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@alice

oh. okay i was wondering about that haha! thanks for clearing it up.

Haru: ha! in that case im so gonne beat- waah!

me: *punches her and she flies off like team rocket*
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me: *waves at Haruhi* "bye! until next time"
Takeshi: "hmm, seems Kiri just became less interesting, is konoha still accepting?"
me: "shut up, you're going to Kiri once you are nerfed!"
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@nathan

*cracks knuckles* you're joining kiri.
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@ Shadow:

"whoa! I am, I am"

@ any gm's

Please review my CS, I edited it accordingly to previous feedback
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good.
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@Nathan:

It seems you didn't quite understand my point before.

* above average chakra control.
* above average chakra reserve,

Is what your CS says right now. However what I tried to tell you before is that these two can never be equally high when you are a Genin. You can't have both at a high level, you have to choose one. If you want high chakra reserves that is fine, put that in and then set the chakra control to either normal or low and improve that during your training IC, thus that way gaining better chakra control as well as getting some nice experience under your belt.

The rest of the jutsu look fine to me though I would like a max range on Yukino ririisu: Yukino Haka (snow release: snow tomb).
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Fieryfly said
@Nathan:

It seems you didn't quite understand my point before.
* above average chakra control.
* above average chakra reserve
,Is what your CS says right now. However what I tried to tell you before is that these two can never be equally high when you are a Genin. You can't have both at a high level, you have to choose one. If you want high chakra reserves that is fine, put that in and then set the chakra control to either normal or low and improve that during your training IC, thus that way gaining better chakra control as well as getting some nice experience under your belt.

The rest of the jutsu look fine to me though I would like a max range on Yukino ririisu: Yukino Haka (snow release: snow tomb).


ah, well that was indeed a misunderstanding, i thought that i could heighten those as i lowered m strength, stamina and endurance, ill fix this.

ill add a max range to the snow tomb jutsu too
fixed it
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Seems fine to me now ^^ I accept it.
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yay!

+1...
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Alternathan :

--Takeshi Fujiwara

Denied by me.

For several reasons :
1. KG: yukiton & Koorinoton (Snow & Ice),
Ice is already a KG alone. With snow, that makes it two, something that I wouldn't accept. Besides, the bloodline of Ice Release needs both Water and Wind.
2. Koorino Ririssu: Koorino Kabe (ice release: ice wall)
How strong is the wall? The Earth Wall Technique is a B ranked jutsu. This technique shows some kind of the same impression with the ten feet ( thus 3 meter high). Its supposed to be a D ranked technique? Tone it down.
3. Yukino ririssu: Fubuki (snow release: snowstrom)
Again, too strong for a D ranked Technique. I find it hard to believe that a mere starting genin can whip up a snowstorm all by himself.If there would be more users, that would be okay, as a collaberation technique. But alone? I can't accept that for a starting genin.

I would like to also have more details on the KG. Saying it enables the user to make it start snowing, I want to know what the limit is. Can it make it snow in the desert or such areas? How big is the area? I am requesting this cause I forsee that in the future (Chuunin exams perhaps) that there will be somebody that find it very irritating that you have no set limitations and thus can go ahead and make them up. I rather have that you undergo it now then that one or some GM's are needed to end a discussion or such.
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Oh for godsakes! I have changed the jutsu 6 times already and even discussed with Gero and it still aint good enough? (or too strong... no pun intended)
If so I could really use some help because I ran out of ideas

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I have no problem with clarifying Kousetsu
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I would advise to ask help in the group chat to see if somebody there would be willing to offer some help. That and getting help of Gero isn't a ticket of getting things approved. He is our Head GM and we, GM's, will listen to him, but other than that, it won't grant any extra's for receiving some help of him.
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will you invite me back in then?
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Yukara Cho


Name[/u][/b]: Yukara Cho
Nickname/Alias: The Odd Child
Gender: Female
Age and date of birth: September 4, 12
Age Appearance: 13
Sexuality: Heterosexual

Parents: Nusei and Kuren Cho
Length and build Small boned, 5 ft 2 inches
Weight 90
Favorite weather and season Summer and Sunny

Village: Konoha
Birthplace: A small farm near Konoha
Organization: Konoha Military

Clan/Bloodline: Cho

Rank: Genin

Chakra Nature: Water



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Personality: Yukara is very open and friendly with her opinion, not afraid to speak her mind if she thinks she is right. She is stubborn and will argue until she can't exploit the topic anymore. She is both optimistic and pessimistic in the field, knowing her strengths and weaknesses. When she needs help she isn't afraid to ask for it, rather she demands the undivided attention of her teacher until she has perfected what she needed help with. Some people think she is a drama Queen but she really just likes to annoy people with her over exaggerated actions and lectures. Once she knows her strengths, she brags and flaunts it happily for people to ooh and ahh over it before she tells them to stop staring at her. Yukara is best kept entertained or esle the micheivious streak in her shows itself and she will get into all sorts of trouble.



History: Yukara was born into the Cho Clan, most of the Cho clan fell under middle class merchants or common farmers, which her parents both her. Her mother, Kuren Cho, and her father, Nusei Cho, were both commom farmers at the time when they met and even though her mother a moderately poor farm girl at the time married her father who owned a large farm that made considerably more income than that of her mothers. Her parents married anyways despite her fathers parents not being overly happy with him marrying someone who did not have that much wealth.

A year after they were married, they brought a beautiful little girl into Konoha, they named her Yukara. Much like most of the Cho, she was born with a degree of a red hair. Her parents were incredibly pleased with her as an infant, she inheritied her mothers looks and her fathers observative yet demanding nature. Unlike most people born into a common farming family, her parents would not let her work out in the feild. Insisting that she was an inside child, even though there was nothing to do inside because they did not have much to keep themselves entertained.

Once Yukara could walk, which was at the age of 2, she began getting into all sorts of trouble inside as her parents found her in the kitchen playing with cook ware. Once she could reach the door knob, this unlocked a great many heart attacks for her parents as they would come inside to find that she was missing. Having to search all over the village for her, they would often find her at the Academy playing a kunai and laughing. This was when her father noticed her interest in becoming a kunoichi. It made him proud and worried her mother, but as Yukara grew up, they both realized that she had great potential.

When she was 8, she would ask permission to go sit in the hospital and observe what they were doing. She would come home with stories about the hospital and all the different techniques they were using. Her parents were happy that she was learning so much at the hospital and it made it easier on them when it was time to send her to the Academy.

Yukara graduated the Academy at the age of 13 with good recommendations and word from her teachers, she was not at the very top of her class but in the top half of it. Just like her other relatives, she was skilled with genjutsu and had good chakra control.

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Weapons/Items[u][/u]:



Skills/Abilities
-Good Chakra Control
-Skilled at Genjutsu
-Good accuracy



Special Traits
Yukara has good chakra control like all Cho members do.


Kekkei Genkai: None

Name of Kekkei Genkai: None
Clan: Cho
Description: N/A



Jutsu:



Custom Jutsu



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@LillyDove:

Scratch the Body Flicker Technique and you have my approval. It is an unspoken rule that Body Flicker is not allowed in combat, so I would rather a genin just not have it at all.
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Okay ^_^
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I accept her too Lilly ^^
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If anyone is interested in making an Ame Genin or a couple, that would be great. Ame needs to feel the love and all that too. Thanks.
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i thought about making another genin but i dunno. im still debating it.
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re-introducing our jounin is the plan lilly?
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