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Idea for "The People vs Logan Rivers"

After getting stoned with Charlie just before a big football game Logan uses his friends eye drops to help with his bloodshot eyes. Too bad those weren't eye drops and Logan ends up taking a long strange trip during the big game against the rival team. He ends up banned from school sports and clubs, taking mandatory 'why drugs are bad' Saturday classes, and a suspension. Most of school turned against him and most of his new jock friends ostracized him, leaving him with Charlie and his gang as his main social group. A part of him wondered if Charlie had done it on purpose or if he really had handed him the wrong bottle accidentally. Logan chose to believe it was the later and afterwards spent more and more time with his old friends.
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For a little while, Logan partook in some of the gang violence with Charlie, which would have meant that he was somewhat cool with/neutral towards Ty; or he could've disliked him. Either way, they probably knew each other. Since this was during the second season, Keisha had started hanging around Ty's friends more often. It all depends on when the incident with Charlie pulling a knife on a guy happened and ending their friendship, but if this all happened during or after Charlie's relationship with Keisha, maybe there's a chance that she would have gotten to know Logan as well?

If this was the case, maybe Keisha & Logan's reactions to seeing each other for the first time in ten years could be something to write about, sort of like Keisha and Kaitlin's encounter? Just something to think about.
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This is what I like to see guys, plots and plans forming...
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For a little while, Logan partook in some of the gang violence with Charlie, which would have meant that he was somewhat cool with/neutral towards Ty; or he could've disliked him. Either way, they probably knew each other. Since this was during the second season, Keisha had started hanging around Ty's friends more often. It all depends on when the incident with Charlie pulling a knife on a guy happened and ending their friendship, but if this all happened during or after Charlie's relationship with Keisha, maybe there's a chance that she would have gotten to know Logan as well?

If this was the case, maybe Keisha & Logan's reactions to seeing each other for the first time in ten years could be something to write about, sort of like Keisha and Kaitlin's encounter? Just something to think about.


Well if it works for you Id put the knife incident towards the end of season two. I'd say Logan and Ty definitely knew each other, and Logan liked him well enough but wasn't so fond of Ty after he broke up Keisha and Charlie. When during the show would their break up have been. Also what sort of traits did you have in mind for Charlie just so we can be on the same page there. Since they hang out with the same people the would've known each other pretty well.
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Would you, please? I imagine that the two would have been broken up before the knife incident, so probably around episode 4 or 5. So, since Keisha was with Charlie and he and Logan were best buds, how would Logan have felt about Keisha?

I think we are on the same page when it comes to Charlie's traits. Normal, cool guy with a taste for trouble. That would be why she and everyone that knew Charlie were so surprised when they realized that he was the shooter.
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Threw up a post to keep things from slowing down too much. Only did present day Kaitlin that way there DPL would have a chance to respond to the flashback scene.
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Threw up a post to keep things from slowing down too much. Only did present day Kaitlin that way there DPL would have a chance to respond to the flashback scene.


I might do the same thing soon, I'm catching up in a show right now tho
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Would you, please? I imagine that the two would have been broken up before the knife incident, so probably around episode 4 or 5. So, since Keisha was with Charlie and he and Logan were best buds, how would Logan have felt about Keisha?

I think we are on the same page when it comes to Charlie's traits. Normal, cool guy with a taste for trouble. That would be why she and everyone that knew Charlie were so surprised when they realized that he was the shooter.


Yeah, I mean it feels like the sort of event that would happen near the the end of a season. As for Logan's opinion on Keisha, she made Charlie happy when they were together and seemed to be a positive influence on him. Logan liked her, he liked that his friend was happy, but also teased him some, in a friendly way, for falling for a girl so quickly. Before he'd liked Ty at first but thought the guy went way overboard when he beat Charlie up and made sure he'd stay away from Keisha. He understood the guy was protective of his sister but Logan figured she could do a lot worse than Charlie. As for Charlie I was thinking he probably had some kind diagnosed mental illness, Bipolar or Manic Depression but just sort of slipped through the cracks.
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Hey @BrutalBx, how far along in this episode would you say we are? Given the intro scenes, the in betweens and then the reunion, and now that everyone has parted ways again. Would it just be another scene-per actor thing before this episodes over and all the actors head back to the hotel for the night? Or are we looking at a longer running?
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Alright. That all works for me, especially the whole bipolar disorder/depression thing with Charlie. It would explain a lot of his actions.
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Hey @BrutalBx, how far along in this episode would you say we are? Given the intro scenes, the in betweens and then the reunion, and now that everyone has parted ways again. Would it just be another scene-per actor thing before this episodes over and all the actors head back to the hotel for the night? Or are we looking at a longer running?


Yeah I'd day the episode is pretty much at a raps now.
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Hi loves! Apologies on the delays. Please read my status for more info. Hope I can catch up on a post for this soon. <3
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Hi loves! Apologies on the delays. Please read my status for more info. Hope I can catch up on a post for this soon. <3


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I have time tonight so I'll get a current day post up within the day
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Make that tomorrow night after work lol I forgot I had a coworkers bday dinner tonight and I'm exhausted
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Expect a post from me today!
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Lmao I typed that whole post up on my phone so I hope it's alright.
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@Helo Nice job on bringing Logan straight into the action! Thankfully Lanie's out of the picture, or else she'd jump on her man's defense without hesitation.
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You know Decky's first words are gonna be "well I would, if I saw a man around here. Unfortunately it's just you."
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All of that escalated so wonderfully.

I'll have a post up tomorrow.

Until then, i have to sit and listen to Kaitlin spew angry responses in my head.
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