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I am sorry, but I am not comfortable with a portion of the backstory, near the end. The fact that she was raped and it is essentially just a side-note in her backstory makes me very uncomfortable.

In addition, while this RP is serious and I do not mind some darker elements(not enough to negate light elements and comic relief, however), I feel that element is too dark.
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Really interested.
I have noticed that you're cutting off people with darker back stories. Challenge accepted.
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That's fine. I can get rid of it if you'd like.
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@DOCTOR_TRAPEZOID: I am willing to accept some dark elements, but I have a limit and I do not approve of elements such as what I recently declined just being footnotes even in works with darker tones.

@Corpsylvania: For future reference, please do not use something like that as a footnote.

It has to be removed from the bio.
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It's gone now.
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May I join? If so, do I have to make a character sheet for both the doll master and the doll? I'd prefer to make just the doll, if that's fine.
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@Corpsylvania: I'll look it over again in a moment.

@Dante: You have to make both. I want a balance of Dolls and Masters so we don't have Dolls without Doll Masters, or Masters without Dolls.
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Ok. I'll work on it sometime soon. Thanks!
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I dunno, a masterless Doll could be an interesting character concept. Gives a kinda ronin like feel.
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Doll:

Name: Xenophane
Gender: Male
Appearance: http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110210000911/rift/images/4/48/Assassin.jpg
Personality: Xenophane is a doll who seems emotionless at first glance. He is actually thoughtful and sometimes kind, but he doesn't show it very often. To his enemies, he is cruel and calculating. He enjoys figuring out his opponents weaknesses and using it against them. He is sometimes referred to as "The Desert Reaper" because of his cold nature.
Abilities: Xenophane uses sand to kill his enemies. He can turn parts of his body into sand and then manipulate that sand. He loses control after the sand gets 30 yards or more away. He controls the sand using his mind and will. He can also turn the sand back into body parts. He enjoys leaving the opponent in severe pain and eventual death.
Weapons: His body. He can turn his body into sand and manipulate it at will. He can compact the sand making it hard or sharp.
Misc: Xenophane has occasionally been know to kill the possessed person as well as the possessor, even when he could have saved the human. He believes that humans who were once possessed have a greater risk of being possessed again.
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Dolls can't act in the world without an anchor, and if their Master is killed, they die. There are ways to sever a Doll and a Doll Master without either dying, but the Doll is forced back to where they came from.

Edit: I would like some more information on what kind of gas he can use and how he makes them, as well as how much exposure is required for it to be lethal.
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Alright, um, Corpsylvania?

The issue I'm seeing currently is that it's a bit strange that anyone would train their child to fight Marionettes when almost no-one but Doll Hunters believes they exist.
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So, I'm a bit confused. We make a Doll, and a Doll-Master, and then our characters are each separately matched up?
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Yes. I don't want people stuck RPing with themselves, eh-heh.
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So you're saying that NO ONE other than doll hunters are suspicious of the existence of marionettes?
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Some might be suspicious, I just doubt there would be anyone putting people through combat training for it. ^^;
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It's not necessarily for hunting them specifically. It's just basic training so if one ever did attack she wouldn't go down so easily and have a basic knowledge of how to fight and defend herself.
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It's more likely any combat training would be primarily for other concerns, at least, even if part of it is in case Marionettes are real.
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A master character who acts more like a servant himself!
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Doll Master
Name: Clifford Blake
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Little over 6ft in height.

Personality: A patient and organised sort of individual. He’s a hard worker, and is very passionate about his work…he always acts much more subservient to others, and can even make a beggar feel like a king.
Backstory: Since his early childhood, he had been taken in to work as a servant for a certain family of wealth…due to his general success, and observed work ethic; he was chosen to be trained to eventually replace the head butler, upon the elder man’s retirement. As live in help, he is still given a fair amount in wages to do with as he pleases...he is currently buying more parts to fix up and complete his project automobile, with a help from the more mechanically talented staff.
Skills:
-baby/child/pet/elder sitting
-cooking
-cleaning
-first aid
-gardening
-handgun skills (minor)
-household staff management, organizational skills, event/day planning
-repair (minor)
-tailoring
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