@RyoRyoRyoken It looks better, most definitely. However, I would probably (personally) trade off the power for some rate of fire. If on the lowest setting the thing can melt through thick metal, only the strongest of defenses could hope to block it, and it's pretty much one hit kill to anybody if it hits at a good spot. And, if it so happens that she can't hit them due to the charge time (Say, oh I don't know, somebody who can teleport) she may be royally screwed if she can't spam her lasers, although normal fire arms may help this problem.
Overall she's not OP anymore, and I can approve of it, but I just want to see a way where she could potentially damage a person, or thing, without killing it outright with her powers. Maybe if she doesn't charge it for long, it would probably just cause some searing pain and put a hole in their shirt, and she can pop these off fairly quickly, but her charged shots can do the damage and penetration necessary to one hit kill potentially and bust through a wall. It would require a bit of skill and planning, but it could be pretty fun and probably more flexible, and has the potential to grow into her shooting out lasers quickly, more powerfully, maybe even in shapes like arcs and the like.
With the power beam aside, the light shield and the optics seems reasonable and I see nothing wrong with them personally.
But I'm not the only opinion, and I would get one from one of the other GM's. But, this is just my humble opinion, right or wrong as it may be.