@LostDestiny Let's see, there really isn't any glaring flaws...I'm not sure about her being in Golem's Hand due to her using Takeover magic. I'll have to consult my Co-GM's about that. Besides that I would like a little more of her history; key experiences she had while on her own, how she came to learn her magic, and her reasoning behind joining Golem over Harpy.
@pkken Hmm...that's tricky. In my opinion slayer magic is powerful and versatile enough on it's own, especially when comes to RP where you have the license to evolve the magic in a different than the original. I think it would be better to add it later as the character progresses.
I agree, unless the take over gives more minor transformations? Like claws or enhanced speed/strength? Then the user wouldn't be solely relying on it but using it as a tool.
@LostDestiny Like Rune said the magic conflicts too much with Golem's philosophy. "The wizard powers the magic, not the magic powering the wizard." Takeover is just one of those magics that it's impossible to look past the fact that the magic isn't enhancing the natural ability/skills but imparting those things onto the wizard. You'd either have to put her in Harpy or change her magic, whichever feels better for you.
I'm interested in the RP. A S-Rank spot for either guild. I'm happy to join either. I have an interesting teacher-esque/big brother character that I would not mind using if you allow me to.
I guess I am going to have to change her bio and guild. I can't now though because I have 40 minutes till I have to be at my other job. It would be too difficult to change the magic considering I spent FOREVER finding something I even remotely liked for it. That would be too much time wasted. I will try to change stuff later tonight. Sorry if this seems bitchy, I am not in the most pleasant of moods because my first jobs sucks and pissed me off.
Like I said, I will alter it later, if I'm not still absolutely ticked...
@Vongola_Hasayo So with Kal making an S Class, that will bring us up to 3. I think that would be a good number to leave it at for the beginning of the roleplay; unless you'd rather have it be even with 2 per guild?
(I know you said rank doesn't matter as much in this but I don't really like Rp's with a lot of S Class characters running around).
Name:: Xareth Nickname/Alias:: Crimson child Xareth Gender:: Male Age and date of birth:: 19, June 11th
Guild:: Golem's Hand
Rank:: S-Rank Personal Information
Personality:: Xareth can be a strict person and won't hold back when criticizing his comrades dangerous behaviors and actions, though he is strict he wishes the best for his comrades. Other than that he is a rather laid back person and easy to talk to though he can appear frightening. Xareth is a hard worker and has trained hard to obtain his level of power, if he isn't resting or doing jobs he is often training in the mountains where he can let loose without having to worry about the safety of others. When Xareth is in battle he takes it serious often not saying too many words while fighting, Xareth is a confident person also having trust and confidence in his comrades as well. He is a responsible guy, often evaluating problems before rushing off so that injury is kept to a minimum as well as taking full discipline for actions he commits that are out of line. He has great pride for his guild as it is his family, anyone who bashes the guilds name will not be taken lightly.
History
Xareth hails from a far away village on a distant island, this island holds significant importance from ancient times, a holy island where the temple of the fire god relies. Inside the temple showed the highly destructive teachings of the fire gods magic. These teachings have been guarded for centuries from outsiders who wished to obtain this magic for destruction.
In the temple the shrine holds a prophecy, on the temple walls show many drawings and written scriptures explaining the divine right the fire god has bestowed upon 'The Crimson child'."He with crimson hair shall inherit my divine flames." Once every century a child with crimson hair is born the village is is referred to as the 'The Crimson Child'. Once the Crimson child is born and reaches the age of 5 they begin undergoing the training and teachings from the village elder in order to hone their skills to become the next guardian of the island.
Being the parent of the crimson child is a great honor. Following the birth was is a large celebration praising the fire god, the next couple of years were simple for Xareth but soon enough he reached the age where his training to be the next heir to the ancient magic would begin. His training was strict and rigorous in order to get him in shape to use this powerful magic, through the years Xareth mind, body, and soul were enlightened by the village elder preparing him for the ancient power, as his training went on he spent less time with his family and more time honing his skills. At age 8 he had learned the basics of fire magic and at age 12 was proficient enough that he was on par with other warriors in the village being, and donning the name 'The Young Crimson Prodigy'. At age 12 he was finally able to learn the power of the fire god, by showing his level of skill with regular fire magic he was given access to the inner sanctum where the teachings were of the fire god were written on the walls. By age 15 he grasped the basics of fire god slaying magic, being able to consume external flames as well as perform some spells.
When Xareth was 16 his village was attacked by a dark guild searching for the temple of the fire god seeking the lost magic, while Xareth was in the inner sanctum studying he felt a tremor. He rushed out to see his village being pillaged and his people slaughtered he rushed to the village, this being the first time where he pits the ancient magic against people. Xareth fought fearlessly careful hold his feelings within, though he had combat prowess he was outnumbered and rather inexperienced with his newly obtained power. He fled towards the temple, using his remaining power he destroyed the temple as a last resort preventing anyone from reaching the temple but in doing so he was incredibly reckless causing himself to get knocked out and buried by rubble, the dark guild members suspected him to be dead, finding what they came for was gone and suspected all the inhabitants of the island dead they departed. Many hours later Xareth woke up injured badly, he emerged from the rubble to see everything taken from him in the blink of an eye.
Xareth fell into deep despair as he failed in protecting his family and friends, having nothing else to loose he decided he wanted to become an avenger, after making a recovery he set sail from island and reaching the kingdom of Fiore. Xareth had heard stories of the place but this was his first time leaving the island. After a couple of months living on the island he soon joined the guild Golem's hand seeing that they are a serious guild. Xareth spent the next three years honing his power and collecting information on dark guilds.
Fire gods Bellow:The Fire God Slayer's exclusive God's Bellow, incorporating the element of fire. In a similar vein to Fire Dragon's Roar, the user breathes a massive fireball of flame at their opponent.
Fire gods Kagutsuchi: The user spreads their arms and legs and unleashes a giant ball of black flames around themselves
Fire gods Explosive flames:The user releases a massive ball of black flames at their opponent from their arm by launching it forward in a punch-like motion. Once their flames reach the target, they increase in size, creating a giant explosion.
Divine force(Much later): Similar to a dragon slayers dragon force, a god slayer undergoes effectively gains immense power for short period of time, this change is showed by the tribal markings that appears on the users limbs and face. Though the power granted is great the amount of power gained takes a huge toll on the body causes the user magic deficiency disease.
Other - Master of hand to hand combat - Proficient with weapons
@pkken Two minor concerns; I think you should hold off on Divine Force and have that be something he gets later. As stated in the OP the player S-Class chars are quite new, having only very recently attained the rank. So, while I can see him being not too far off from achieving Divine Force given his training and determination, I think it's a little much to have at the start. Second, please use the lighter shade of red for everything you've colored in the CS. The darker one hard to read. Had to highlight the spells just to read them XD
@Vongola_HasayoI was in a little bit of a rush because I was starving I will do that, and also I put parenthesis next to divine force for much later haha.
@Masaki Haruna if I remember right there is a consider scale of who over powers who in the slayer category.
I always understood that it is God's layer , devilslayer then dragonslayers or am I wrong of course sometimes the scales can change as seen by natsu take out a god slayer
