Damn... Alright then, sorry to see you go :(. You can always rejoin if you'd like though.

I'll just say Archive is waiting in the shadows, if I ever have the energy to return.

I really do apologize, I had high hopes for this but to be honest I'm not feeling that great about anything at the present. So I'll let my spot go to someone that can be active.

See ya'll around.

Oh, btw, Krein, can you take down Archive's profile off the 1st page? I don't wanna confuse anyone.

I have to head off soon, going out tonight. Will try and get on on my phone, but probably won't be able to.

Name: Jason Arden

Alias: Golden Thunder

Gender: male

Age: 16

Powers/Abilities: Shazam's abilities,

S for the Wisdom of Solomon As Golden Thunder, Jason has instant access to a vast amount of scholarly knowledge, including most known languages and sciences. He has exceptional photographic recall and mental acuity, allowing him to read and decipher hieroglyphs, recall everything he has ever learned, and solve long mathematical equations. He also has a great understanding of divine phenomena in the mortal world. The wisdom of Solomon provides him with counsel and advice in times of need.

H for the Strength of Hercules Hercules' power grants Golden Thunder immense superhuman strength, He is able to easily bend steel, punch through walls, and lift massive objects

A for the Stamina of Atlas Using Atlas' stamina, Golden Thunder can withstand quite a bit of physical assaults, and heal from them at a slowed pace. Additionally, he does not need to eat, sleep, or breathe, and can survive unaided in space when in Golden Thunder form.

Z for the Power of Zeus Zeus' power, besides fueling the magic thunderbolt that transforms Golden Thunder, also enhances Thunder's other physical and mental abilities, and grants him resistance against most magic spells and attacks. The hero can use the lightning bolt as a weapon by dodging it and allowing it to strike an opponent or other target. The magic lightning has several uses, such as creating an apperatuss and providing fuel for magic spells. If Jason is poisoned, for example, transforming will enable him to survive its effects.

A for the Courage of Achilles This aspect gives Golden Thunder the courage and bravery of Achilles and, in one story, it is claimed to give him fighting skills.

M for the Speed of Mercury By channeling Mercury's speed, Shazam/Captain Marvel can move at superhuman speeds and fly,

Personality: Angry, Twisted, was once happy but now the world is a dark place,

Backstory: Jason lived a fairly normal life, he was an average kid besides the fact he lived in an orphanage, he lived an okay life and even had a girlfriend, but things really got interesting when he met an old man who asked him to become a protector of mankind, when Jason agreed he was given the powers of Shazam! Life got fun after that Jason did his best to be a hero. He even managed to do a pretty good job, but nothing good lasts forever. When his girlfriend was murdered Jason spiraled out of control, losing himself in his hate he started to become a beacon of punishment instead of justice. He only went downhill from there, turning against his fellow heroes and turning to self gain and a path of malice becoming something dark...

Alignment Status: Evil/Chaotic

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... Hello..

makarov said
Name: Jason ArdenAlias: Golden ThunderGender: maleAge: 16Powers/Abilities: Shazam's abilities, Personality: Angry, Twisted, was once happy but now the world is a dark place, Backstory: Jason lived a fairly normal life, he was an average kid besides the fact he lived in an orphanage, he lived an okay life and even had a girlfriend, but things really got interesting when he met an old man who asked him to become a protector of mankind, when Jason agreed he was given the powers of Shazam! Life got fun after that Jason did his best to be a hero. He even managed to do a pretty good job, but nothing good lasts forever. When his girlfriend was murdered Jason spiraled out of control, losing himself in his hate he started to become a beacon of punishment instead of justice. He only went downhill from there, turning against his fellow heroes and turning to self gain and a path of malice becoming something dark...Alignment Status: Evil/Chaotic[IMG]

Hey mak, glad you're here, but I kind of see a bit too much potential for an overpowered character here. Being able to lift entire continents and having strength that so nearly rivals Superman? Loads of invulnerabilities to both physical and mental attacks, extremely quick healing even when he gets hurt...

I like Shazam as much as the next guy, but it'd be a good idea to tone down his powers. Do that and include an explanation on the limits of each, and you'll have a better chance of being accepted.

... This is quite the predicament for Lass.. And also a bit for me..

... Lass did a prank to Katherin.. Though.. It is alright if you do not respond to it..

Wow he can lift continents... Had no idea...I didn't fully read through the power list...shall we weaken him? Lits say his max is 6-8 tons lifting and his powers are limited a hell of allot.

I totally missed the prank :) focused so much on where to take my little reported I guess I didn't read as thoroughly as I usually do.

Yeah, weakening him is a good idea. Include an explanation of each power and its limits. Also, weaknesses.

Aww. I was hoping he was another electricity user....

KatherinWinter said
I totally missed the prank :) focused so much on where to take my little reported I guess I didn't read as thoroughly as I usually do.

... It is fine.. It was not really that important..

Avanhelsing said
Aww. I was hoping he was an mother electricity user....

... Same here..

But his main power is electricity its fueled by magic lightning...but still electricity... And I edited his powers to cut out the op crap.

S- Ok
H- Better
A- still needs a bit of improvement, it's bolderline invulnerability. All of the characters here are susceptible to injury from extended and massive physical damage. Additionally, the healing factor should be explained to see how capable it is. It is on the stature of Wolverine's healing, or is it a gradual healing that takes a while to repair wounds?
Z-Better, but the instant healing from the bolt might be a problem. Either choose between this healing or the Atlas healing.
A-Better
M-Ok. Just be sure not to misuse the powers.

Sorry if I seem to keep hounding you on the CS, I just want to make sure everything remains fair and balanced for everyone.

No my friend I completely understand the reason for your wanting fairness...and I'm more than happy to comply.

Edited one last time.

Everything looks good now from here, you're in!

SWEET!!! Super excited.

Just to lwt you know my inactivity is because my character is illusive and really doesn't come into play unless he has a plan... which I don't.