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Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by MagusDream
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OK, Blu. I've edited it. What do you think of it now?
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Magus, I think it still needs to be explained how Akihara can inflict the curses on a target. Additionally, how long does a curse last and what are the drawbacks/weaknesses of a curse.
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There, now I think that's all...
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FoxFireOfDawn Back in business!

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I just got on today, sorry. >_< I was busy with stuff. I'll begin on a character now! I might put the scraps up, then edit when I get on my computer, since I'm on my tablet right now.
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Magus, yup, everything's good now. Love the creativity of that Soul Weapon btw :D

FoxFire, nice to see you're still interested in putting up an app; good luck.
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"Just continue on your way, going to wherever, having a nice time there when I don't really care and all...Just keep away and we will be good friends."

Personal Information
Name: Ayame Ishikawa
Alias(es): Aya, Ishi
Sex: Female
Age: 19
Date of Birth: October 6th
Family: Father: Dead, Name is Hiroyuki Ishikawa. Mother: Dead, Name is Kotori Ishikawa. Older Sister: Alive, Name is Izumi Ishikawa.
Occupation: College Student and a waitress at her sister's cafe.
Partner: -open-
Personality: Ayame is much more of a Silent stalker type of person who when angered, can cause serious damage. She is rarely angered and prefers to be alone than in a group. She talks to herself often and when left alone for too long, can end up going slightly mad. She hates the fact that the world has unneeded, hypocritical thoughts that can always be avoided. Ayame wishes that she could do something about it, but she knows it would cause other, unnecessary problems.



Combat Information
Strength(s): Faster reaction time; fighting is 'unique'; resilient to harsh weather,
Weakness(es): Sensitive to light; claustrophobic, gets lost easily
Other Tool(s): Phone, small black diary,Pocket knife



Additional Information
Theme song:
She loves animals,especially cats, and has a sweet tooth.
((I'll edit if needed))
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Sorry for taking long!
I finally finished my Character sheet! :D
woohoo!
Tell me if anything needs to be changed~
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FoxFire, no changes needed (although your icon picture is broken lol)

Kautalya, only things that need fixing is that you haven't described how Kali-Yuga actually looks like and in the biography, change black mail to black letter. Otherwise, great app.

Rumiko, I noticed you fixed the Amp technique so you're all good now.

That's all for now. Once Grey completes his app, I'll start the app reviewing process. Be afraid...
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Oh, god. .-. I get so nervous with the waiting. >.<

BTW, I changed my character's name and also put the kanji for her name, since it looked cool. :P So you take note on it.
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Jinkies I can't believe I forgot a pic of the weapon. Edited! :D
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Haru, indeed, adding the kanji does look cool.

Kautalya, you're all set now.
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All I gotta add is my Soul Weapon, which I have basically planned out but am having a hard time putting to words, but before that I have to ask: What do you mean when you say that the badge 'stabilizes' the soul? Is that like limiting it so it doesn't go out of control? Or something else entirely?

Also, I might add a written our Personality because I feel uneasy whenever I look at that 'list' I made.
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Basically, since the soul's power has been awakened from the burning of a black letter, it needs to be stabilize or the soul will "burn out" sort of speak and destroy the agent's physical body. The badge does indeed limit the agent's power greatly; especially so when the agent is alive. When the agent enters the temporary death state, the badge keeps the agent's spirit pinned to the material world so the death won't become permanent.
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OK, I've got it. Anyway, had to edit somethings and change his theme song.
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I'm done, except maybe for Soul Weapon Techniques
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Magus, noted.

Grey, you can add techniques later if you'd like (that is assuming you'll be accepted of course).
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Out of curiousity, how many spots are there?
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So, now you'll start judgment on us petty mortals? D:
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Grey, honestly, there isn't a set number yet. And I have a feeling it'll be difficult for me to pick since, from what I read, each app has a lot of great qualities. (Although I do wish there were more social characters)

Haru, I think so if Grey is done.
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Hmm.

I see I will go through a bit of anxiety before the day is over it seems.

Oh well. Whether I am accepted or not, it was fun making a CS for this rp.

I await this god of this realm's judgement and hope that he is a merciful one.
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