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@Roosan, I began work on my CS before the RP became full
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Barrett Oh, the year was 1778...

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@Solaris
Well, in fairness, so did this person and this person. Obviously it's up to the GM, I'm just pointing out what's already happened in the thread.
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@Solaris
Well, in fairness, so did this person and this person. Obviously it's up to the GM, I'm just pointing out what's already happened in the thread.


Solaris has been quite active in the Discord chat since I started working on my character, so I assume they're an exception, as I was. Can't speak for Lyla though.

I will say it must be quite flattering (if not overwhelming) to have so much interest hahah
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@Lucian Yeah it is both really, flattering and overwhelming. Especially since today I'm out ALL day with the family. XD

@Solaris Yeah.... that character is way too overpowered. Its like some crazy half dragon anime character that's a mix from bleach and dragon ball Z as opposed to a legendary hero from a fantasy setting. I didn't even get to his history. :|
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@Lyla revised Character going into detail about his own powers rather than how the powers work in general, not complete, but it can be finished relatively quickly.



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Finally home, exhausted from travel CS will be up tomorrow.
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@Lyla

Hey, I'm wondering if you'd let me scrap Hodrick. We have so many warriors that I'm sure one less won't damage the party and I've had an idea for a Pyromancer that's been gnawing at me for a bit.
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@Pathfinder I suppose that's okay, but I'll probably start the IC tomorrow. =p
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@Solaris - Okay, read it over again... for one, the personality section sounds more like a brief, brief history of the character. It doesn't describe his personality at all. And like I said in Discord, I don't like the idea of mental instability (besides depression or bipolar). This is mostly because the summoner (the one who summons everyone) would never want someone who's unstable for the current quest.

As for the abilities... I don't know. I still get a strong feeling you're trying to make him powered for the sake of being powerful vs having anything interesting. Maybe this is because I haven't seen his personality or history, but it's making me hesitant. Not to mention I do not like Relapse, for the same reason the summoner wouldn't summon him. I'd suggest you taking a look at @Lucian's Valter. I was very hesitate about allowing a vampire as well, but he was so well written and balanced that I only had one minor issue with the whole character which was easily fixed.

I'm going to be out this afternoon, but please ask the other players what they think and what they have to offer. A lot of players here have a lot of experience in writing nice, balanced, but still legendary heroes for this setting.
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I can get him done by then.
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@Roosan - 100% approved. =D
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Just so everyone is aware, I am promoting @Fabricant451 to Co-GM. While for the moment she won't be controlling anything story-wise (though she might later if she's okay with it), she does have permission to answer inquiries, look over character sheets and approve them. So don't hesitate to ask her if I'm not around. ^.^
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HalfOfLancelot What's worse: being heartbroke or roachbit?

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Just so everyone is aware, I am promoting @Fabricant451 to Co-GM. While for the moment she won't be controlling anything story-wise (though she might later if she's okay with it), she does have permission to answer inquiries, look over character sheets and approve them. So don't hesitate to ask her if I'm not around. ^.^


That is one fabulous choice of Co-GM, I must say.
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so we are starting tommorow?
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@Dynamo Frokane Chances are, yes, unless something comes up.
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@Lyla
Here is Balthazar, I'm not exactly sold on his personality yet but that's something I can refine when I'm not as burnt out.




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Barrett Oh, the year was 1778...

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I bet he's good at painting too...

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@Pathfinder the only concern I have is that his magic might be too powerful? I don't know. I could see him being a trump card for a lot of enemies... and what is the chaos magic capable of?

On another note, I'll try and post today but I am sick so don't be surprised if I post tomorrow.
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@Lyla
I can get where you concerns are coming from and most of the vagueness comes from the fact that I was super burnt out by the time I got to the magic. I'll add the specifics like if he uses too much magic too fast he'll explode and how the way he vents off built up heat actually hurts him.

Chaos magic is... well chaotic. You could throw out a bolt of lightning that mutates someone into a gibbering mass of flesh and teeth, or release a wave of yellow flames that makes enemies turn on each other like wild dogs. Let alone the ability to summon/commune with daemons. However I don't plan on using it all that much, it is The trump card in Balthazar's arsenal because it is a wholly evil and cruel magic. The possibilities are endlessly horrific. Plus there is always that chance where everytime he throws out a chaos spell he might be possessed by Daemons.

Besides, I know the rule of good storytelling. Magic can't solve all your problems, if it's the be all end all... well that's a pretty shitty story. I know my place.
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