[OOC] Naruto: Yogensha. Partake in the prophecy.

[Dion]

@Spanner Eh, the actual reasons for the war are much larger than that, and serve as a better trigger for war to begin with. It'll be explained in due time. Having him be a trigger wouldn't really work that well.

I'm fine with him having swift release as long as we have a mutual understanding that he just uses it to be faster, but that it isn't like body flicker as in instantaneous movement to the point where he might as well be teleporting. As long as that's clear I don't think it'll be a problem.

[Spanner]

@Spanner Eh, the actual reasons for the war are much larger than that, and serve as a better trigger for war to begin with. It'll be explained in due time. Having him be a trigger wouldn't really work that well.

I'm fine with him having swift release as long as we have a mutual understanding that he just uses it to be faster, but that it isn't like body flicker as in instantaneous movement to the point where he might as well be teleporting. As long as that's clear I don't think it'll be a problem.

@Buddha

That's fine. I'll just change this part of his history as a whole and put it in a more generic way, without making reference to villages.
As for the swift release, that was pretty much what I meant for it to be anyway.

[Spanner]

@Buddha

And here is the edited version. Please tell me your thoughts for anything that still need correction, as I'm pretty sure there will be some mistakes somewhere - especially because I'm editing it by cellphone and in the middle of class that i felt like ignoring.

Souma Uzuki

Souma Uzuki

—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————

Extra

Battle Attire:

Casual:

—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————

Personalia

_{Information collected by the census office of Amegakure}

“Geez. Such a bother”

| Ｂｉｒｔｈｎａｍｅ: |

Uzuki Souma

| Ｎｉｃｋｎａｍｅｓ: |

Nanashi (No Name); Sword-Style Thief; Battle Addict; Lazy Monster

| Ａｌｉａｓ: |

Crescent Moon Devil

| Ｓｅｘ: |

Male

| Ａｇｅ: |

24

| Ｂｉｒｔｈｐｌａｃｅ: |

Konohagakure no Sato (Hidden Leaf Village)

| Ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ: |

Unknown Bloodline

| Ｒａｎｋ: |

Jounin

| Ｒｅｐｕｔａｔｉｏｎ: |

If asked to describe him, most of his acquaintances would resume his very being as "A lazy bastard with a monstrous talent for cutting anything that stands in his way", and that would be quite the accurate description for him. He is mostly recognized as an individual that shouldn't be messed up with yet can't be taken seriously, being overall seen as someone befitting of being called as a Wildcard.
Most of Souma's infame came from either the assassination of known jounin before he was even recognized as a chunnin or from the fearsome reputation he created for himself while traveling as a mercenary - a direct result of his prefference for taking absurdly difficult requests - Such as the elimination of a whole bandid group in the country of iron - for relatively low rewards as long as it suited his weird sense of righteousness - something that he developed in answer to his hate for the hypocrisy of the big villages. The fact that he continuously stoped to defy and defeat every single person that "carried a sword and looked strong" he found in his travels as a way of sharpening his skills with the sword may have played an equally big role tho.

—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————

Psychology & History

_{From detailed inspection and investigation by Black Ops and medical personnel}

“Do you really need to bother me right now? I was planning to sleep.”

| Ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ: |

The start of the story of the young adult known as Souma is far from being uncommon or special, being shared by many others through the years since the start of the ninja era: He was an orphan. While this statement may seem a bit simple, it does resumes his youth perfectly in despite of being a simple word. He was nothing but an orphan like any other, abandoned at birth by parents that probably felt that leaving him behind would be safer - or maybe never cared for him, he couldn't know (Or care) - Souma was raised on Konoha's orphanage for most of his infancy, being regarded as an overall quiet child who hardly interacted with others or have any problem by most of his former caretakers - quite the accurate description, considering that he wasn't especially remarkable back then - but that would quickly change after his entrance in the academy.

If asked now, he'd hardly know what exactly made him such an abnormal individual, but one thing was certain: it started in the academy. He doesn't know, even today, what exactly awakened his instincts in that place, but he know for certain that it happened in an instant: The quiet kid that he was back then instantly changed into one of the most promising future ninjas and undoubtedly the most troublesome one, being regarded as mischievous, lazy, fun loving individual and, above all, ridiculously talented individual.

Thinking deeply, the root of this sudden change was most certainly the person that started his training - and initiated him into the ways of a scoundrel - His foster father, Hayato Uzuki. If asked to describe him, Souma would most certainly choose the words "Carefree yet Sharp", two seemingly unrelated adjectives that undoubtedly suited the man to an abnormal extent: Hayato was as much of a genius as Souma himself, being regarded as the strongest sword user in the whole village before he even reached his thirties - a man that loved the sword as much as he loved fun and imparted the same values in the youth that he loved as a son.

With all of that being said, it's hard to understand how Souma, that earned such a good life, managed to turn into an fool that rushed to join a war torn country before he even managed to get his first girlfriend - an understandable doubt that will be erased by the events that followed the quiet period of the boy's life.

It all started to crumble when he received the worst notice of his life at the age of 15 - six months before his chunnin exam: His father, Hayato Uzuki, had died by the hands of a member of the Shinobi organization of an allied, assassinated without a chance to react due to a stupid grudge held by the young swordsman. The worst part? He wasn't caught. Due to the alliance made between Konohagakure and the other village, the criminal was forgiven with just minor punishments for the sake of "not damaging the allied military forced even more". No need to say that, to the boy that only had Hayato as family from the very start, this was the highest treason possible.

For the next month, the carefree smile that was often seen in the boy's face completely vanished, giving place to a gloomy expression and even gloomier attitude. This quickly changed in the following two months tough, as the boy gradually returned to his former self with some small changes: His eyes had a sharp gleam now, and his carefree smile gave a predatorial feel that only intensified with the passage of the months. By the time of his chunnin exam - that happened in conjunction with the allied village as a way of sealing the treaty - the boy had already changed into a different yet similar person: The sheath that once covered his true self - his "blade" - was now a thing in the past.

The first stages were so ridiculously easy for the boy that they almost felt like a joke. It was more than clear for him that, had they been in war times, he could already be a jounin with his level of proficiency, but at the moment it didn't matter. His only priority was getting the right spot in the finals - something that was easily done through having contact with one of the responsibles for the event. His target? It was obviously his father's killer daughter, a fairly talented boy around his age that the killer of his father regarded as being even more important than his own life.

It isn't hard to predict what happened next: Souma toyed with the girl to an unbelievable extent without even revealing his Kekkei Genkai, trapping the spawn of his enemy in a way reminiscent of a cat playing with the rat held under his paws until the father of the poor mice couldn't hold back his anger anymore, stepping into the arena to stop the fight. The result? He finally used his Kekkei Genkai - something that he discovered months ago but never had the opportunity to show to anyone, as he was waiting for his foster father to return home before making the reveal - taking the unsuspecting jounin by surprise and, consequently, managing to behead the man in front of his son before he could react to his attack with a smile in his face - for the first time in the last six months, he truly felt alive.

Of course the story couldn't end like this, and he was captured by the Shinobi of his village and escorted to face judgement for his sins - a laughable display of fake righteousness orchestrated by the same guys that forgave the man who killed his father. That being said, the hypocrisy of this specific judgement favoured Souma in the end, freeing him under minor punishments due to the potential he had to turn into a strong force for the village - an effort that ended up being for naught, as the boy sneaked away from the village in the following weeks, assuming the identity of a wanderer.

For the following 5 years, Souma lived as a wanderer - using his status as a neutral party to travel through most of the world in his search for perfecting his technique. He relied mostly in working as a mercenary ninja, serving for who paid more while using his free time to collect new techniques of handling the sword and having fun in the process. This lifestyle maintained itself until 2 years ago, when a woman who called himself as the shadow of the rain (Amekage) stopped him, praising his skills - that earned quite the fame through his 5 years as a merc - and requesting him to join her not as a Mercernary but as her loyal retainer - an attempt of recruiting him that relyed solely in the supposed honor he had as a swordsman - request to which he replied with an answer befitting of his personality: "Sure, if you manage to beat me I can do that." And an extra comment that would bring pride to his foster father: "But if I win, you're going to be my wife".

The result? He's still single and is now one of Amegakure's jounin under the command of the woman he swore to follow.

| Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ: |

Being an abandoned orphan, Souma never had - and never had any special desire to - the opportunity of meeting his parents. His foster father, however, was a member of the Uzuki family, a family known for their attainments in the use of the Konoha-Ryu, and naturally had some blood ties that still live in Konoha - Albeit none that Souma cared about enough to meet after leaving the village.

| Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｔｉｅｓ: |

Hayato Uzuki | Foster Parent | 32 by the time of his death, Konohagakure, Former Shinobi and the man responsible for Souma's love for the way of the sword.

| Ｄｒｅａｍｓ ａｎｄ ｆｅａｒｓ: |

Souma isn't the kind of guy to think deeply about the future, having the sole objective of enjoying his life while continuously enhancing his sword style. His biggest fear is being sealed or imprisoned mainly due to the implication having to stay alive without any opportunity of having fun.

—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————

Combat Reports

_{From detailed reports from previous missions and academy sparring matches}

“My speciality is cutting people until they stop moving. I can also cut animals and things though”

| Ｆｉｇｈｔｉｎｇ ｓｔｙｌｅ: |

Souma's fighting style is fairly direct, being mainly reliant on directly fighting the enemy at close range through the mixed use of his sword arts and Kekkei Genkai, overpowering anyone in his way through the use of a mix of his excessive speed and his masterful handling of swords.
At long range, he mainly relies on the few long distance techniques he knows and shurikenjutsu to distract the attention of his foes and force them out of their hiding spots, giving him the opportunity of getting close to them and finishing the fight through the use of his sword.

| Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａｉ － ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ ｌｉｍｉｔ: |

Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａｉ ｎａｍｅ

Jinton - Speed

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

Swift Release is a combined nature transformation kekkei genkai that can be used to move with instantaneous speed, granting the user an advantage over opponents with more strength than speed, such as users of Chakra Enhanced Strength. This nature therefore renders the user invulnerable against most taijutsu. It is unknown what elements this nature entails.
This Kekkei Genkai mostly acts as a supplementary skill for Souma's use of Kenjutsu - field that he appears to favour to an abnormal extent.

Ｓｔｒｅｎｇｔｈｓ

Souma mostly uses this Kekkei Genkai in conjunction to his sword techniques, giving him the opportunity of easily overpowering his enemies ay a close distance due to the absurd speed provided by it.

Ｗｅａｋｎｅｓｓｅｓ

Being only capable of short bursts of speed and failing to provide any form of long distance capacity, this Kekkei Genkai can be easily overpowered through the use of attrition tactics and long-range combat.

| Ｎｉｎｊａ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ: |

Ａ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

Blade of Wind
Hazy Moon Night
Swift Release: Shadowless Flight

Ｂ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

Flying Swallow
Cloud Style: Crescent Moon Beheading
Iai Beheading
Iaido

Ｃ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

Cloud Style: Deception Beheading
Dancing Blade Risk
Killing Intent

Ｄ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

N/A

Ｅ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

Academy Techniques

| Ｃｕｓｔｏｍ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ: |

Souma's Original: Cloudy Sky, Hidden Moon

Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ

Souma's Original: Cloudy Sky, Hidden Moon

Ｒａｎｋ

B

Ｒａｎｇｅ

Close Range

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

A technique made from the observation of the Dance of the Crescent Moon technique - unreplicable by Souma due to him being unable to use the shadow clone technique - this technique relies on the most basic clone technique to create a sole clone overlapping with the user and then using the swift style to instantly move behind the enemy and behead they while they're distracted with the illusory clone.

Souma's Original: Endless Moon

Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ

Souma's Original: Endless Moon

Ｒａｎｋ

S

Ｒａｎｇｅ

Close-Medium Range

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

A technique developed from mixing his swift style with the Iaido he learned through living with the Samurai, this monstrous skill uses the swift release to enhance the speed of the user's arms to an unbelievable extent for the span of three seconds, time that he uses to unleash up to 24 slashes coated with wind-based chakra, delivering an absurd damage not only to those directly in the range of the blade - that appears to be able to cut armour with an ease that can only be described as inhuman - but also to anyone directly behind them, as each cut produces a wind blade comparable to the wind release's Wind Cutter Technique.
The main disadvantage of this technique is that, due to the absurd level of speed attained, it puts excessive strain in the user's arms, resulting in harsh consequences when used without restraint.

| Ｗｅａｐｏｎｓ: |

Violent Moon

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ

Violent Moon

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ

Sword/Katana

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

A simple looking Katana with an equally simple pitch black sheath, the only special characteristic of this weapon is it abnormal sharpness: A result of Souma's excessive use of chakra augmentation, that ended up permanently infusing the sharpness characteristic of his wind release into the blade.

[Dion]

@Spanner Besides some minor errors, I don't really see anything wrong at the moment. Consider it accepted and thereby the applications for a jonin will close.

[Dion]

@Spanner Oh, actually. I just realized you don't have an S rank. While I'm okay with you not having one, I think he should have one. Maybe something related to his swift release would be cool. Combine it with an element, or his sword, maybe?

[Spanner]

@Spanner Oh, actually. I just realized you don't have an S rank. While I'm okay with you not having one, I think he should have one. Maybe something related to his swift release would be cool. Combine it with an element, or his sword, maybe?

@Buddha

I have one tho? Custom Jutsu.

[Dion]

@Spanner Shit, I misread, thought that was an A rank jutsu. Sorry, ignore what I said then.

[Spanner]

@Spanner Shit, I misread, thought that was an A rank jutsu. Sorry, ignore what I said then.

@Buddha

Well, it was supposed to be an A Rank before to be honest. Thought it was a little bit too strong and changed to S.

[Dion]

Uragiri Sakana

—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————



—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————

Personalia

_{Information collected by the census office of Amegakure}

“Violence is in our blood. Amegakure's creation was through war. It is inevitable we return to our roots.”

| Ｂｉｒｔｈｎａｍｅ: |

Uragiri Sakana

| Ｎｉｃｋｎａｍｅｓ: |

Blackeye

| Ｓｅｘ: |

Male

| Ａｇｅ: |

16

| Ｂｉｒｔｈｐｌａｃｅ: |

Amegakure

| Ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ: |

Uragiri

| Ｒａｎｋ: |

Jonin

| Ｒｅｐｕｔａｔｉｏｎ: |

Sakana is relatively well known throughout Amegakure, mostly because he became a jonin at the young age of 16. Although not impossible, it is relatively uncommon. It was to be expected however, as Sakana is a very skilled shinobi, on par with a genius. However, this does have a turnside - he is also known to have some ideas that are directly in line with Iie Hizen's thoughts and ideas, and he takes them perhaps a bit too literally.

—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————

Psychology & History

_{From detailed inspection and investigation by Black Ops and medical personnel}

“Any time you get hurt and survive - that's a lesson. A child only sticks his finger into the flame once.”

| Ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ: |

Sakana was born in Amegakure 16 years ago, under the reign of Iie Hizen. Being raised in such an environment was not an easy feat (but one that all his peers eventually had to get through). However, Sakana seemed to thrive in an environment where any sign of revolution was punished harshly. He graduated to the genin rank at 12, which was a relatively standard age for a boy to become a genin. His time in school had been relatively uneventful - he performed above average, but far from perfect. Most of that had to do with his attitude, being prone to being disinterested in whatever the teacher had to teach.

Throughout his academy time, he was relatively indifferent about Amegakure, but after graduating his loyalty began growing to a point where he would support the Amekage even if he committed mass murder. Seeing potential in Sakana, his sensei allowed him to take part in internal chunin exams, which were harsh but fair, and at age 14 he was already made a chunin, a step ahead of his peers. It was at that point that his name began spreading around too, as he became known as 'that kid with the black eyes who is already a chunin.' Of course, that was only a temporary title before people actually learned his name.

He participated in some small scale skirmishes with Sunagakure mostly, trifling over borders and trade. Most of them were just small team based missions where they ran into Sunagakure shinobi that claimed they were intruding on their business, but they were usually easily routed. There were very few cases where people actually died.

To further add to the surprise however, he became a jonin at age 16, only making his genius more apparent. Although he didn't stand out as a legendary shinobi or anything of the like, he was simply very good at what he did making himself quite the promising individual early on. It seemed that with every promotion his loyalty to the cause of Amegakure became bigger, almost to the point where people openly questioned whether he had been brainwashed or was under some permanent genjutsu or something.

He has been a jonin for, give or take, 3 months now. He was primarily doing missions during this but recently was put on hold by the Amekage and alerted that he will be leading a team shortly, teaching three genin in the art of warfare and performing duties with them as they enter a period of turmoil with the ongoing war.

| Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ: |

_{Uragiri clan symbol}

The Uragiri clan is relatively unknown, even in Amegakure. They provide mostly standard civilians in Amegakure who work in the industrial plants creating metal and tools. They all stand out, however, due to the black and yellow eyes that run in their family - any Uragiri clan member is recognizable by their eyes. This trait, while genetic, can be recessive and there are very few Uragiri clan members who do not have these eyes - but they do exist. In such a case the clan members can be identified by their clan icon, which is a set of black and white koi circling each other. The image is fitting, given that their eyes give them a somewhat fishy appearance.

The clan is primarily (90%) just pure civilians that mostly work in shops or the industry. The remaining 10% are shinobi, like Sakana. And, while they are good at what they do, they are typically not very well renowned - not because nobody likes them or so, but just because they are pretty average all together. For that, Sakana is pretty much the one exception. In doing so, he has also become the clans' pride, more or less.

| Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｔｉｅｓ: |

Uragiri Same | Mother | 41, shinobi as part of the regyura. She is currently leading her own team of genin as well.
Uragiri Sāmon | Father | 45, teacher at the shinobi academy in Amegakure. Most kids like him because he 'looks cool.' He's not a bad teacher, just a little boring.

| Ｄｒｅａｍｓ ａｎｄ ｆｅａｒｓ: |

What is there to dream of for a person whose only loyalty is to the village? What is there to fear but death itself?

Sakana has no higher aspirations - his goals were met the day he became jonin, and his further goals are to do whatever it takes to aid Amegakure in becoming better.

His fears are, perhaps deep down, also linked to that. Seeing Amegakure lose a war or become annexed are truly fears but are they intrinsically his? Every person in Amegakure should share those fears. No, he has no fears of his own - only those of his village.

—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————

Combat Reports

_{From detailed reports from previous missions and academy sparring matches}

“All your training is useless if you don't know how to apply it - once you take a life, you'll understand.”

| Ｆｉｇｈｔｉｎｇ ｓｔｙｌｅ: |

Sakana is a ninjutsu genius, mastering 3 elements not only at barely his first year as a jonin, but as a 16 year old no less. For this reason he utilizes his ninjutsu a lot. He prefers to stay in close to medium range, taking a bit of a front role at times but maintaining enough distance to use ninjutsu. Never the less, he is also quite skilled at close combat, though this isn't his forté so to speak.

| Ｎｉｎｊａ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ: |

Ｓ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

Ura Shishō Fūin

Ａ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

Katon: Gōka Messhitsu
Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku
Kuchiyose no Jutsu [See details in lower section]

Ｂ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku
Doton: Doryū Jōheki
Suiton: Sensatsu Suishō
Hien

Ｃ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu
Sūpu-jutsu: Sutōbu ​​o tentō
Suiton: Ja no Kuchi
Suiton: Amegakure no Jutsu
Sūpu-jutsu: Sūpu mizu
Sūpu-jutsu: Bōru

Ｄ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

Doton: Earth Shelter
Katon: Karyūdan

| Ｃｕｓｔｏｍ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ: |

Sūpu-jutsu: Bōru

Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ

Sūpu-jutsu: Bōru

Ｒａｎｋ

C

Ｒａｎｇｅ

Up to 20 meters.

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

This Doton technique forms the basis of a three-nature combination. The Bowl jutsu causes the target to be encased in a dome of earth around them, which then lifts up off of the earth on four earthen pillars. The jutsu is simple. There really isn't much to it - it doesn't kill, damage, or harm you, it just traps you inside the dome. That's bad, right?

Well you can break free. Use S, A, B, or C-rank lightning based jutsu's to break through, or use sheer force if you're really that strong. Just do it in time before the next part of the combo.

Sūpu-jutsu: Sūpu mizu

Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ

Sūpu-jutsu: Sūpu mizu

Ｒａｎｋ

C

Ｒａｎｇｅ

Up to 20 meters.

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

This Suiton based jutsu is the next step. Thought being trapped in a dome of earth was bad enough? WRONG! Through a hole in the top of the dome that briefly opens at the command of the user, the user then spews water into the 'soup bowl' until it's full of water. Congratulations, you'll now be drowning!

Since this is a suiton jutsu, you could possibly use wind to create a bubble of air for yourself to breathe, though it's not drowning you need to worry about. At this stage of the combo it becomes more or less impossible to use electricity to free yourself from the dome as you'd electrocute yourself. Unless you're willing to risk that. Sheer force would still be enough to break free, but since water slows down movement, it'd likely have to come from the outside.

Or another solution. Maybe you can think of something. Better hurry before the next step, which is..

Sūpu-jutsu: Sutōbu ​​o tentō

Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ

Sūpu-jutsu: Sutōbu ​​o tentō

Ｒａｎｋ

C

Ｒａｎｇｅ

Up to 20 meters.

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

The final step in the three jutsu combo. True to it's name, this is the step that probably is the most dangerous for whomever gets trapped. Using the Katon nature, the user lights a fire underneath the earthen soup bowl/dome that they created, beginning to boil it at an alarming and dangerous rate for whomever is inside. Drown in the soup made of your own body! Muahaha! Ahem. There is no real defence for this step, if you are trapped.

For outsiders it's possible to blow out the fire using wind jutsu, to quench it with a water jutsu, or to simply free those in the bowl with force. Electricity is possible but ill-advised since you'd probably electrocute your friends inside the bowl.

| Ｗｅａｐｏｎｓ: |

Two knives

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ

Knives x2

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ

Straight edge knife, corded handle

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

These are two blades made of steel that can be infused (through the Hien/Flying Swallow technique) to sharpen their properties and make them more deadly. Besides that, they have no real 'special' properties.

| Ｓｕｍｍｏｎｉｎｇ: |

Shima the Newt

Ｎａｍｅ

Shima

Ｓｐｅｃｉｅｓ ａｎｄ ｓｉｚｅ

Shima is a newt of about 1.5 meters high, and five meters long. However, most of that is his tail. He is a bright orange with black drawings all over his body in various shapes, most notably a marking on the front of his head that reads 'Shima' in kanji. This marking seems to be entirely natural and it seems to be the case that he was named after this shape.

Ｐｏｗｅｒｓ ａｎｄ ｃａｐａｂｉｌｉｔｉｅｓ

Shima has the 'power' to produce a large flame from his throat by using his chakra, producing either a steady high pressure stream of fire or a large fireball. Furthermore, his aquatic nature as a newt means he's extremely capable in the water and can swim extremely fast - while he is much, much slower on land. ]

Lastly he can fit up to three people in his mouth if they sit down.

Alright, it's finished. I might add more to the personal biography later but it won't be of relevance for the RP I think.

[Dion]

Review in red

Mizushima Sachi

—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————


lol

—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————

Personalia

_{Information collected by the census office of Amegakure}

“I'm not all too special.”
damn right bitch

| Ｂｉｒｔｈｎａｍｅ: |

Mizushima Sachi

| Ｎｉｃｋｎａｍｅｓ: |

Freak, Murderer, Thief
great

now my character has reasons to dislike her from the get-go

| Ａｌｉａｓ: |

N/A

| Ｓｅｘ: |

Female

| Ａｇｅ: |

14

| Ｂｉｒｔｈｐｌａｃｅ: |

Konohagakure

| Ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ: |

Mizushima

| Ｒａｎｋ: |

Genin

| Ｒｅｐｕｔａｔｉｏｎ: |

Sachi’s unnatural eye gives her a bit of a nasty reputation among her peers. They believe that she killed the Uchiha her sharingan was from with her bare hands and ripped his eyes out like some sort of monster. Whenever she tried to defend herself, she dug herself an even deeper grave. The orphanage did not treat her well socially, leaving her a bit estranged. So nobody knows her really beyond what she looks like?

—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————

Psychology & History

_{From detailed inspection and investigation by Black Ops and medical personnel}

“W-What? I'm not comfortable talking about that....”

| Ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ: |

Sachi was born to the Mizushima clan of Konohagakure. Specifically, Kurui and Muchi. Two of the clan's top shinobi, at least, when they were still shinobi. They had been retired due to their decline in performance, so they taught in the school. Teaching in the school taught them a love for children, though it might be the other way around for others. They tried for a child, and so Sachi was born.

When Muchi contracted a chakra virus, Kurui did everything he could to stop it, but there was nothing he could do. She passed in her sleep the night of Sachi's second birthday. Thus began his research about Dōjutsu, he was bitter and spiteful that his beloved wife had died. He had this delusion that one of the Sharingan's genjutsu could have stopped it. There was no practical reasoning for this, and when he tried to talk to the Uchiha, they laughed at him and shunned him. It got so bad that even his own clan shunned him.

Kurui's delusion took him to a point where it became less about the chakra virus and more about stealing a sharingan to fuel a power-hungry ego of his. These traits that he showed were more apparent each and everyday, making a negative impact on his daughter. She became incredibly timid and afraid of everything, becoming a jumpy child.

Around the age of 10, Kurui finally went off the deep end. He captured and tortured a young man named Uchiha Fuun. Tortured being used relatively loosely, because while Kurui did not inflict any wounds beyond ripping his eyes out, he did not put the boy out of his misery and left him to suffer.

Sachi was vehemently against this, and knew it was wrong, despite her fathers attempts to trick her, telling her that he volunteered and such. Though, these protests amounted to nothing in the end. Kurui knocked her out and transplanted the eye. Sachi did not take well to this, and threatened to go to a higher-up of some kind, but Kurui kept her quiet, he had been planning to flee the leaf regardless.

Kurui forcefully took Sachi and fled the village after learning that Amegakure was currently taking in refugees. They made it to the Hidden Rain Village safely, but was met with an Uchiha hit squad, presumably friends and family members of Fuun. They killed Kurui, leaving Sachi to herself. The leader of the hit squad told her bluntly that he wanted her to suffer for her fathers' actions.

After being found by the minashigo-in koyō sābisu, she was quickly enlisted to be trained in the orphanage. She hardly ever used her sharingan, only but once when she was being harassed by another student about it. Sachi lashed out, knocking the student to the ground.

This caused an instructor, Kūki Ryuu, to take a special interest in her. He wondered just what the girl had to offer EHEHEHEHEHE WE FINNA STEAL THAT SHARINGAN FOR OURSELVES, and while it wasn't much, he believed she had potential. Proficient in Fūton, Ryuu taught Sachi the basics of the nature, allowing her to copy Fūton techniques as well as Suiton, her natural affinity.
Ryuu was and continues to be a father figure for her, considering hers was less than subpar. nah seems like a top bloke to me 10/10. I think you got the orphanage down pretty well considering they're this ROOT-esque organization

| Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ: |

The Mizushima are native to Konohagakure, renowned for their water release techniques. They were one of the first families to settle in the Hidden Leaf, along with the Akimichi, Yamanaka, and Nara. The family has no kekkei genkai, but a numbered amount of techniques that can be attributed to their name. While Sachi has never met a majority of her extended family, when seeking refuge in the Hidden Rain, her father brought scrolls containing jutsus he was planning to learn with his newly-acquired sharingan.

| Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｔｉｅｓ: |

Mizushima Kurui ✝ | Father | 42, Kurui studied the common dōjutsu within Konohagakure, most specifically the Sharingan. While he had multiple studies on the Byakugan, it was not the one he was most interested in. He wanted to know exactly how the copying aspect of the eye worked , and to do that, he had to have a sharingan on hand. After asking around, it was clear no Uchiha was interested in helping his studies. Which meant he had to take matters into his own hands.

Mizushima Muchi ✝ | Mother | 38, most of her mother's past is unknown to her. Sachi had constantly badgered her father before his untimely demise, but he would never budge.
Unbeknownst to Sachi, Muchi was a beautiful young house wife up until she contracted a chakra virus, dying when Sachi was only two years old.

| Ｄｒｅａｍｓ ａｎｄ ｆｅａｒｓ: |

Sachi dreams to be rid of the horrible trauma that she's faced, watching her own father be killed in front of her, his stolen sharingan being ripped out in such a gory and horrible fashion. Sachi has a fear of the Uchiha, and whenever she sees another wielder of the Sharingan or their symbol, she freezes up momentarily.

—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————

Combat Reports

_{From detailed reports from previous missions and academy sparring matches}

“Why are you looking at my eye like that?”
cause it's a sharingan dumbass. you think the orphanage would teach her that she's not normal

| Ｆｉｇｈｔｉｎｇ ｓｔｙｌｅ: |

Sachi fights at a mid-range, using long-range ninjutsu to wear down an enemy slowly, while still being able to get up close with her taijutsu. so she can do everything????

| Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａｉ － ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ ｌｉｍｉｔ: |

Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａｉ ｎａｍｅ

Sharingan

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

Due to the fact that she only has one Sharingan, it's not as effective as it could be. She can not use any of the Genjutsu, the eye she has seems to be naturally pre-disposed to work as the eye of insight, granting her the ability to see chakra, have an incredibly high perception, and the ability to copy almost any jutsu she sees although this is true, it's most certainly limited for her, especially since she has 1 tomoe.. Sachi only has one tomoe.

Ｓｔｒｅｎｇｔｈｓ

It grants Sachi high perception, and the copy aspect of the eye works perfectly.

Ｗｅａｋｎｅｓｓｅｓ

She can not use any of Sharingan's Genjutsu techniques, which are considered to be some of the most powerful techniques that Sharingan allows. this isn't a weakness but a limit. a weakness is something that someone else can exploit to get around the sharingan or deal with it. in short, what are the kinks in the sharingans armor?

| Ｎｉｎｊａ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ: |

Ａ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

N/A

Ｂ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

Suiton: Suishōha (downscaled to half the size) k

Ｃ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

Mizu Kamikiri
Mizu no Muchi

Ｄ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

Fūton: Toppa
Suiton: Mizu Shuriken (up to two)

| Ｃｕｓｔｏｍ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ: |

Mizu Kamikiri

Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ

Mizu Kamikiri

Ｒａｎｋ

C

Ｒａｎｇｅ

Far-Mid

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

A jutsu created by the Mizushima, Sachi slams her foot into the ground, much like the Tsūtenkyaku, causing water to rise up and travel towards her target as a slicing jet. Simple jutsu so a small description like this will suffice

Mizu no Muchi

Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ

Mizu no Muchi

Ｒａｎｋ

C

Ｒａｎｇｅ

Far-Mid

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

A jutsu created by the Mizushima, Mizu no Muchi is a ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a whip. The whip will function in the normal fashion. same as before

Take a look, improve where you see fit and post it in the char tab.

@Neurovoid

[BladeSS4]

@BladeSS4 It still doesn't really explain why her mother was allowed to stay. Also I don't really understand why you went for the Hozuki clan specifically since you don't really use their jutsu or anything. You don't have to edit it in but maybe you can give me an explanation here?

@Buddha

Well it was a toss up between Hozuki and Yuki clans, it was mostly to give him the water nature from clans that are water users. Yeah, not a really good reason but I figured he could learn some of the jutsu the Hozuki clan can use later on. Just right now this is just his own personal jutsu he learned on his own or through his time through school. I figured it would be better this way since he is a Genin he could learn new things as he goes though the rp.

As for his mother I could have her thrown out of the city but I figured making her a servant would be just keeping her as a resource, I mean she might not be able to use jutsu but she can clean floors and do other chores for the kage, but I can change the history to get rid of her I can but I didn't see the need to have it that way but I can change that if I must.

[Dion]

@BladeSS4 I believe that the Hozuki hydrification techniques can actually be learned by anyone though, not just Hozuki. It's just a hiden?

[BladeSS4]

@BladeSS4 I believe that the Hozuki hydrification techniques can actually be learned by anyone though, not just Hozuki. It's just a hiden?

@Buddha

I don't think its even that tbh. Looking it up it doesn't say it is, it just says it is the signature of the Hozuki so I guess anyone could learn it. It sort of sounds like the uchiha fireball jutsu and that anyone could really use it. I think if a Hozuki clan member used it I would think it would be easier but I don't think it matters with who is in the clan. If it doesn't really matter, then Hozuki is just really a name or a prominent canon clan.

I guess it really isn't important to keep him as a Hozuki other then it is just a name of clan that uses a lot of water Jutsu that anyone could really learn on their own. So do you want me to change his name because I can I just didn't want to call him an Uchiha because I felt it would be unique I guess to have someone who was of that bloodline but didn't have their name.

[Dion]

@BladeSS4 I mean we have Neurovoid's character who has also got a Sharingan. Having an Uchiha would be acceptable if they arrived as refugees during the recent war. But you can give him a regular surname, that's up to you.

[BladeSS4]

@BladeSS4 I mean we have Neurovoid's character who has also got a Sharingan. Having an Uchiha would be acceptable if they arrived as refugees during the recent war. But you can give him a regular surname, that's up to you.

@Buddha

I could make a regular surname or just make him part of being a refugee family, then I would have to completely redo his backstory or well a part of it. I start on the rework and just go with the refugee thing and make it a bit more simpler instead of making it more complicated then it has to be lol

[Dion]

@BladeSS4 I think that's a solid idea lol. Complexity isn't always good.

[BladeSS4]

Here we go again. Another back story this one got a bit darker then I intended it to get but I hope it is 'simpler' but it is very obvious I am not very good when it comes to coming up with a backstory, but I changed it from what it was I hope it works now.

Tensai Uchiha

Tensai Uchiha

—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————


—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————

Personalia

_{Information collected by the census office of Amegakure}

| Ｂｉｒｔｈｎａｍｅ: |
Uchiha Tensai

| Ｎｉｃｋｎａｍｅｓ: |
None until someone gives him one
| Ａｌｉａｓ:
N/A

| Ｓｅｘ: |
male

| Ａｇｅ: |
13

| Ｂｉｒｔｈｐｌａｃｅ:
Hidden Rain

| Ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ: |
Uchiha

| Ｒａｎｋ: |
Genin

—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————

Psychology & History

_{From detailed inspection and investigation by ANBU and medical personnel}

| Ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ: |
Tensai was born in the rain village, his mother was found and caught by the Rain Village as she was on a spy mission. Tensai was born and his mother died at child birth it was taken in and raised by one of the servant families of the Amekage Iie Hizen.
Tensai was kept close to the Amekage because of his bloodline seeing the value of having an Uchiha that could be raised in the service to the Rain Village. The ANBU kept a close eye on him as he grew up, with the blood of an Uchiha running through his veins, they watched as he progressed to see if any of the Uchiha traits came to be as he was growing up. They also watched over him to also prevent any Uchiha attempts to take him from the rain village, but there wasn't one.

5 years old
At five years old Tensai joined the shinobi academy and began his studies, he learned slowly. During his time in the academy he spent all his time either studying or training. Tensai wanted to impress Iie Hizen as he thought of him as his father but not once did he ever. Tensai also felt his cruelty and seen it almost first hand.
Once when he was eight years old he was playing too close to the Amekage talking to his black ops squadran. He never heard anything but he had a curse put upon him to prevent him from speaking of what ever was said. He was branded with a curse that was burnt into his back. The pain was a reminder that he shouldn't ease drop one the Amekage.
11 years old
During near the end of Tensai's year's learning to become a Genin, he remembers one day above all others. The day Iie Hizen had died. He did mourn, the only person he knew like a father died, even if he had caused him pain. Tensai on this very day made a goal to become the Amekage one day. Two years later Tensai became a Genin.
Personality wise, Tensai is a very friendly person. He is rather eager to impress nearly anyone. He is a bit of a show off, likes to go big or make that extra effort to do something when he doesn't need to.

| Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ: |
Tensai's family originates within the leaf village. His mother and father both part of the Uchiha clan. Although Tensai never met his father or mother. His mother Ari Uchiha was sent on a mission while she was pregnant. She was only eight months along. This was suppose to be a simple recon mission, and she was picked because of her condition. Normally this would never had happened but being under a special root black ops division this was an off the books mission. The root division wanted information by any means necessary.
She was to infiltrate the rain village and collect Intel and then return to the leaf. Ari was suppose to just keep the rouse of a pregnant nomad coming to the village for medical aid for her unborn baby. The plan nearly worked she had gotten some Intel until she went into labor way earlier then expected.
During labor her sharingan appeared and scrolls that she put the Intel on were found. The rain caught her and had planned to question her once her child was born. It didn't go as planned as she ended up dying while giving birth to her child. The rain village was stuck with a dead leaf Uchiha spy and her infant child. As the opportunity approached, the infant was given to a servant family directly under Iie Hizen the family recently lost their child at birth. The eyes from the mother of the infant Uchiha were extracted by the Rain ANBU black ops and the body thoroughly studied.
Later the body of the mother was place way outside of the Rain village with different types of weaponry scattered about to look as if several different villages attacks. Ninja tools that of the stone and mist. With the body mutilated so much way it was hard to tell how she died. All this was done to keep the leaf from looking for the young Uchiha.
The child Tensai Uchiha was ultimately meant to become a weapon for the rain village to serve and protect it at all costs.

| Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｔｉｅｓ: |
.

Uchiha Ari| Birth Mother | 40| None|N/A| Dead

Uchiha Masaru | Birth Father| 45, Leaf village, N/A and Has never had contact or has knowledge of his son ever being born or exists more. Thinks that his wife and unborn child were killed on some sort of black ops mission.

Hokori Jin| Foster Father| 40| Rain Village|Blacksmith
Hokori Akane|Foster Mother| 38| Rain Village| Maid
| Ｄｒｅａｍｓ ａｎｄ ｆｅａｒｓ: |
Tensai Dreams of becoming a Amekage that was better then the fourth, to see the village grow and stop being a village torn by war.

Fears, Tensai fears a few things, he fears the village will get so consumed by war one day that it will just fall apart. He also fears snakes.

—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————

Combat Reports

_{From detailed reports from previous missions and academy sparring matches}

| Ｆｉｇｈｔｉｎｇ ｓｔｙｌｅ: | Close to mid. Tensai prefers fighting with Kenjutsu, and fighting up close and personal. He can use jutsu to a mid range fighting, he lacks in long range combat. Also his skills when it comes to genjutsu are horrible.

| Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａｉ － ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ ｌｉｍｉｔ: |
Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａｉ ｎａｍｅ Sharingan currently not percent in Tensai

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ A visual ocular jutsu, that of the uchiha clan. The power in the eyes, eyes that can see through genjutsu, able to see and predict and mimic and ninja's abilities that aren't bloodline traits. The sharingan has a multiple forms and multiple other abilities depending how far it is awaken. The normal and more common Sharingan is easy to spot out they are red eyes with three dots around the pupil with a circle that connects the three other dots.

Ｓｔｒｅｎｇｔｈｓ
Able to see through moderate genjutsu-(depending on the development of the sharingan.
Able to predict a ninja's jutsu and technique that aren't bloodline trait analyzes at great speeds.
Able to see chakra and chakra natures

Ｗｅａｋｎｅｓｓｅｓ
High Charka consumption
Quite a few blind spots outside the field of vision.
Further Awakened Abilities of the Sharingan does damage to the eyes.

| Ｎｉｎｊａ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ: |
_{Jutsu names can be found here.}

Ａ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
N/A
Ｂ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu
Ｃ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Cloud Style: Back Slice
Cloud Style: Front Slice
Ｄ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
N/A
Ｅ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Acadmey Skills

| Ｗｅａｐｏｎｓ: |
Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ Chakra Sword

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ Sword a katana of sorts, the blade, grip and guard completely black while the sheath is black and crimson red.


Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ A sword that absorbed the wielders chakra and element nature(s) of the user.
http://narutofanon.wikia.com/wiki/Chakra_Metal

[Dion]

@BladeSS4 Alright, despite some issues in the bio (it says his mother raised him but he was raised in a foster family?) I'll accept it on account of knowing that your IC is typically a bit better than your CS's.

[BladeSS4]

@BladeSS4 Alright, despite some issues in the bio (it says his mother raised him but he was raised in a foster family?) I'll accept it on account of knowing that your IC is typically a bit better than your CS's.

@Buddha

Thanks, I moved him over to the character slot after editing that first part. He was raised with a step mother, that first part was accidental error. Sweet, he will be the second male character. Lol

[Dion]

@BladeSS4 All good. And we have a few more female characters coming in. I think yours is the 3rd though, lol. Sakana is male.