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Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Zombehs
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Be interested if I could join.
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hopefully I'm not too late ^^;

Also Boston Creme
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Hey, my CS is on page 2 but I thought'd I'd post it here too incase it was missed.

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So I will definitely be making a second character for when it opens up for them, eh-heh.
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Also, um, sent you a PM, Unending. Just, um, posting because PM's are kind of hard to notice with the current system. ^^;
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I'm cracking down this time. I've had plenty of RPs before where half the CSes I hesitantly accept, and they all die because those people disappear if we don't have an IC post after a few days. Regrettably, I'll have to turn down both of these CSes, for differing reasons.

Why I turned down Mushuro: The one thing this RP doesn't need right now is ninjas. I love ninjas, I admit, but I don't think they quite fit in how this RP works. I also classify this as that good ol' "was trained in martial arts from a young age" cliche, which is the one I was looking for most here. I also sense one I outright don't like, where they're usually timid but then are secret badasses once they put on a mask.

Why I turned down Makoto: The same "martial arts cliche" applies here (pretty much any hand-to-hand combat is martial arts, so...). Were that not the case, you have a C-Level Chip that seems more like it'd belong more up in A or S-Level (hypnotism is one hell of a power), both of which are levels not only above what I was willing to say yes to (F-Level at the very highest, and even this should be rare when we're just starting) but above what we'll be seeing for a fair bit of time IC. The "blade-blocking gauntlets" also put me off a little. As the final nail in the coffin, your grammar (specifically, punctuation and capitalization) just sorta amplified these things to me.

Sorry, guys. Also, Zombehs, feel free to put up a CS. I'm getting started on the IC as we speak (not sure if I already said that, but I mean it this time)
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UnendingEmpire said
Why I turned down Makoto: The same "martial arts cliche" applies here (pretty much any hand-to-hand combat is martial arts, so...). Were that not the case, you have a C-Level Chip that seems more like it'd belong more up in A or S-Level (hypnotism is one hell of a power), both of which are levels not only above what I was willing to say yes to (F-Level at the very highest, and even this should be rare when we're just starting) but above what we'll be seeing for a fair bit of time IC. The "blade-blocking gauntlets" also put me off a little. As the final nail in the coffin, your grammar (specifically, punctuation and capitalization) just sorta amplified these things to me.


Hey, I'd just like to argue my case a bit here if that's okay?

I may just have misread the 'tone' of this RP.

>The same "martial arts cliche" applies here (pretty much any hand-to-hand combat is martial arts, so...).

I got the impression that we will actually be using these battle chips? In that case knowing how to fight is kind of essential unless everyone is going to be playing the plucky rebel who beats much more skilled opponents through luck and being the good guy, imo just as cliche.

> Were that not the case, you have a C-Level Chip that seems more like it'd belong more up in A or S-Level (hypnotism is one hell of a power), both of which are levels not only above what I was willing to say yes to (F-Level at the very highest, and even this should be rare when we're just starting) but above what we'll be seeing for a fair bit of time IC.

I see what you are saying and from your perspective I have not explained it enough for what I'm about to say to be evident I guess. It only works on the 'weak of mind', That pretty much guarantees no one with a battle chip, and only a small number of normal people. A few normal people arn't very op against say someone with super speed, or a sword.

>The "blade-blocking gauntlets" also put me off a little.

Again, how am I supposed to not be ganked by the first battle chip person I deal with if a dagger to the stomach will do me in? I used the wrong word in 'block' I meant Parry, which is where you knock the blade off course, I was trying to avoid the cliche of a sword or dagger.

>As the final nail in the coffin, your grammar (specifically, punctuation and capitalization) just sorta amplified these things to me.

meh.

Have a nice RP, hope you have fun.
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TheyMostlyComeAtNight said Have a nice RP, hope you have fun.

"Arguing your case" then dropping out isn't really arguing your case so much as an overdramatized retirement, possibly with intentions (conscious or otherwise) to make others enjoy the RP less. You won't be missed if you're that unwilling to try and do better.

But rest assured, we'll have a good RP. If not, I already have a backup plan ready.
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That wasn't me dropping out, that was me trying to keep a upbeat conversation. I'm not going to change my CS until I'm clear on what I need to change it into, otherwise it'll end up needing to be changed multiple times if I am not in the right 'tone'.
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Sounded like a dropout to me ^_^; I retract my "won't be missed" statement, since you're apparently still with us.

*shoves awkward misunderstanding to the side*
Sooo...anyone learn anything neat lately?
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And we finally get a male in on this girlfest!
There's a sentence I never thought I'd say

Just keep in mind that between having an F-Level chip and it enhancing two attributes, the changes will barely be notable. :)

I'll start adding accepted characters to the main post since I now count four.
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And we finally get a male in on this girlfest!Just keep in mind that between having an F-Level chip and it enhancing two attributes, the changes will barely be notable. :)I'll start adding accepted characters to the main post since I now count four.


okiedoke, So I assume I am in a class 2 of some kind? Do you need to make a post as my homeroom teacher or w/e before I post in the IC?
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I see no reason you couldn't take the slot of your homeroom teacher. They're all sorta NPCs at the moment unless I decide to pull a fast one later on.
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Hmm, um... I was kind of thinking, um... I mean this is silly but I am really excited about this idea and all given how much I love Kill la Kill and since this is like it um...

... Basically if you need help working out spoilerless NPC's I'd be willing to help if you wanted. ^^;
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Absolutely. Glad to see players offering to help build the RP. It's a good sign that it won't die anytime soon. (or at least that I have a good person I can ask to be co-GM in the event it needs to be rebooted)

Also...
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Name: Takeda Minori

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Personality: (Aim for 1-2 paragraphs. I'm watching for cliches, so don't add them)

Takeda is a guy with opinions about everything. He loves discussions and proving his worth. He is a pretty casual guy that likes joking around with people, either pranks or in-conversations. He is a trustworthy guy that warms up to people fast, expecting them to be as trustworthy as he is, even if that isn't always the case. He has average grades but is very strategic, excelling in board-games.

He is very relaxed and doesn't get mad very fast. He is always calm in stressful situations and never panics, even if hope is pretty much lost. He always tries to keep a coolhead, lighten the mood or try to find their way out of desperate situations. He is also very argumentative, but most of the time stays rational during discussions and he doesn't let his feelings involve.
Bio: (2-4 paragraphs here, please. I'm still watching for cliches)

There once was a couple that was poor. They were loud-mouthed and never sat down for everyone. It was only natural that they got in fights a lot, not excluding battle chips owners, and they also got beat up a lot, by aforementioned battle chips owners. They didn't like that, so they spent twenty years creating a fighting style that uses hand to hand to fight opponents, believing weapons slow the users down, and only resorting to some knife work. Even brass knuckles are advised against. A style so overruling it could beat Battle-chip owners, depending on the users skill and how high
the battle chip was. They set up a secret dojo, teaching the lower ranked this style to defend against richer people, however it got discovered and burned to the ground.

His parents, the best of this style fled, leaving the history behind them after getting married. They gave birth to Takeda, and vowed to teach him this style, but they didn't master this yet, they weren't taught everything, they were just touching on the advanced stuff. It is rumored that a notebook with the techniques are hidden somewhere, but those are just rumors. They told Takeda about it a year ago, and he was interested, they just didn't want to teach him it for a reason they couldn't explain. So Takeda argued that they should at least get him some physical training, to be able to fight back if needed. So till this day he is getting physical training, but nothing actual martial arts related.

He is being trained the same way an army trains a soldier, running with a backpack full of stones or doing fifty push ups is a common occurrence. Giving him a physical edge to his classmates. However, he lacks experience, he hasn't been in fights a lot due to his personality. He may be strong, fast and enduring, but currently lacks the experience to adapt in a fight. Not to mention he never touched a weapon, let alone using them. It wouldn't be weird if he was beaten to someone weaker, slower and less enduring then him, all at the same time. His parents still don't trust him enough to teach him this style.
Grade: First year
Battle Chip:None

Anything Else:
He likes American Pie.

This is practically the style.

Hope the martial arts thing isn't a cliché >.>

(Also, the style can't beat higher leveled without enhancement. Even the literal best ones were only able to beat D, and that with both fighters against one and a bunch of cheap tactics with it.. It was designed to beat the lower, more common ranked.)
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One moment.
I count 1..2...3..4...fifth one coming soon, plus this would be sixth. I may end up having to put in a second character to get the IC moving again, so that'd be seven...but my co-GM also said she may be doubling up, but then that'd be eight. What to do??

...while I'm still not a big fan toward the idea of martial arts designed to beat Battle Chips (it'd be like trying to beat an Ultima Uniform with your bare hands; even Tsumugu used guerilla tactics and anti-Life Fiber weapons) this guy's lack of experience plus altogether personable demeanor seem to balance that out a little? Since we have three other players besides you and I right now, and since my co-GM hasn't arrived just yet, I think I'll leave this one to popular vote.

VitaVitaAR, Raineh Daze, and TheyMostlyComeAtNight will decide your fate >:) unless co-GM gets here before all three give input, of course
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Um... hmm.

Um... honestly from what I know about the chips, it seems like a style that's purely martial arts would only be useful against low-level chips unless you're very lucky and can get close on chip-users who don't have ranged weapons, and even then if it's like life fibers it's very very hard to harm them. At least not without some sort of enhancement on some level.

Like, um, with Minako, if she was still using her bat she would have no chance against anyone but the lowest chip-users.
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It can't beat higher level chips without enhancement of course, that sounds impossible. It's just for the more common lower ranked to protect the user, not actively start a rebellion, in which case they would need to beat higher leveled chips. The creators of the style were only able to beat D, both against one, and that with whole bunch of luck and cheap tactics too. Not to mention they were/are the best of the style currently. Takeda hasn't even trained something in that martial yet, so he can't do anything yet. Sorry for not explaining it better, I'll edit it in the CS
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