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Sorry for the delay, studying and traveling while being sick is rough.
I saw you made some of the changes, but the fire resistance still bugs me - if I can advise you, you should put in a Rank system there.
For example - Immune to (inset some pretty low level ) Rank, but if the user is skilled and has great mastery, it can still be dangerous.
Or something like that, that is how I balance out things. Other than that, I am satisfied with the changes.
I saw you made some of the changes, but the fire resistance still bugs me - if I can advise you, you should put in a Rank system there.
For example - Immune to (inset some pretty low level ) Rank, but if the user is skilled and has great mastery, it can still be dangerous.
Or something like that, that is how I balance out things. Other than that, I am satisfied with the changes.
Nytefall The Old One
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gerontis i sent you a pm about a CS review 2 days ago. not nagging just could you check it over
j8cob The Gr8est / The J8est
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It's taken me a while, but I guess I have the time so I'll review the character you sent me via PM.
Kekkai Genkai/Jutsu:
I've seen blood release before, and so far this is one of the stronger variants. And quite frankly, this is the biggest issue. Not only is it versatile, it is also powerful in all the departments it dabbles in. I would suggest, personally, that it can just be utilized as a weapon itself. The acidic, explosive, or defensive properties of it make it too strong for a genin to possess. We had a blood release user before that could make blood acidic or explosive, and he was S-ranked. So tone down the KG (and the consequent jutsu).
Also on the note of the KG, since you put it as the chakra release as well, does this mean that she cannot use other jutsu or is she limited to only her blood release?
Traits/Skills:
I don't have any real issues with the skills, but I don't think a genin should have Killing Intent. I believe the other GMs would agree with that as well, so I would suggest removal. Besides, a genin doesn't need it nor is a genin terrifying enough to use it. :p
History/Personality:
Both are a bit thin, and I would prefer if they were improved. Though that isn't a requirement, I think it would be better if the character was more fleshed out and had more detail.
Fix those up and I'll take a look at it again.
Kekkai Genkai/Jutsu:
I've seen blood release before, and so far this is one of the stronger variants. And quite frankly, this is the biggest issue. Not only is it versatile, it is also powerful in all the departments it dabbles in. I would suggest, personally, that it can just be utilized as a weapon itself. The acidic, explosive, or defensive properties of it make it too strong for a genin to possess. We had a blood release user before that could make blood acidic or explosive, and he was S-ranked. So tone down the KG (and the consequent jutsu).
Also on the note of the KG, since you put it as the chakra release as well, does this mean that she cannot use other jutsu or is she limited to only her blood release?
Traits/Skills:
I don't have any real issues with the skills, but I don't think a genin should have Killing Intent. I believe the other GMs would agree with that as well, so I would suggest removal. Besides, a genin doesn't need it nor is a genin terrifying enough to use it. :p
History/Personality:
Both are a bit thin, and I would prefer if they were improved. Though that isn't a requirement, I think it would be better if the character was more fleshed out and had more detail.
Fix those up and I'll take a look at it again.
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Gamer geek said The real reason for posting was to ask a question. If Kato was to use dirt swarm on Satoshi would Satoshi be able to see the chakra being fed through the ground or short distances away? I know that being a Earth user like Kato he probably is used to having dirt in his face but I still feel that he doesn't have a jutsu specifically like Dirt Swarm where small dirt particles are continuously confronting your face, therefore making it relatively difficult for Satoshi to see in the swarm. Just wanted to know before I progressed onward with a post.
@Gero This question is still up for grabs.
In reaction, please be mindful that most members of the Gm staff are currently extremely busy with real life issues. Try and PM other members of the staff.
Also, Gamer ... just post and you will find out.
We are only humans, too.
Also, Gamer ... just post and you will find out.
We are only humans, too.
Gamer geek
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Posted. Hopefully I wasn't being to "pushy" with forming the plan. I wasn't sure if everyone wanted to spend 4 posts each discussing a plan.
BTW...move over Shikamaru...we got a new tactical genius and his name is Kato...uhh..Kato...something.
BTW...move over Shikamaru...we got a new tactical genius and his name is Kato...uhh..Kato...something.
Shadowcatcher Carelessly Making History
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whoever makes the 300th post and the 500th post in the IC and the OOC will get a very big, very long, very awkward, and very squishy hug from me.
that sounded so provocative.
ive warned all of you. beware.
that sounded so provocative.
ive warned all of you. beware.
j8cob The Gr8est / The J8est
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I got the 1000th post in the original IC, so... I don't need any more milestones. XD
(especially if they're hugs)
(especially if they're hugs)
Little Alice
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And when I claimed you? :3
Gamer geek said
Posted. Hopefully I wasn't being to "pushy" with forming the plan. I wasn't sure if everyone wanted to spend 4 posts each discussing a plan.BTW...move over Shikamaru...we got a new tactical genius and his name is Kato...uhh..Kato...something.
I'm down with it, Nadra will follow the plan quietly and orderly if it makes sense to her. Besides they already wasted a lot of time talking about this plan lol.
Little Alice
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Due being very busy as some of the other crew members also have a very busy schedule, the next release of the Breakdown is postponed to next weekend. Hopefully it will be a bit better with all the busy schedules everybody has currently.
Little Alice
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Nytefall, I will review your CS tomorrow. Was going to do it today, but had to finish some things. If anybody else wants their CS to be reviewed, please keep the GM's updated.
Yayaya.
Yayaya.
AlterNathan
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Roran,
I'm a little confused.
your last two post have some contradictions.
Both Kensuke Nimatsu
One post its team 7
the other post team 6
Also, you included the character of Agent 57 in one post
and not in the other.
you posted the second post before I reacted to the first post (what i was just about to do)
could you fix this (or explain me why and how) and tell me to react to what post please?
I'm a little confused.
your last two post have some contradictions.
Both Kensuke Nimatsu
One post its team 7
the other post team 6
Also, you included the character of Agent 57 in one post
and not in the other.
you posted the second post before I reacted to the first post (what i was just about to do)
could you fix this (or explain me why and how) and tell me to react to what post please?
Gamer geek
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Anyone hear anything from forcedsmile or what ever his name was. It says that they haven't posted in a week so I'm wondering if they know that they need to post.
Gowi if your waiting for them you might as well just post. I don't think posting order matters too much on this RP.
Gowi if your waiting for them you might as well just post. I don't think posting order matters too much on this RP.
Shadowcatcher Carelessly Making History
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am I the only one left in the world who likes hugs?
Shadowcatcher said
am I the only one left in the world who likes hugs?
nope
Shadowcatcher Carelessly Making History
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Marrow said
nope
omg you like hugs too!!!!
*hugs*
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