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@1Charak2there is literally nothing I could change or point out about the character that wouldn't be nitpicky. So as far as I'm concerned, the dude is accepted.
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Kind of waiting on you @Suku I'm pretty much looking into your crime miss legendary thief

Also I'm sorry I meant to post this here not the ic
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Okay, sorry I didn't hold up my end of the bargain in its entirety. By tonight I'll have read and posted. Yesterday got away from me. It was a real train wreck of events.
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will get something up today
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@Demon Shinobi

I'll likely work on my first post after you post. That way I'll have more then enough info to what things I may achieve.
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Okay so I posted. And then edited the post. I'll probably add a picture or something of Lutra if you never saw it in the ooc since I decided. King's familiar gonna rat ya out. lol XD

For now play out as you are until Tsumiki returns.
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And now you have a glass cannon rook ^-^ That is if you'll have me? @Demon Shinobi

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Ha, it'd be funny if Kenji (Fallen Angel) was the reason for Tsumiki finding her because of her tendency to attract Angels and all.
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@Polaris North That would be quite an interesting way for her to be found, and add a bit of history for at least one member of the cast c:
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Trapper you say? Interesting.

RunesStillMakeBetterTrapsThough

In all seriousness, I do find the character interesting. The cards themselves seem similar to runes though seem a bit more flexible in terms of the prep needed.
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@Delta44

They could also go Fallen Angel hunting too, since they both lost someone important because they were killed. There's also the possibility that the attackers are the same.
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@1Charak2 I wanted something magical that fit well enough with the rook, which can be offensive and defensive, so that's why they're so versatile :D Only downside is there's only 50 of them, and they don't make for very good armour XD

@Polaris North I like those ideas a lot ^-^ We'll have to wait and see if I'm approved yet, because I might be more of a queen than a rook atm :3
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Mhm, I suppose so. Well, we'll see.
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And now you have a glass cannon rook ^-^ That is if you'll have me? @Demon Shinobi



As is a few things needs to be made clear in my opinion I do find some of the abilities interesting but as of now a bit to much for the moment. With that said dxd lore states that divine beings can not be turned into a piece also on the topic goddess in human skin is different from being born of a goddess and a human which would be a demigod. Beyond that I like the char I really do but I feel like some parts needs to be fixed a bit more though it is up to Demon in the long run.

Side note I love your icon Haru is great one of my favorite chars in persona 5.
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And now you have a glass cannon rook ^-^ That is if you'll have me? @Demon Shinobi



After a more detailed read. Somethings are a problem

Demons are devils, they are the same race, therefore what does banishment entitle? Forced teleportation away?

"As demons and devils are still members of the same race, demons possess all the average powers and abilities as devils (increased physical abilities, enhanced senses, see in the dark, flight, & language"

Quote from wiki.

Secondly, Gateway needs a to be penetrable by outside forces.

Thirdly, it mostly just comes down to clarifying things most of this can be sorted with a bit more detail on the ins and outs of some things.
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...Kohana might just challenge Ekibe to a dancing contest. The fox can give her a run for money as far as dancing goes. That Glaive of hers can be used in a number of creative ways during dancing, heh~
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Hey there y'all, Tree here, the guy who you've probably seen stalking the thread like a weirdo.

Was invited by Demon for raisins, and I can't exactly post my character here for raisins, but just letting you all know that if I post in the IC, I'm not like, trying to shoehorn in on an rp without approval.
Also ain't none of y'all gonna see me coming
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@The Irish Tree right now:

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@Delta44Okay, so I haven't been able to completely go over every aspect of the character. At least, I went over the sheet, but I need to give a slightly deeper analysis myself. But for now, go over some of the points made by @Suku and @1Charak2. You need to elaborate and clarify on these subject, not just for them, but for me as well. Interesting character, needless to say, but still can't overlook some of the instances of unclear writing. I would also need to add, that we have, I believe, two glass cannons. Argos and kenji could both count as they're just about done in Close combat, Kenji more so. And then there is Alistair. Technically he isn't in the peerage yet, but he still faces this in combat problem, hence his hit and run tactics.
@Rune_AlchemistI'd pay to see that... XD
@The Irish TreeDon't make it weird bro XD
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portable stripper pole you can whack people with!

And all these glass cannons.
Just let Kohana and them have some alone time and have Tsumiki tell her she can do whatever she wants with them.

That'll get 'em real nice and good at close combat xD
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