[OOC] Closed

[Spriggs27]

@Crusader Lord I don't know if Diana could handle the weirdness of Kris, but she does have room under her weighted blanket for two, but she'd be really tsun about everything.

[Crusader Lord]

@Spriggs27 Honestly, i think she could handle the weirdness, and with some info would empathize with Kris. This would be especially true in both cases of handling weirdness and being more empathetic the more she gets an idea about Kris and who she is and such.

She'd definitely enjoy being under that weighted blanket for two, though, and would come to find the tsun bits about Kris pretty cute and growing on her in reality.

Then Diana'd probably be that doting girlfriend friend who playfully teases with and flirts with for her cute reactions and kisses hangs around with her friend! :)

[Spriggs27]

@Crusader Lord Yeah right, she's doing it for all the money that Kris is given by her father.

Kris would call her an idiot a lot and would be feeling even more confused about how to feel if Diana wanted to be her GF and she would say it's weird a lot.

She'd probably have to tell herself that the only reason she's doing it is so she can rematch her and fight her again and win.

At that point, Kris would still try to be all tsun

[Crusader Lord]

@Spriggs27 Pfft, the money? XD

Nah, on a serious note about my OC, Diana wouldn't do it for the money. That's just not her way.

Doing it all for the cute tsun girlfriend and coming to seriously care about her though? Yes, yes she would do it for that. XD

But hearing that, it could honestly be one of the cuter relationships in the RP if you wanted to do that, with Kris could being the Best!Tsun of the RP. Plus Felix and Dia would have rivals, which could be used for some side comedy as well.

[Spriggs27]

@Crusader Lord Maybe, but she could be doing it to get into a tsun princess's skirt.

maybe, gotta get outta this trouble first.

[Crusader Lord]

@Spriggs27 My goodness that sounds pretty pessimistic there! Haha! :P

She wouldn't just be doing it to get into a tsun princess' skirt either. Not that she'd argue against being able to do that, since they are both teenagers and might both get into that line of thought at some point, but it really wouldn't be Diana's main reason at all.

Ah, but yeah they are both in a predicament currently. Our OC's have to get out of this trouble being cemented on opposing sides of the bleachers for attempting to beat the crap out of each other! XD

[Old Amsterdam]

@Zelosse
As I mentioned earlier in the PM...

I'm officially dropping out of this RP. I just don't have the time to try and keep up and have 10+updates before I can reply anything. I'm starting a new job this week, beginning Transitioning very soon...

I apologise.

I give you full control of dia. If you ever need something from Dia and she's not talking to you, shoot me a PM. This was a blast, and I'm really glad to see it kick up so much attention again.

If you'd like to remove her completely, I have ideas for how and is be more than happy to work with you on that.

[Zelosse]

I understand your reasoning all too well. If things calm down and you feel like returning, don't hesitate to return. Your spot is secure.

Best of luck!

[Regitnui]

I'll be back on Friday. Anyone able to update me?

[Spriggs27]

I'll try

[Arya10108909]

@ZelosseThere's nobody in Gideon's math class as of right now. Since Manilow just kicked us all out, should I recruit people for that?

[Zelosse]

@Arya10108909 if that's what you wabt to do.

[Raptra]

@Sailorsadie Apologies if you were waiting for my response.

*Realizes Vera can use her newfound ability to spy on people round corners.*

[Rockin Strings]

Any comments or questions or are they good?

[Zelosse]

@Rockin Strings I will make my judgement known when work is over.

[Zelosse]

@Rockin Strings alright in order of my disapproval as I see them.

You have a thread bare personality for both characters. What feels like a cliche brother/sister partnership, coupled with a stock photo. While i don't really frown on that, I do feel it's a tad lazy and out of theme.
Most of us are using animated characters as a reference image.

You also fail to have anything written about their appearance that makes them unique. Scars, bags, preffered clothing, hairstyle, eye color, height. Nothing that shapes them as anything beyond a stock photo.

Another problem is that you have one background/history for both characters. Ifyou want two characters I expect two seperate and semi-unique history for each one. I don't care if they're related and fused at the hip. Show me you can do perspective for both individually.

On that issue I would also like to see a seperate image for each character you intend to play.

Finally, you absolutely will not be a darkness element. We have one currently and they got the spot due to a spectacular character sheet. If you cannot meet their level of detail I can't trust you to play an element with significant potential impact to later plot.

Lastly, your bag of miscellaneous stuff? I want a detailed list of everything in it or it won't be allowed.

[Rockin Strings]

@Zelosse Alright, I'll work on them more. I'll switch their elements to earth and wind. As for the bag, it's mostly useless stuff like rubber bands, spools of thread, small buckets, food coloring, and a bash of colored feathers.

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@Zelosse Alright, I'll work on them more. I'll switch their elements to earth and wind. As for the bag, it's mostly useless stuff like rubber bands, spools of thread, small buckets, food coloring, and a bash of colored feathers.

@Rockin Strings

The History looks a bit fuller now, I'd like to see some more history like any small event can be added that might give them an item or a bit of their personality.

Both personalities should be one paragraph long, we expect some personality on every character. They will probably get their own personality once you make posts with them and I find it a tedious task as well to write out their personality but try to get them both to one paragraph at least. Feel free to submit again when you worked on it some more.

[Regitnui]

Anything I need to know before jumping back in?

[Zelosse]

@Regitnui Manilow is on the slow and steady path to madness. Kris is a royal pain.