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Hey, ladies and gents. Sorry for my absence. Things have been kind of...meh for me.

But, I'm still in this. What's been going on? Could I get a quick recap from what's happened since my last post?
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@harinezumikouken: Strictly for things relevant to Marianne, um...

Tiral said he wanted to food and responded to Marianne talking about her workaround, and Indrau introduced himself.
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I'll try and get a post up soon.
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No rush, I won't be at my PC until tomorrow anyway.
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Here's my CS, though mines is a sloppy work I admit, so feel free to comment on anything & everything ^^"

So, is the dinner party over? Just wondering o.o ~


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@Noodles: Okay, a couple things.

There is an illegal slave trade, but it's a high crime. Slave traders get outright killed when found unless they actually surrender. Same goes for slave owners.

Basically keeping them out in a field if you're staying in one area would be a very bad idea.

Secondly, can she have been part of the knights for at least a year or more? I'd like some more knights who aren't totally new. ^^;
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@Noodles: Okay, a couple things.

There is an illegal slave trade, but it's a high crime. Slave traders get outright killed when found unless they actually surrender. Same goes for slave owners.

Basically keeping them out in a field if you're staying in one area would be a very bad idea.

Secondly, can she have been part of the knights for at least a year or more? I'd like some more knights who aren't totally new. ^^;


No probs, tweaked my CS a bit :) ,
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Would you mind explaining how she went from Mercenary to knight a bit more?
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Done, added a bit ~~
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Okay, have to be honest, at the moment this means she was a successful mercenary at fifteen years old and got into the roses despite being by all accounts not very good at it? ^^;

Remember she needs to have achieved knighthood.
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Kind of haha ^^" , but now I realized that my CS has now became ambiguous, so I edited the backstory again :X ~~
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It was nice, let's not do this again.
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@Noodles:Just a bit more detail on how she actually made it into the Roses? ^^;

Remember it's a legendary knight order.
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Donee, not sure whether the backstory is a little too dark hehe ^^"
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@Noodles: Uh... okay I can definitely say that the Iron Roses wouldn't want her for that... also that it doesn't make much sense. ^^;

Just say she helped save some people or something if you want her to be invited?
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Changed, had read too much Tokyo Ghoul for that previous backstory XP
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@Noodles: That's much more coherent. ^^; She would have to prove herself worthy of knighthood and all, but still.
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Added a bit more on the Knight part ~~
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@Noodles: I still think she's a little young given her backstory, but she makes a lot more sense now. Accepted, though bumping up her age a few years wouldn't be unwelcome.
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After we wrap up our current scenes, I'll be timeskipping to the start of a new arc!
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