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@The SavantYou don't need to apologise, I was joking too, haha.

No, I'm from China, I need a VPN for discord, cryy.

I'll keep up to date, don't worry!


That makes sense. I'll post updates here as well. To update you, this week is introduction posts (its a guideline) and I don't really expect the RP to get heavy till after the new year (American) because of Christmas and the new year being back to back. That's pretty much what is going on and the establishment of what they will be doing for their first mission which is in IC.
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Does ID#A2B4C7D9E1F3G5H8 have any special meaning? Clover should probably pick up on it if there's a sequence in there.
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Does ID#A2B4C7D9E1F3G5H8 have any special meaning? Clover should probably pick up on it if there's a sequence in there.


That is just the package identification number. If anything, Clover might understand that the sequence there means it is a highly classified and possibly highly explosive material/device.
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Clover:

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Hahaha, I'm thinking right now, she's kind of like Bender from Futurama.
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Bender is a great character. I feel like this RP is going to be a weird parody version of Guardians of the Galaxy if they were just mercenaries.
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I'm into that! I'm still thinking about what Clover's tie to Kalrith is and why they've been working together for so long. I want it to be some sort of shocking twist, haha.
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I'm into that! I'm still thinking about what Clover's tie to Kalrith is and why they've been working together for so long. I want it to be some sort of shocking twist, haha.


If you need help figuring that out or just want to throw ideas, you can do that here or in DMs. I do not mind! I love collaborating on things.
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Sure, I'll let it sit for a little while longer.
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You should post in the interest checks for more players. I want Clover to LIII-IIIVE.
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Neither of you advanced the plot or interacted with anyone, haha. I'm dropping out, Clover malfunctioned due to boredom and now lives on the moon colony with the merchants.
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Neither of you advanced the plot or interacted with anyone, haha. I'm dropping out, Clover malfunctioned due to boredom and now lives on the moon colony with the merchants.


I'm sorry to see you go Anothered.
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@CleverFox@Expendable

They chose to close the thread rather than continue with you two, haha.

I literally made a clear path for both of your characters to leave the ship and explore the moon but you both chose to confine them to separate parts of the ship. You both wrote some posts but none of them effected the story at all... one women is still walking around with a chip on her shoulder and the other is still thinking about food. You're supposed to be participating in a story, would you read a book or watch a show about a cynical security guard and a hungry pilot who don't interact with each other? You've practically made two static NPCs.

Here's a video about improv.
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They chose to close the thread rather than continue with you two, haha.

I literally made a clear path for both of your characters to leave the ship and explore the moon but you both chose to confine them to separate parts of the ship. You both wrote some posts but none of them effected the story at all... one women is still walking around with a chip on her shoulder and the other is still thinking about food. You're supposed to be participating in a story, would you read a book or watch a show about a cynical security guard and a hungry pilot who don't interact with each other? You've practically made two static NPCs.

Here's a video about improv.


I understand your feelings, but everyone role-plays differently. Not everyone is good at writing improv, especially in a role-play setting, and I will primarily blame myself for not providing guidance during the life of this role-play. I could have started it after the American holidays, implemented NPC posts, and gotten Kalrith to the ship faster. I sincerely apologize.

This roleplay has officially ended and will most likely not be continued or rerun for some time, if at all.
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I understand your feelings, but everyone role-plays differently. Not everyone is good at writing improv, especially in a role-play setting, and I will primarily blame myself for not providing guidance during the life of this role-play. I could have started it after the American holidays, implemented NPC posts, and gotten Kalrith to the ship faster. I sincerely apologize.

This roleplay has officially ended and will most likely not be continued or rerun for some time, if at all.


I had typed out my post while on vacation so it was my bad I figured there would be someone in the mess hall. Like I said if you make another roleplay I'll definitely join.
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I had typed out my post while on vacation so it was my bad I figured there would be someone in the mess hall. Like I said if you make another roleplay I'll definitely join.


There was no issue with individuals and their posts. I definitely should have added a little more guidance so you're alright! I'll keep that in mind if I ever make another Ecoven or Ecoven-like RP.
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@CleverFox@Expendable

They chose to close the thread rather than continue with you two, haha.

I literally made a clear path for both of your characters to leave the ship and explore the moon but you both chose to confine them to separate parts of the ship. You both wrote some posts but none of them effected the story at all... one women is still walking around with a chip on her shoulder and the other is still thinking about food. You're supposed to be participating in a story, would you read a book or watch a show about a cynical security guard and a hungry pilot who don't interact with each other? You've practically made two static NPCs.

Here's a video about improv.


And this is how you chose to interact with others.
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@The SavantYour world building is really good and I liked how you added the plot thread that everyone is in some way indebted to the captain, dubious or otherwise, haha. You gave us so much material to work with - just some people don't know what to do with it.

@ExpendableWith you as the pilot that ship was as good as a paper airplane, at least there's no gravity in space - no gravity, like your contribution to the story, haha.
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