: I won't say no to esper powers, but I'll be scrutinizing any bio with them pretty heavily.

As for using an AC6 build, that's fine.

@Silverwind Blade: It's just how obvious it was with being literally branded Gundam, I'll take a look at the altered bio in a bit.

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@Silverwind Blade: okay sorry for the delay, I think this is acceptable now.
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I think I've come up with a pretty good idea again, quite different than before, and will try to make it less "Here are the specs" when I get around to writing it. But that'll be a few days away at minimum, so I hope that's okay. If it's not, that's fine too.
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