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@The Savant Yess, that's correct. She is a block off from the Kairo Skyscraper, and will be slowly making her way towards that particular building if she doesn't meet any resistance.
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@The Savant I'm good with going with your idea then. And yeah, I'm not expecting a long conversation, if both of them are willing to be straightforwards.
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Will post up tomorrow.

Coming off of a 15 hr work day.
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Will post up tomorrow.

Coming off of a 15 hr work day.


Please rest if you can! <3
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@Little Bird Yep, like Sporko said, take lots of rest. Looking forward to your post when you feel rested. :)
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Fortune favors the bold.
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@LanaStorm Looking good! Very stylish post. ^_^ The move into Ragged Gavel looks good as well, very smooth.
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Oh she and Harriet would get along! Both mammas ahaha
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@evierose I love it, she's great. There's only two things I would want to address.

1. Nocturnia is sealed off from the world, so instead of moving from some outside town to Nocturnia, you could say they moved from one district in nocturnia to another.

2. I would like to use these mechanics and limits instead for your powers. If you can agree with these, I think we can go ahead with your power. She will be ideal for short fights. What do you think of what I've written below?

Metabolism Mechanics

Heavy-hitting = Five pieces of food

Allows her to hit as hard as cracking a brick wall, or cracking a ribcage. Allows one hit before her reserves deplete. Then must eat more food to heavy hit again.

Speed = Two pieces of food

Allows her to move as fast as a bullet for about five seconds. When the five seconds pass, she returns to normal speed and her reserves are depleted. While she has fast speed for those five seconds, any injury that is non-lethal becomes healed. Must eat more food to become fast again.

Over-eating = Twenty pieces of food per day

If she reaches at or over twenty pieces of food, she will become bloated and immobile, or have great difficulty moving.
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> She loved (loves?) a police officer, her adopted brother, who is stationed in Ragged Gravel. She secretly bore his child

Just like my Japanese animes.
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1. Nocturnia is sealed off from the world, so instead of moving from some outside town to Nocturnia, you could say they moved from one district in nocturnia to another.


I wasn't sure how far back the isolation went, but yeah, this doesn't affect anything.

2. I would like to use these mechanics and limits instead for your powers. If you can agree with these, I think we can go ahead with your power. She will be ideal for short fights. What do you think of what I've written below?

Metabolism Mechanics

Heavy-hitting = Five pieces of food

Allows her to hit as hard as cracking a brick wall, or cracking a ribcage. Allows one hit before her reserves deplete. Then must eat more food to heavy hit again.

Speed = Two pieces of food

Allows her to move as fast as a bullet for about five seconds. When the five seconds pass, she returns to normal speed and her reserves are depleted. While she has fast speed for those five seconds, any injury that is non-lethal becomes healed. Must eat more food to become fast again.

Over-eating = Twenty pieces of food per day

If she reaches at or over twenty pieces of food, she will become bloated and immobile, or have great difficulty moving.


Definitely. This is much easier to track than what I had.

I'll make the changes and post her to CHAR
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@evierose Sounds good! After she's in the character tab, I'll see about making a short IC intro for her. :)
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@ERode I'll respond tonight or tomorrow. My work decided to put me on multiple routes and trips from 6:30 AM start to 10 PM end. With only 2-4 hours breaks depending on the day. I have a light day tomorrow so I'll definitely be able to get back on track with you.
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Before I get started, a military man's gotta have his team. If I may have NPCs.

The Squad












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@Little Bird The squad looks great! Darian seems to have a missing picture, though. Once that is fixed, I can add them to the NPC list.
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Fixed.

Yes, I'm face claiming Barret from FFVII. Lol
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@ERodeTag-a-runi!
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I should make NPC/filler characters.
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