[OOC] The Crucible - Winner Take All

[obliviousRoadie]

@Lugubrious basically someone finds her at random and they can adopt her but only if they satisfy her and when they do she will be something of a healer/buff thingo, she changes owner once her previous one dies

The Unstoppable Mlem (Special Recruitable NPC)

Name: Teru
Alias: The Unstoppable Mlem
Race: Dog (Unidentified Mix of Dog Breeds)
Sex: Female (although she insists Dog)
Class: Dog

Equipment: -Collar - Owner of Teru can attach their Phylactery to it.

Abilities: -Mlem of Life - Heals all and any ailments. The amount of mlems she needs to give to fully heal you depends on how severe the wound is.
-Scratch the Ears - Boosts your energy and restores your sanity.
-Boop the Snoot - She will sniff out the nearest supply cache for you.

Fighting Style: i not fight, i help hunan
but i only help human if he scramtch my belly and give me the walkings
and also play catch with me or give me treats also as well
if humnan do all this correct i protect hunan
if homon get put to snooz by other humon, other humen must do all above things again
i good dog i will protect and heal owner! yes

Personality: i a good dog! i loyal and good manner!
but also i RAR and BORF at stranger who want hurt owner!
yes they give me a small concern but it only small! i brave and adventurous dog!
i very special dog yes

Bio: She was adopted by a few colleagues ever since she was a mere five days old. She has served the College as a sort of second mascot and loyal pet ever since.

Wish: FOOD! and many big and cronchy bones! and plush toys and rubbery squeak-Orbs!

Echo: nice soft counch in which i can relamx, snooz and squimpsh my snoot, around me there are many treat and many bone, in front of counch is statue and altar of The Goodest Boy, Angel of Lemgth

Appearance:

A Good Boy

A slightly fat, mixed breed, medium size black and white dog. She wears a black leather collar on which one can attach their Phylactery.

Frenzy: ＭＡＸＩＭＵＭ ＢＯＲＫＤＲＩＶＥ
I RAR AND BORF SO LOUD AT THE SPEED OF SOUND THAT I GIVE STRANGER GREAT CONCERN AND HE RUN
SPEAK OF RUN, I ALSO RUN AT INCREDIBLE HIHG SPEED AND CAN BREAK THROUGH CONCRETE WALL

Inventory: Your Phylactery

what do you think G?

[ColouredCyan]

@ColouredCyan i'm already getting the feeling i'm losing this round too, great fuckin post dude

@obliviousRoadie

Hardest part was not just rewriting your post, you have such a good grasp on what I wanted for my character I actually had to abandon my original plan because it was just too similar.

If Teru is a Pug, Corgi or Boston Terrier then 10/10 would recruit

[obliviousRoadie]

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If Teru is a Pug, Corgi or Boston Terrier then 10/10 would recruit

@ColouredCyan

there's a pic of her in the appearance section, see if you like her

[ColouredCyan]

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there's a pic of her in the appearance section, see if you like her

@obliviousRoadie

That's a good boy. Wow. So Proud.

Maximum Overbork: Giga-Treat Eater!

Maximum Overbork: Treat Stealer

[kapuchu]

@Lugubrious
Speaking of Voting, a thought just occured to me. Since we all make our posts in the IC, we'll end up with 50% of the posts not even being actual Canon. It might be passable right now when there are only 2 people fighting, but when all of us suddenly have to fight... that's a lot of redundant posts that won't be "canon".

Are we to delete the content of the "Losing" posts, (adding it as a Hider in the Winner's, as mentioned in the Rule set), or what? We can't actually delete the posts entirely after all.

[obliviousRoadie]

@Lugubrious
Speaking of Voting, a thought just occured to me. Since we all make our posts in the IC, we'll end up with 50% of the posts not even being actual Canon. It might be passable right now when there are only 2 people fighting, but when all of us suddenly have to fight... that's a lot of redundant posts that won't be "canon".

Are we to delete the content of the "Losing" posts, (adding it as a Hider in the Winner's, as mentioned in the Rule set), or what? We can't actually delete the posts entirely after all.

@kapuchu

i think they'll just be copy-pasted and then saved under a hider somewhere idk

[obliviousRoadie]

@ColouredCyan A L L D O G G O S A R E G R E A T A N D A R E G O O D B O Y S

[ColouredCyan]

@Lugubrious
Speaking of Voting, a thought just occured to me. Since we all make our posts in the IC, we'll end up with 50% of the posts not even being actual Canon. It might be passable right now when there are only 2 people fighting, but when all of us suddenly have to fight... that's a lot of redundant posts that won't be "canon".

Are we to delete the content of the "Losing" posts, (adding it as a Hider in the Winner's, as mentioned in the Rule set), or what? We can't actually delete the posts entirely after all.

@kapuchu

Editing in Hiders for non-canon posts is a good idea, I don't think it worth the hassle of getting a hider in someone else's post, A hider on your own post collapses it down to an Avatar sized post which is good enough for me.

[Lugubrious]

@Lugubrious
Speaking of Voting, a thought just occured to me. Since we all make our posts in the IC, we'll end up with 50% of the posts not even being actual Canon. It might be passable right now when there are only 2 people fighting, but when all of us suddenly have to fight... that's a lot of redundant posts that won't be "canon".

Are we to delete the content of the "Losing" posts, (adding it as a Hider in the Winner's, as mentioned in the Rule set), or what? We can't actually delete the posts entirely after all.

@kapuchu

That's a good question! Actually, whether or not they are canon, the losing posts will still probably make for good reads. The only change that might be necessary, which I actually think would be a pretty good idea, would be to put the losing post into a hider titled 'Lost Echo - X vs Y'

@Lugubrious basically someone finds her at random and they can adopt her but only if they satisfy her and when they do she will be something of a healer/buff thingo, she changes owner once her previous one dies

The Unstoppable Mlem (Special Recruitable NPC)

Name: Teru
Alias: The Unstoppable Mlem
Race: Dog (Unidentified Mix of Dog Breeds)
Sex: Female (although she insists Dog)
Class: Dog

Equipment: -Collar - Owner of Teru can attach their Phylactery to it.

Abilities: -Mlem of Life - Heals all and any ailments. The amount of mlems she needs to give to fully heal you depends on how severe the wound is.
-Scratch the Ears - Boosts your energy and restores your sanity.
-Boop the Snoot - She will sniff out the nearest supply cache for you.

Fighting Style: i not fight, i help hunan
but i only help human if he scramtch my belly and give me the walkings
and also play catch with me or give me treats also as well
if humnan do all this correct i protect hunan
if homon get put to snooz by other humon, other humen must do all above things again
i good dog i will protect and heal owner! yes

Personality: i a good dog! i loyal and good manner!
but also i RAR and BORF at stranger who want hurt owner!
yes they give me a small concern but it only small! i brave and adventurous dog!
i very special dog yes

Bio: She was adopted by a few colleagues ever since she was a mere five days old. She has served the College as a sort of second mascot and loyal pet ever since.

Wish: FOOD! and many big and cronchy bones! and plush toys and rubbery squeak-Orbs!

Echo: nice soft counch in which i can relamx, snooz and squimpsh my snoot, around me there are many treat and many bone, in front of counch is statue and altar of The Goodest Boy, Angel of Lemgth

Appearance:

A Good Boy

A slightly fat, mixed breed, medium size black and white dog. She wears a black leather collar on which one can attach their Phylactery.

Frenzy: ＭＡＸＩＭＵＭ ＢＯＲＫＤＲＩＶＥ
I RAR AND BORF SO LOUD AT THE SPEED OF SOUND THAT I GIVE STRANGER GREAT CONCERN AND HE RUN
SPEAK OF RUN, I ALSO RUN AT INCREDIBLE HIHG SPEED AND CAN BREAK THROUGH CONCRETE WALL

Inventory: Your Phylactery

what do you think G?

@obliviousRoadie

I'd be okay with a dog npc hanging around, but I will not accept a first-person description. Rewrite it completely using proper language and 3rd-person perspective and I'd be alright with putting her in as a guest npc.

With that in mind, I'm going to go ahead and put a corollary in the OP sheet section detailing what to do to make a guest npc. For instance, a guest NPC has no Frenzy, since it won't have a phylactery of its own.

[obliviousRoadie]

@Lugubrious aight bossman i'll get to it tomorrow

[kapuchu]

@Lugubrious
The issue is that it's a LOT of clutter. Like, anyone coming in here and reading this stuff will be very confused. Heck, it'd prolly be difficult to find old posts and such, because you don't know which is Canon and which isn't.

I'd suggest just sticking the "Loser" in a Hider in the bottom of the Winner's post, but otherwise deleting the content of the Loser Post. That way the only "Visible posts" are the Winners, and thus we know the order of events.

[Lugubrious]

@Lugubrious
The issue is that it's a LOT of clutter. Like, anyone coming in here and reading this stuff will be very confused. Heck, it'd prolly be difficult to find old posts and such, because you don't know which is Canon and which isn't.

I'd suggest just sticking the "Loser" in a Hider in the bottom of the Winner's post, but otherwise deleting the content of the Loser Post. That way the only "Visible posts" are the Winners, and thus we know the order of events.

@kapuchu

Well, having 'Lost Echo' in a hider in a post should make it clear it isn't canon, both to a reader and to a player trying to find old posts. I'm not dismissing the idea, but your suggestion would involve additional work, and having lots of empty posts would look worse in my opinion that ones with hiders.

[Sentel]

@Lugubrious Quick question, am I to assume the slope in the distance ends in something vertical where the waterfall is?

[Lugubrious]

@Lugubrious Quick question, am I to assume the slope in the distance ends in something vertical where the waterfall is?

@Sentel

Yes, it ramps up on the sides toward a cliff.

[Sentel]

Aaaand post is out. Sorry I didn't quite allow for an announcer post Lug, I just felt like it would flow better this way. Hopefully I portrayed Hostile's character well enough.

[GreenGoat]

nnngh. work is catching up with me. Post will be slower to come. sorry ;w;

[Deadnaut]

A bitter old soldier acquires Soldier:76's mask and ult

I'm not even mad, this is amazing.

[Lugubrious]

A bitter old soldier acquires Soldier:76's mask and ult

I'm not even mad, this is amazing.

@Deadnaut

And would you believe that out of the whole list, it was selected by random chance?

[Deadnaut]

@Lugubrious

The dice gods have a sense of humor it seems.

I've GMed enough Dark Heresy to believe that.

[Roughdragon1]

Damn, now I wish I nicknamed my character "Death Seeker"