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This took up too much space so I turned it into this :3
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Eh, I like the idea but it needs some work. For one, the History bit, remember this is a new timeline, you gotta think up your own reason for their establishment/existence, be it a ab original character being the founder, or whatever. Emperor Palptine's sith identity is mostly left unknown to almost everyone in the galaxy, save for a select few. Also 20 ABY would be the incorrect time, it's actually 1 BBY and to note that the dating system for the rp is 20 A.F.(After Fall)

So, you're going to have to do some reworking to make your faction fit in the new setting.
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K I'll work on it
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Alright this is my fixed version :3 (Yes there is non-canonness but who cares? .3.)

Flag: The empire's emblem but with lightsabers instead of the inner stripes.
Nation Name: Reborn splinter movement.
Government Type: Dictatorship/Splinter movement
Capital: Vengeance (Jerec's Super Star Destroyer)
Home Sector: Outer rim.
Holdings:N/A
Leader(s): Udo Thane
Persons of Importance: Yrias Nightshade, and Fon Ka`Taramas.
Military:
REBORN DIVISIONS:

Reborn: The weakest division. Reborn had minimal strength in the Force they carried a simple red lightsaber like the other Reborn and their cloaks were yellow and orange. They were proficient in Fast and Medium Styles of combat, but were not skilled enough to defeat a Jedi one-on-one.

Acrobats: They wore blue, and specialized in using the Force to jump and being mobile. Reborn Acrobats were trained in the Medium Style of lightsaber combat.

Force Users: They wore red over their cream colored vests. Their specialization was in pure Force abilities, such as Force push and Force pull rather than saber skills or unarmed combat skills. The Medium Style was their preferred choice if they were forced to engage in a lightsaber duel.
Fencers: Skilled and trained specially in the Fast and Medium Styles with their red sabers; they also had reasonable skill with the Force. They could telekinetically throw their lightsabers with great accuracy. Their clothes were green. The average Jedi could defeat a Reborn Fencer, but not without difficulty.

Bosses: Wore blue and red robes. They were a combination of all the different Reborn divisions. They were the highest level, the elite of the organization. They were capable of using the Force strongly, and countering a Jedi's blade skills with the Fast, Medium and Strong Styles of lightsaber combat. They were Desann's best men along with Galak's Shadowtroopers.

NAVY: All Terrain Rapid Deployment Pod, TIE/LN starfighter, TIE/sa bomber, Aggressor-class Star Destroyer, Immobilizer 418 cruiser, CR-12 corvette, Etc
ARMY: Reborns, Shadowtroopers, Various mercenary's, Various assassins, Sith inquisitors, Darktroopers, Many dark jedi, reborn cultists, and Mark 1 droid walkers.

History: After Kyle Katarn and Jan Ors disbanded the cultists, some reborn and cultist that still had their force powers fled to the outer rim away from the rebels. Soon after one of the highest ranking cultists took power "Udo Thane" After many years of hiding the reborn and cultist have suddenly appeared again, Skirmishes with the black hand, and the empire of the hand are common while they pose a serious threat to the galaxy again.

Other: The reborn splinter cell returned in 1 BBY with the help of Fon Ka`Taramas
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A little better, but there still some problem's with the history. Kyle Katarn and Jan Ors would most likely not be where they were in canon. Remember the instructions, you gotta think real hard on this, how and when were they founded in the time after the Empire's fall. While I did say the wiki would be a good source in the rp, but most of the time, not in this case, you will have to make something up, their new history is up to you, don't just copy something that wouldn't exactly fit with the setting.
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Well back to the drawing board
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I'm changing kyle katarn and jan ors to Jaden korr because he's the one ACTUALLY disbanded them in JC
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Jaden korr wouldn't work either. Tmeline-wise, this rp would take place in A New Hope. Just make up your own characters, again, be creative, give the Reborn a new and interesting backstory.
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K *Takes out marker* To the drawing board again!
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Flag: The empire's emblem but with lightsabers instead of the inner stripes.
Nation Name: Reborn splinter movement.
Government Type: Dictatorship/Splinter movement
Capital: Vengeance (Jerec's Super Star Destroyer)
Home Sector: Outer rim.
Holdings:N/A
Leader(s): Udo Thane, and Yrias Nightshade
Persons of Importance: Fon Ka`Taramas.
Military:

NAVY: All Terrain Rapid Deployment Pod, TIE/LN starfighter, TIE/sa bomber, Aggressor-class Star Destroyer, Immobilizer 418 cruiser, CR-12 corvette, Etc
ARMY: Reborns, Shadowtroopers, Various mercenary's, Various assassins, Sith inquisitors, Darktroopers, Many dark jedi, reborn cultists, and Mark 1 droid walkers.

History: During "Reborn movement" Many dark jedi started to violently revolt against the empire, with the leaders "Udo Thane" and his wife "Yrias Nightshade"... Many imperials were violently killed by the Dark jedi, but eventually the empire crushed most of them under sheer numbers. The remaining dark jedi fled the outer rim. The new reborn movement had many skirmishes with the black hand and the empire of the hand. Soon the reborn movement was renamed back into the original name "The reborn splinter movement"

Other: The reborn splinter cell returned in 1 BBY with the help of Fon Ka`Taramas s
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@Rob - Hey man, you could use the "Edit" button below your posts so you can just edit in your changes, rather than posting it every time you change something. :D
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Hyperdrive said
@Rob - Hey man, you could use the "Edit" button below your posts so you can just edit in your changes, rather than posting it every time you change something. :D


Good idea >:I
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Also to be clear, there were no original Reborn. Your guys would be the and only.
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So no canon stuff? *Throws JC copy into shredder*
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Yes, around 90% of canon is out in this AU. What happened in the past happened, but even that is altered with the Empire gone just months after it's rise. So, again, think real hard on this as with some factors taken right out, alot has changed and also needs to be changed to fit in the new universe.
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*Accidental Double Post*
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Sigma said
*Accidental Double Post*


Lol
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I'm going to sleep now, Bai for the night :3
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