Hidden 8 yrs ago 8 yrs ago Post by Dannyrulx
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Dannyrulx Don't. Call. Me. A. Goat.

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Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by Hank
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Hank Dionysian Mystery

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Finally got around to posting my own character. Use it as an example for your own sheets -- this is about the level of detail that I like to see. Anything more than that is excessive... and I can't reasonably expect you all to write more than I do.
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Started to fill in my sheet, taking a break to think before getting into the Biography and Personality, but could still use feedback on what is there.
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Themerlinhawk Aegis Kai Doru

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Finishing up gear then just biography and personality left to go
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Still a WIP, just need to write up the big case.
but before i wrap up im curious as to what you all think?
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I'm going to take a step back from this - my time is SUUUPER tight right now, and I don't want to overcommit. @Hank, can I hop in at a later time when things slow down for me?
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Now, this looks really good as far as games go, and I notice nobody's taken any obvious hard looks at the Commander role, so that's something I might be interested in. However, I'm already in a pretty large number of other RPs, amongst other things I'm involved in, and much like Quinn, I'd rather not overcommit and screw up the timing. To reiterate her question, @Hank: is it alright if I enter the game at a later point in time, when I have fewer other RPs and such to deal with?
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Yes, both of you are certainly welcome at a later time.

Weekends are generally a busy time for me so I'll take a look at all the character sheets we have so far tomorrow and provide feedback as necessary.
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@Hank Grand. I'll be sure to keep an eye on proceedings in here, maybe figure out a good time to try and get started here and all.
Hidden 8 yrs ago 8 yrs ago Post by Hank
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@Keepvogel's sheet looks about ready. @Flagg, love the approach you took but it'd be swell if you could expand Love's personality section. It's not even one paragraph. Tad short.

@Sophrus, keep doing what you're doing. All you have to do is wrap it up and you're golden, I like everything I've read so far. Same goes for @GreivousKhan.

The other sheets are too barebones for me to have anything useful to say right now.
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@Hank okay this is in its mostly complete form. It neEd's final edits to grammar and spelling but beyond that this is the completed cs. Let me know how it looks.

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@Flagg, love the approach you took but it'd be swell if you could expand Love's personality section. It's not even one paragraph. Tad short.


Noted and fixed, hopefully. Lemme know if you need more! CS is here
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Ok. that's me done. If there's anything I need to change, just let me know Hank.
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@Flagg No, that's an excellent insight into his character. Accepted. Feel free to post your CS in the Characters tab.

I'll read the other completed character sheets later today.
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Dannyrulx Don't. Call. Me. A. Goat.

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Actually, that little thing is a cool idea @Flagg mind if I pinch it?
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Actually, that little thing is a cool idea @Flagg mind if I pinch it?


not sure what you mean- the idea of doing a scene? Sure!
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Here's my sheet, I think everything's done, unless I've missed something or gotten it wrong from a lore perspective (which is a possibility).


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@Vor Using my powers as a Co-GM, I will say that your sheet is certainly done and can be posted into the Character tab; a fine sheet, and you've got everything pretty much spot on when it comes to the lore. Well done, sir.
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I'll post up somewhere within the week. If I cannot, then I am afraid life's got too busy for another RP. Can my guy be from a Knight House's homeworld?
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@Vor Using my powers as a Co-GM, I will say that your sheet is certainly done and can be posted into the Character tab; a fine sheet, and you've got everything pretty much spot on when it comes to the lore. Well done, sir.


Thank you, thank you. I'll hold of from posting it in the character tab, gonna do a final edit tomorrow as I saw some typos and other stuff that needs fixing. But first - sleep!
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