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Height and weight varies, but in his human form, he is 5'7" and weighs 150 pounds.Name[First and Last, Middle and Nicknames are optional]: Pascal "Puck" RobbinsAge[High School to College age, please.]: 17 (Actually 1300, but we can ignore that.)Gender: MaleSpecies/Race [Feel free to create your own! Just know that I'm going to be kind of picky. I just want to keep everything balanced.] Phooka (Pronounced like Koopa, but with the consonants swapped.)Powers: [Shapeshifting]A Phooka can change forms between a human, horse, goat, rabbit, or dog, or any combination of these. While in human form, it is given away by either long, slightly curved horns, or large rabbit ears. In it's other forms, it usually has black or dark brown fur.[Fortune]For this RP, I've decided to give this character the ability to modify luck. This ranges from getting the right cards in poker, to an ejected spaceship part landing on an opponents head. Since it is luck, the effects of this power can be quite unexpected, and (since we are writing this) cause for hilarity,Weaknesses: Whenever one person is lucky, someone else has to be unlucky. This leads to the belief that Phookas bring good and bad fortune with them. For example, with the above ejected spaceship part, some unfortunate spaceship pilot now loses their mission, and probably their job.Personality[Optional, just helps you get a feel for what you want your character to be like.]: To Be Roleplayed (But I'm leaning towards a wise, grouchy old man personality. To clash with his 17-year-old appearance, of course.)Background[Doesn't have to be long.]: Puck hails from northern Ireland, where he's lived for about 200 years. He was quite happy there, but staying in one place for that long draws attention. Sure enough, a group of young wizards came knocking on his cottage door, and Puck knew his time there was up. He narrowly escaped the hair-seeking juveniles, and made his way to [a town near wherever this school is located], where he heard about a miraculous school. Reading between the lines, as a mythical character is apt to do, he realized that it was no ordinary miraculous school, but a literally miraculous school, full of odd creatures like himself. Puck was a bit lonely after his many hermit years, and thought it would be a good idea to get into society again. He rented an apartment in that town, and in a few months, an invitation to the school showed up in his P.O, box.Study[What does your character plan on studying? What classes will they take? What do they like? Band? Art? Sports? List 'em here!]: Puck isn't really interested in studying, since a lot of the "mortal" subjects (Math, History, Science, etc..) in the place are already known to him. His goal there is rather to study other people, to have fun, and to add to his collection of memories.


So, I'd like to point out a couple things first.

-It'd make the Character Sheet look cleaner if you took out the [additional comments] HylianRose put for each info category.

-I am personally not against the shapeshifting ability, but so far, there's already been two characters with the same ability. Your character does have the ability to mix-and-match animal parts, but I haven't actually gone through every single CS yet (doing that tomorrow cause I'm studying for a test). I'll discuss this with HylianRose once she gets online.

-Fortune sounds, and is already an interesting idea that could create some hilarious moments! The thing I'm concerned, though, is the way it could be extremely overpowered. Sure, bringing fortunes already sounds like a different idea, but the misfortunes can also be extremely unfair for other roleplayers. The roleplay is generally lighthearted, but cool abilities like this tends to conflict with plans the GM makes for the roleplay's actual plot. Simply using misfortunes to attack any character (NPCs and player characters alike) will make other roleplayers actually feel underpowered.

I will talk with HylianRose about this, but I highly suggest you change this particular ability. It's cool (interesting as well!), but it is a generally unhealthy ability for the roleplaying experience other people have. I learned this the hard way.

+Good background, from what I can see! I'd like to see his personality coming to life soon. ;D (His reason for going to classes are funny if you think about it XD)
Right now, it would be nice if you cleaned up the Character Sheet by taking out the [additional info] made by HylianRose. Every other matter is something I want to talk about with the GM, but this guy does show a unique promise! :D
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That's not a gargoyle, she's a gorgon. XD


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i said she was gonna be a gorgon
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and how are rooms assigned? i mean do we already know our rooms or do we have to go find out?
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I'm on my summer vacation right now so I think I can post everyday. But, after two months of this, I could only go online once a week. I could freely post as much as I want then, but I doubt if you'd be online about the same time I'd be because of the time difference. If so, I'll post LONG monologues, since I would probably be a loner by then. But I hope you would understand my case because next school year, I'm working hard to be a class and student body president and honors student in my school, so... BUSY, BUSY, BUSY. But I really, really, want to write during my free time. You could just pretend I'm "travelling through time" in the game so I could "find out what my real purpose in life is" or something like that. And if you're worried in case I may not be able to catch up in the IC, I can because I read fast (I'm not being smug about it because the effects of being able to read fast is boredom). And for the OOC, I guess I can catch up because I can't relate to most of the new messages anyway.Anyway, I'd be glad if you'd accept me as one of your roleplayers. but I'll understand it if you don't want to because of the complication of my situation. Thanks :)


If you think you can do it, by all means. I'll have a look at your CS again tomorrow. Just PM me to remind me about it. (preferable with where your CS is located in the OOC.

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and how are rooms assigned? i mean do we already know our rooms or do we have to go find out?


-cough-check the first post in OOC-cough-

Hey guys! Sorry but I'm going to be getting off for the night. I had a pretty stressful night and I just kind of want to unwind and forget the fact that my spanish presentation is going to be shit and that I didn't turn in a lot of the stuff that was due tonight for Spanish. I'm going to watch Doctor Who and eat my chocolate cookie dough bunny covered in milk chocolate and forget all my worries because that's what college students do. They eat bad food and watch Netflix.

I'll get to looking over CSs tomorrow.

@Skycrab and Princess, very nice characters! I like them and I'm interested in seeing them in the IC. I'll come back later on and discuss a few things with you guys tomorrow. So count on that. (If I don't die before then. Spanish test tomorrow! ^o^/ )

So, yes. I will see all of you tomorrow. Please, have a good rest of your day, night, morning, whatever it is.

I love you guys. Dx -ugly sobbing-
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Take it easy, Hylian. We'll hold down the fort!

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EDIT: I want to see what Carmen and Ezra would do. o.o


So do I. :P
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OOC.-cough-check the first post in OOC-cough-


I think she means in character. Like do our characters know what rooms they have been assigned or do they have to find out themselves?
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I think he means in character. Like do our characters know what rooms they have been assigned or do they have to find out themselves?


yeah, that's what i was wondering
so i could have Oona go to her room
and i'm a she by the way ;)
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Name: Andromeda Barker (prefers Andy or Ann)Age: 18Gender: FemaleSpecies/Race: GorganPowers: if someone looks directly at her eyes they will turn to stone (but not indirectly, like through a mirror or through the veil she always wears), can speak to an exercise minor control over snakes (sort of more persuasion then control), has complete control over the snakes on her head but if she's not directly controlling them they tend to have minds of their own.Weaknesses: she is mortal, anything that can kill a normal hero can kill her too. especially weak against cold (since she is in fact cold-blooded, since she's kind of part snake in a way.Personality: very shy, is friendly and wants to have friends but doesn't know how to go about it, socially awkward, kind, often returns to her Greek roots in appearance and actions as well as speech.Background: Andromeda is in fact Medusa descendant, the stoning powers skipped a generation so her mother thought she had been normal and when she had a baby that turned a nurse to stone when she finally opened her eyes, she shunned her and locked her up, home-schooling her and always teaching her there was something wrong with her. and as she was never allowed to look anyone, even her own mother in the eyes, she now has trouble doing that, seeing it as Taboo, despite the fact her gaze won't turn people to stone as long as she has her veil on. she was sent there when she got an invitation to study and her mother was happy to get rid of her.Study: the core classes, piano, computer, sculpting ;)


Some stuff. I'd like. Yeah.

Holy crap, I'm getting lazy at writing.
-Can you clarify when she is unable to control the snakes on her head? It'd be a good touch to some details and would clear out confusion.

-Are there any countermeasures against her stone eyes? (like, is there an indication that she's going to use it, or is it just easy to predict?) Just a question I'd like to ask. o.o

-I really don't know what else to say.

-Really.

-Ye.
So, yeah, if you clarify those two things, I'd gladly accept this dazzling Gorgon.
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i'll clear that up some
but for her eyes, she doesn't actually use them, their always active but she wears a veil to cover it up so you can't see her eyes

i'll find a way to make that more clear

thanks
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i edited it
i hope that's clearer
if you think i still need to change something, just tell me and i will :)
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@Animelover_princess: Ooohhhhhhhhh. Okay, that cleared up a lot of things.

She's accepted! Feel free to add in additional touches, if you want to.
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thanks :)

i think i'll wait till Hylian gets on
so i know who she's rooming with before i have her join the IC
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Animelover_princess said
thanks :)i think i'll wait till Hylian gets onso i know who she's rooming with before i have her join the IC


I can fix that. She's rooming with le Pirate lady, Jeanne Cortez.

As far as how students find out, I'll explain that when I post as Criston next. (Basically, everyone got a paper in the mail before coming here with their room numbers. Nevermind schedules, they don't have 'em!)( Oh, and if the character 'lost' them. The main office can print one off. :P)

ONWARDS TO BED.
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ok thanks Hylian!

good night!
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HylianRose said
I can fix that. She's rooming with le Pirate lady, Jeanne Cortez. As far as how students find out, I'll explain that when I post as Criston next. (Basically, everyone got a paper in the mail before coming here with their room numbers. Nevermind schedules, they don't have 'em!)( Oh, and if the character 'lost' them. The main office can print one off. :P)ONWARDS TO BED.


Go murder that Spanish test. It'll feel really good.
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to whom it may concern, i edited my last IC post (since it was the last one anyway)
to include my Gorgon (who's now in the garden)
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I'm sorry I haven't posted but I have plans interfering with my time to be on this site. So, I will have to post some time tomorrow in the afternoon. I sincerely apologize for holding back those who are interacting with my characters, and ask for a little more time. I'll get the posts in tomorrow at 6AM.
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Cortez is great. I love that we have a pirate.
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jezus so many posts I just read them all before I was going to do my morning ritual and turns out it fucks up your whole morning and all most makes you come late for school (should be able to post in about an hour or so)
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I initially wanted to use a Jack Sparrow kind of dude, but then I went like "Nawww, lets mix it up with dead guys and a weird girl. Profit."

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jezus so many posts I just read them all before I was going to do my morning ritual and turns out it fucks up your whole morning and all most makes you come late for school (should be able to post in about an hour or so)


Take your time! Don't let this stuff stress you out too much. ^^

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I'm sorry I haven't posted but I have plans interfering with my time to be on this site. So, I will have to post some time tomorrow in the afternoon. I sincerely apologize for holding back those who are interacting with my characters, and ask for a little more time. I'll get the posts in tomorrow at 6AM.


I hope you get that stuff cleared up! We are (hopefully) going to be patient for you. :D
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