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@Atrophy Accepted, sunshine child. Honestly, someone from Noctis is another thing I was hoping for. Though, I would ask you to downtone the backstabbing thing a little... desperate or no, Harper's reputation may well have reached Endar's ears, those around him, or the ears of other characters. An honest mistake I can accept, but his team runs him out of town, and then everything after can stay the same - because after becoming disgraced, people do tend to lean towards unsavoury tactics.

Another thing is the weapons - both the crossbow and the coat will be heavy enough, but the spear is going to be incredibly heavy. I can allow something like a half-staff if you want a weapon with reach, or a short-sword, dagger or some other light weapon if you want greater damage, but the spear has to go.

Traps like caltrops and diversions/defenses like smoke bombs are also okay, though he's only allowed a limited amount at any one time given that they could be too useful. The poison is a little underhanded - if you don't want to remove that, keep it on the down-low - so he's not to be too overt about it. If he needs to persuade someone or knock them out, alcohol may well do. As for the powders... clarify?

Other than that, I love it. Feel free to move him on over.
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Just so everyone's aware, though you may have already noticed, Ammokkx has joined me as co-GM. They have been very helpful and co-operative and have definitely assisted. Plus, we're currently working on something story-wise.
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@CollectorOfMystNice. Appreciate the feedback. I went ahead and edited the sheet; took out the poisons and swapped the spear for a short sword. The powders are just basic kind of irritants; burn the eyes, induce coughing, a step above picking up a fist full of dirt and throwing it in the eyes. I changed a little bit of his backstory so while other teams would still have reason to doubt him he did not blatantly betray his crew.
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@Atrophy And he's been accepted - you may move Harper into the Character tab. A hint, though; we may run into some familiar faces when in Noctis.
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*sigh* So it was.... my bad. The allergy meds aren't doing me any favors tonight.
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Ahh! Doing my best to stay relevant. I am currently on path to loan a computer off my friend semi-permanently until I can solve my larger problem. Will do my best to compose on a small screen til then.
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Ahh! Doing my best to stay relevant. I am currently on path to loan a computer off my friend semi-permanently until I can solve my larger problem. Will do my best to compose on a small screen til then.


You better get that computer or else we're all complete humans!

(also your character is like, really cool and unique too)
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@Ammokkx Resigned to play the token minority. ^^
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@Ammokkx Well, apart from Endar. He's elfblood, you know.
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Just for everyone's knowledge, the first IC post will be going up at 3pm UK time and 9am Central time (US). While I can't speak for anybody else, that's the time it'll go up.
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Void since somehow I managed to post the same message twice.
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If anyone would like to collab with me and talk to Alia when you arrive, I'm open and I know how to use Pirate Pad now. ;)
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@Innis I've already said, you should only put Endar's speech in yellow. Everything else can just be the default.

But that reminds me - when you reach the manor, Endar will want to speak with each applicant. For that, we'll be using this website - piratepad.net/PG869V7Ldq - to write collaborative posts. While unnecessary to use it every time characters are together, it's something that will come in handy, especially when everyone first meets Endar, or as he'll announce himself, 'Ignis'.
The link can also be found under the picture on the first page of the OOC, and in the 0th post of the IC.
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Yes, there's just one problem with that; every time you write about Endar, you use his really name, which Alia can't know yet. Since the story is mostly in her perspective, that's the only way to show that what you're writing isn't from her perspective.
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Oookay. So I assume that whoever posts first in the IC now is also the next to meet Endar?
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Yes, there's just one problem with that; every time you write about Endar, you use his really name, which Alia can't know yet. Since the story is mostly in her perspective, that's the only way to show that what you're writing isn't from her perspective.


Don't bother trying to write in the same style and perspective as your partner, it doesn't work. I've tried. As compromise I tend to make it *very* clear which character is doing what, which is a necessity in my own collab-heavy RP.
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That's why I've left all of Myst's writing in yellow. I thought it might be less confusing for everyone else.
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All right, I will concede to Innis and my co-GM. It makes a lot more sense now that you put it that way.

@Ammokkx Yes, after Alia, of course. I'm going to try and look at everything as often as I can, but I'm doing some writing at the moment and it may not guarantee my presence.
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