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An Alternate Universe Naruto Story

I mean Rashomon summons gates, so I wouldn't say summoning inanimate objects is too far-fetched. IDK, maybe make it a group summoning of sorts like that three snakes summoned by multiple Oto and Suna ninjas during the chunin exam. A palace sounds like something that would need multiple people to summon unless they're just really top tier

@Randomguy

Well, I'm thinking the antagonists will be jinchurikis.

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@The SavantYour world building is really good and I liked how you added the plot thread that everyone is in some way indebted to the captain, dubious or otherwise, haha. You gave us so much material to work with - just some people don't know what to do with it.

@ExpendableWith you as the pilot that ship was as good as a paper airplane, at least there's no gravity in space - no gravity, like your contribution to the story, haha.

An Alternate Universe Naruto Story

I could post! Sorry, I didn't realize you were waiting!

By the way, I'm just thinking about the antagonists... would a summoning jutsu that conjures a palace be too absurd?

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@CleverFox@Expendable

They chose to close the thread rather than continue with you two, haha.

I literally made a clear path for both of your characters to leave the ship and explore the moon but you both chose to confine them to separate parts of the ship. You both wrote some posts but none of them effected the story at all... one women is still walking around with a chip on her shoulder and the other is still thinking about food. You're supposed to be participating in a story, would you read a book or watch a show about a cynical security guard and a hungry pilot who don't interact with each other? You've practically made two static NPCs.

Here's a video about improv.

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Neither of you advanced the plot or interacted with anyone, haha. I'm dropping out, Clover malfunctioned due to boredom and now lives on the moon colony with the merchants.

POKeMON: A Mystery - Always Open

Maybe the staff would have tried to evacuate, up to you

POKeMON: A Mystery - Always Open

I'd imagine this is what running a passenger ship in space might be like.

@Nyxella

Ooh, I'd love to live to experience that. I'd go even if it meant never coming back, like the colonial era.

An Alternate Universe Naruto Story

I think Lin is done stirring trouble for today, haha.

!@#DEADKIDCLUB%&?

Yeah, so cool! Love it. I'll post in the IC tomorrow!

POKeMON: A Mystery - Always Open

Wow, some of these ideas are terrifying, haha - but they're all amazing! Lead us to them!