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Welcome to the Voting and Feedback round for MFP#13!


Voting and Feedback guidelines

  • Please take your time to read through all the entries before voting for your favourite work. The reasons you base your vote on are up to you, as long the vote isn’t based on whether or not you like the author.
    It would be nice if you could share why you voted for a specific work.
  • Giving feedback is optional but highly encouraged. When giving feedback you should be respectful and constructive. It’s good to point out any flaws or the things you feel could be improved or why you didn't like something, but don’t be mean.
    Make sure to point out what you liked or what appreciated in the entry too.
  • Contestants may (and are encouraged to) vote and/or give feedback for the other entries but shouldn’t vote for their own entry. If contestants wish to withhold a vote and only give feedback, that is good too.
  • The entries are anonymous unless the writer asked for having their name added. That being said, writers may claim their work at any time during or after the voting period.
  • The entry with the most votes will win, but in case of a tie a Contest Mod will cast the tie-breaker vote.
  • You can vote for entries and post your feedback in this thread, but if you rather have your vote and/or feedback be anonymous you can PM it to @Loksfjoer.
  • The voting period deadline is March 20th, 9:00 CET, which is 8:00 server time (both times are in a.m.).





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I just read them all once. I need to re-read them, again before I cast my vote. So far, I have really enjoyed the whole lot.

Good job, everyone!
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This is probably a non-issue and I don't know if this has been discussed already, but taking a look at this after having not been involved in the contest for so long, I just realized: would it help to have the theme and prompt listed as a reminder of what they were somewhere? Mostly just in case someone is coming here after having not seen the original post for this round of the competition.
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hmmm i better slap down a vote before its too late. uhhh..
I think im voting for "unlucky day, lucky girl." idk it just called to me- it made me wanna learn more about the characters, I suppose- made me want to dive into it's world.
like, what is mia and liam's relationship to each other? and a ton of other questions it made me wanna ask. very intriguing indeed <3
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I vote for number 4, "Luck". I found the descriptions to be vivid and interesting, and the use of "Lucky 13" as a name for a ship to be really creative. Great job all!
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This is probably a non-issue and I don't know if this has been discussed already, but taking a look at this after having not been involved in the contest for so long, I just realized: would it help to have the theme and prompt listed as a reminder of what they were somewhere? Mostly just in case someone is coming here after having not seen the original post for this round of the competition.


That is a good point and I will keep this in mind for future contests.
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Great entries. I went back and forth between two and while one was great in its handling of the sometimes mundane nature of luck and how a streak of bad luck can really derail an entire day (I really liked this entry), the other used the prompt of 'the meeting' much better. I cast my vote for Superstition Kills.
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After reading these, two stood out the most in my mind; they kept me in a maze of wonderment and infiltrated my daily thoughts at random: Superstition Kills and The theme is you.

& honestly, I think the brevity of The theme is you is what captured me most. However, the actual theme, story, and plot that kept nagging at me are in Superstition Kills.

Euthanasia used to keep me up at night as a child. It was a very hard concept for me to accept and understand. It made me want to cry, and every time I looked at any animal, I had this lingering phantom telling me that this animal could be euthanized so love it with all you’ve got. It made me feel terribly sick sometimes. . .

So, without further ado, I cast my vote for Superstition Kills.
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Hidden 11 days ago Post by Loksfjoer
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Today is the day of the deadline and 4 people voted.

Superstition Kills wins this round! Congratulations @leopard!
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Congratulations, now it's over and I really could not of voted for myself lol.

I wrote Luck.
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@PrinceAlexus, Luck is really good! I was going to say it was in my Top 3. I think it is well written, like your other entry. However, as I was humming about it, I think I had a hard time relating to the ships, as opposed to more personable characters. With that said, it reminded me more of a space fairytale in that aspect. Sooo… take that with a grain of a salt; I’m just a stay-at-home mom with a business degree.
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@PrinceAlexus, Luck is really good! I was going to say it was in my Top 3. I think it is well written, like your other entry. However, as I was humming about it, I think I had a hard time relating to the ships, as opposed to more personable characters. With that said, it reminded me more of a space fairytale in that aspect. Sooo… take that with a grain of a salt; I’m just a stay-at-home mom with a business degree.


It was somewhat od a rush so I kinda was not able to really fine tune things, I just had to commit to a idea and roll the dice. It came out pretty good for a rush job though!
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@PrinceAlexus, that’s way better than I did! Every time a new context is posted, I feel like a failure whenever I don’t enter. Keep up the excellent work!
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@PrinceAlexus, that’s way better than I did! Every time a new context is posted, I feel like a failure whenever I don’t enter. Keep up the excellent work!


Your not, some things might not vibe, or just not have time. :)

I just got... Lucky. Lol. And I managed to have a shower idea that I could turn it off a story and frame it around luck on both sides of a pursuit.
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