[OOC] Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

[LillyDove]

Yes Alter, yes it is.

[LillyDove]

Shadowcatcher said
i thought about making another genin but i dunno. im still debating it.

Shadow, it will be highly appreciated and you will have extra love.

[solokolos]

Name:Naoto Shiratori
Nickname/Alias: N/A
Gender:Female
Age and date of birth:May 8th, 463
Age Appearance:13
Sexuality:Prefers Males

Parents: Naoto parents were Akio Shiratori and Arisa Shiratori (Father and Mother respectively).
Length and build 5 feet, 4 inches
Weight110 pounds
Favorite weather and seasonSpring

Village:Kirigakure
Birthplace:Kirigakure
Organization: N/A

Clan/Bloodline: N/A

Rank:Genin

Chakra Nature:fire

Appearance:

Personality:Naoto is a bit unstable, and her sense of right and wrong are skewed at times. She is a bit closed minded, and has trouble straying from mission orders, even if the situation would make it obvious that a need is arising to do so. Naoto has idolized Shinobi from a young age, and this has led to self esteem issues, as her idolized idea of Shinobis don't match up to her own self image, leading her to believe that her becoming a Shinobi is an impossible feat. Luckily for any higher ranking ninjas, Naoto has a large amount of respect for anyone in an authoritative position, and she almost outright worships Mizukage.

History:Naoto was given birth to by Arisa Shiratori, but she soon abandoned Naoto and Naoto's father, Akio Shiratori. Akio's parents were Tomohiko Shiratori, and Remi Shiratori (again Father and Mother respectively). Tomohiko and Remi moved to Kiragakure after producing only one child. Tomohiko was from Konoha, as was Remi, and they sought better living conditions then were available in Konoha. They succeded. . . To an extent. Arisa Shiratori's parents were Akahito Arakawa, and Saito Arakawa, who moved to Kirigakure from Konohagakure after a large dispute with a local company. Arisa left Naoto because of a firm belief that Akio could never provide for himself, much less a child, and she didn't want to be there when things "Went to hell." Naoto was almost completly unnaffected by this betrayal (directly at least), as she was at the tender age of 1 and a half years old. Akio on the other hand was shocked, and slowly reclused into a life of heavy drinking. Luckily for Naoto, Akio wasn't an angry drunk, because no matter how many times Akio's hands went for the Saki, Akio's hands never went for Naoto. Despite this Naoto has sworn to never touch alchohol, as she has seen how destructive it can be. Naoto's interest in the ninja academy was obvious even at the age of 5. Naoto's true inspiration for joinng came at around the age of 4 after she and her father were mugged on the way home from the butcher. After handing over the money (and meat) willingly, a passing ninja came to Akio's rescure, and got Akio's hard earned money back. Naoto's schooling in the ninja academy went quite well, as she focused on her studies. Near the end it was hard for her to keep her attention totally on schooling since her father's alchoholic tendencies escalated rather rapidly. Despite this, Naoto finished near the top of her class.

Theme Song: I burn RWBY volume 1 OST Jeff Williams ft. Casey Lee Williams & Lamar Hall

Weapons/Items:

Name of Weapon or Item:Wakizashi

Description: Katana esque short sword.

Appearance:The same basic shape as a katana, but significantly shorter.

Standard Shinobi Tools and Equipment

Skills/Abilities
Poor chakra control

Naoto has notable skill in both Ninjutsu, as well as Kenjutsu. She has some skill in Taijutsu, but lacks physical prowess.

Special Traits
Low pain tolerance

High chakra reserves for a genin.

Kekkei Genkai: None

Name of Kekkei Genkai: None
Clan: N/a
Description: N/A

Jutsu:

Canon Jutsu

Fire Style: Great Fireball Technique

Fire Style: Fire Release Stream

Custom Jutsu

Custom Jutsu

Name of Technique: Sword of Magnificent Flames
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Range: Self
Nature Type: Fire
Handseals: 5
Description: Naoto performs the five seals, and after the fifth seal is preformed Naoto grabs the hilt of her sword, and as she draws her sword a flame spills out from her hand, and engulfs the sword, harming all who encounter it, except the user.
Weakness: Naoto's flaming sword is very vunerable to water.

[AlterNathan]

no gm but: fire in kiri?

[solokolos]

History, in my opinion, properly explains why she would have fire while in Kiri.

[Fieryfly]

@solokolos:

First of all welcome ^^ Fire in Kiri is indeed totally fine.

I'd like you to fix your coding. It is not only there to be pretty it is also there because it is functional and makes it easy for us GM's to read and grade. Also the section about KG's is missing. I understand that Naoto doesn't have a KG, but I'd still like it to be in there.

Sword of Magnificent Flames is basically this right? Chakra Flow I am not sure if I would call that a D rank technique, but I'll let the other GM's decide on that.

[solokolos]

Ok, Fieryfly I fixed the coding, and I brought back the KG section I deleted earlier. Also, now that I'm looking at it, Sword of Magnificent Flames is basically just Chakra Flow, and due to the advanced nature of Chakra Flow I might just remove it. It still doesn't seem to me to be that advanced, considering in most situations it won't be very effective. More then anything, a flaming sword just seems intimidating. Also Naoto can't use the jutsu on anything but a sword, so she can't use it to set Kunai on fire.

[Little Alice]

- Solokolos

I like the CS. Though the history has some flaws, in direction of the past with Kirigakure. The things that need to be changed is that nobody that would be sane (to make it kind of very clear how the situation is) would move from Konohagakure to Kirigakure. During and after the Great War/First Shinobi world war, Konoha was (and is?) greatly hated in Kirigakure due the successes of Jinkama Moto. Before the Fifth Mizukage, Kirigakure also didn't accept any foreigners to settle inside the Mist.

I would suggest to change that she is maybe from another island that is within the Water Country. It would be way better, cause now it would be a bit strange.

[Shadowcatcher]

would Guren's crystal release be considered a kekki genkai?

[Little Alice]

That is a KG. And the KG is already being used by a Clan, the Hasewaga's. A clan led by Leslie. So far the Hasewaga's have only appeared in Konohagakure, so you could ask Les for the KG.

[solokolos]

I made the pilgrimage 2 generations in the past which is at least 30 years. 30 years ago is obviously before the first shinobi war, so it should be fine. Trust me I checked the history of the village on the back-up forum.

[j8cob]

I'm not going to grade his CS because I actually helped him make it. And he isn't lying, I forced him to read the history of Kirigakure and was the one to suggest he make the transition 30 years prior. Just throwing that out there.

[Fieryfly]

@solokolos: Accepted by me.

[solokolos]

Thank you FieryFly.

[Gerontis]

@Solokolos

Accepted by me as well. Post it in the CS bin and then we will try to place you in a team asp. ;)

[solokolos]

Thank you Gerontis :D I just finished posting it in the CS bin.

[Shadowcatcher]

@Alice

im so bursting with pride at our collab. 3 parts! ^^ thats amazing!

[Little Alice]

Ikr!
Its amazing. I so laughed when I noticed I couldn't post the collab in one go. x3

[Shadowcatcher]

or two even for that matter! we are awesome! *hi fives*

[AlterNathan]

Edited my CS, review please