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dirkinz said
sorry it took so long, I had to go clean the kitchen but here we goSo, for the most part I have no problems with it, I just want ask if the imitation thing is magic or just from practice and skill?


For the most part suggest you have some critiques (which I would love to hear, this character is a work in progress, if this is the case feel free to PM me with details if you feel inclined :D )

It is a little colum A little colum B, those who practice Banshe Roar get acute voice control and understanding of sound. This gives him perfect pitch when singing and such, imitating voices is more of a practices skill that comes from that foundation.
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I can't wait to start the RP! Also I'm willing to slightly edit my CS to add you as a team member Rune_Alchemist, if you are still up for the idea of our characters teaming up, or would you prefer to have us team up slightly latter in the RP?
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Name: Elliott Leond
Age: 20

Magic Level: C
History: Elliott grew up in a noble house of Fiore. While he doesn't keep that fact secret he does keep the families name secret to avoid affiliation. As children he and his two older brothers and sister got most everything they wanted. One of Elliott's favorite activities was reading, specifically tales of adventure and magic. He would pretend to be characters from his favorite books and his favorite character was the swashbuckling rogue, Captain Harlock. Under this guise he would often pull pranks on the staff and siblings. It was cute at first but as he grew up the pranks didn't disappear but instead got more and more complex. When he was old enough to attend social events he was very inappropriate, actually speaking his mind on controversial topics and courting the ladies a little too much. Not only did he look bad at social events, he had begun to dabble in small magics. He was becoming a disgrace to his family and to be honest he didn't really fit in with the noble crowds anyways so on his seventeenth birthday he entered his fathers office and said he was heading out on his own (something he had kind of been joking about for a while). His father was very solemn about the whole ordeal but there was a subtle understanding that it was what was best for both Elliott and his family. After saying a few other good-byes he headed off, practicing his magic secretly. About half a year later, he ended up staying at Phoenix Wing.
Personality: Elliott is very clever and knows a lot but lacks real life skills as he was pampered most of his life, unless of course its in a noble’s court. While he retained his inner prankster he is also a very honest person, and is not afraid to state his mind, even if everyone else thinks otherwise.
Team Members: Chloe, Victor, Elliott
Three Strengths:
1. Elliott had some of the best teachers money could buy.
2. Elliott is very brave.
3. Elliott can make a mean pot of shrimp soup.
Three Weaknesses:
1. Elliott’s magic is rather weak .
2. He lacks many real world skills.
3. Elliott has no shrimp.
Greatest Love: Books
Motivation: While he never tells anyone he wants to live up to the name of Captain Harlock.
Appearance:

Additional Details: His guild mark is on the left side of his torso.
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The midget is working on his character for now but once he is done we can start, as long as you guys dont mind waiting till tomorow or later tonight for us to post the job request board.
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KiltmanBagz said
For the most part suggest you have some critiques (which I would love to hear, this character is a work in progress, if this is the case feel free to PM me with details if you feel inclined :D )It is a little colum A little colum B, those who practice Banshe Roar get acute voice control and understanding of sound. This gives him perfect pitch when singing and such, imitating voices is more of a practices skill that comes from that foundation.


haha, to be completely honest, I just use "for the most part" as a habit, when I say it I usually mean that I have no problems with it. Sorry about that, ill take another look though and see if I can find anything I would recomend
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Toaw said
Shouldn't we have this man arrested?


Got no proof of that. :)

lordmidget said
It looks good, but can you add a description of your magic please?


Okay. On it.
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Sorry ive been gone today, in honor of my last day of school my family decided I had to go sit in the living room and listen to them talk, whoopdie doo. I finally got away. When the midget is done with his cs and if people are still up for it we can start. Also, would you guys mind making an account for lucidchart. It is a free flowchart program that I want to use for the request board so it can be somewhat interactive. If you guys dont want to deal with that then I can just use image files and such.
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Ugh just got back from work. Man I'm exhausted and could use a hot shower~
Too bad moms asleep and the only shower with hot water is in her room >_<

Toaw said
I can't wait to start the RP! Also I'm willing to slightly edit my CS to add you as a team member Rune_Alchemist, if you are still up for the idea of our characters teaming up, or would you prefer to have us team up slightly latter in the RP?


Oh hey. Yeah, sure I'm still up for Chloe being part of a team with your character whose name I forgot totally didn't forget. We need a cool team name though, and who 'leads' us xP

Anyone else up for joining a team of fighting lunatics? xP
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lordmidget said
It looks good, but can you add a description of your magic please?


So, I looked over the change and my god, that is some powerfull magic...... like high s-class...... please change it.

He can make a blizzard, a hurricane out of thin air, (magic type #1 weather magic)
He can change the wind's velocity and can ride with the air enabling him to fly and dash with the breeze. (magic type #1.5 could be an extension of the above.)
He can make blades of wind which can kill with a slash. (Magic type #1.9 could also be an extension. But instadeath. is not allowed)
He can suck out the air from a confined space making it a total vacuum. (magic type #2 Also, almost certain death.)
Due to the advancement of his skills he can contour the light waves travelling through air enabling him to make illusions. (magic type #3 not even air related. it would be light, heat (mirage) or illusion magic.)

Also, just so you know, in Fiore, bloodline has almost nothing to do with magic power other than a father might teach a child the same magic they had. The child does not have it inherently.
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Rune_Alchemist said
Yeah, sure I'm still up for Chloe being part of a team with your character whose name I totally didn't forget. We need a cool team name though, and who 'leads' us xPAnyone else up for joining a team of fighting lunatics? xP


We can always ask Dirkinz if he want's to lead us he can't fight well, but the shrimp might just be worth it. Hey Dirkinz want to be apart of our team O/ we will loves you, and even supply shrimp!!!! Whispers back to Rune do you think he is convinced?
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Did you say Shrimp!!! Where do I sign? haha, sure, ill have to check over your bios, Im slowly working my way through all of them but ill get there eventually (some time tonight)
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And Also, have this:

Name: Melinor
Age: Unknown
Magic: Unknown
Magic Level: Rumored to be very high
History: Unknown
Personality: Unknown
Team Members: None
Three Strengths:
1. Unknown
2. Unknown
3. Unknown
Three Weaknesses:
1. Unknown
2. Unknown
3. Unknown
Greatest Love: Unknown
Motivation: Unknown
Appearance: He is rumored to wear a large black cloak and carry a sword, some people say he has two swords
Additional Details: Very little is known about Melinor other than that people say they have caught glimpses of him talking with the master. When asked about him the master generally laughs and calls them silly.
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A bad guy I take it?

Toaw said
We can always ask Dirkinz if he want's to lead us he can't fight well, but the shrimp might just be worth it. Hey Dirkinz want to be apart of our team O/ we will loves you, and even supply shrimp!!!! Whispers back to Rune do you think he is convinced?


*whispers back* I think so. Though where are we going to get the shrimp from?

Also, I'm exhausted xD
Nighty night guys.
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Ok I made a few slight changes, and I made it so that the original was once a human if that can somehow bypass the "no non-humans allowed" rule. If not I'll figure something else, but feel free to critique the other aspects of my character.
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dirkinz said
And Also, have this:Name: Melinor
Age: Unknown
Magic: Unknown
Magic Level: Rumored to be very high
History: Unknown
Personality: Unknown
Team Members: None
Three Strengths:
1. Unknown
2. Unknown
3. Unknown
Three Weaknesses:
1. Unknown
2. Unknown
3. Unknown
Greatest Love: Unknown
Motivation: Unknown
Appearance: He is rumored to wear a large black cloak and carry a sword, some people say he has two swordsAdditional Details: Very little is known about Melinor other than that people say they have caught glimpses of him talking with the master. When asked about him the master generally laughs and calls them silly.

I feel like we have known each other for years XD
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Gravislayer said
How about 3 posts space before your next post? It does not seem that hard and it would work against speed posting and so 100 of post only being few paragraphs long~

what do you guys think about this
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Rune_Alchemist said
A bad guy I take it?*whispers back* I think so. Though where are we going to get the shrimp from?
Also, I'm exhausted xDNighty night guys.


All right, night, sleep well
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Scythe Scythe Baby said
Ok I made a few slight changes, and I made it so that the original was once a human if that can somehow bypass the "no non-humans allowed" rule. If not I'll figure something else, but feel free to critique the other aspects of my character.


I am going through all the bios tonight and ill get a review up by tomorrow.
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Gravislayer said
How about 3 posts space before your next post? It does not seem that hard and it would work against speed posting and so 100 of post only being few paragraphs long~

dirkinz said
what do you guys think about this


I like this idea.
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