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@Weird Tales That's the guy in the PMs! LOL

Or rather a little bit Forager a little bit Bug.

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You always have your best ideas after submitting a sheet don't you?


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@Weird Tales That's the guy in the PMs! LOL

Or rather a little bit Forager a little bit Bug.

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If I made a cs of Forager I would make him the Justice League's Spiderman
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@Hillan Let me look the sheet back over. I like eye beams for a power so I might be able to work with it given some edits.

This is when it pays to make BRIEF Bios brief. Takes me as long to read a CS as it does a 20 page comic... LOL

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I mean, the rundown is
- Orphan
- Small time criminal
- Got kidnapped and somehow, and for non revealed got injected with Darkseid's DNA.
- Has since then had a connection the Omega Effect and a psychic link to Darkseid, basically a one-way street where Darkseid's memories / etc is leaking into him, making him hallucinate n have visions and generally get fucked.
- He's slowly but surely developing powers in Darkseid's image.
- It's been about half a year since he got his powers, he blew up a train and killed a whole lot of people when he tried to kill himself to avoid his visions, further powering his psychosis.
- Batman talks to him and in my OP I'll explain exactly why he gets to join the league.
- Oh, and the scale of his powers so far makes him about as useful as Jimmy Olsen in a fight. There's gonna be a lot of character growth and arcs involved before he'll be anywhere near strong enough to be a heavy hitter.

Therefor, if someone else is doing the New Gods of New Genesis, go for it. Mikael's just a dude who's having a mental breakdown and has the potential to get the same powers as someone who is possibly the most powerful being in the universe. A wee bit Legion-y in that regard, but I'll be aiming at more than that.
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@Hillan Okay some notes:

The sheet needs to be closer to what I was asking for. Wraith's CS had extra stuff, which is fine, however your sheet didn't have any weaknesses listed [even if it's standard human weaknesses] and the Bio/Sample Post were mashed together.

Second.... as far as guys being superheroic in street clothes... that's kinda the Rookie's thing. This is the Justice League, not a bar. Gonna have to give him a suit to go with that alias, psychosis be damned.

The powers... I'm good with the Omega Beams and prophetic visions. When I saw Tactile TK I assumed it was the clone Superboy power of dismantling stuff with a touch but there was the plethora of heightened attributes I thought would've been included with New Gods DNA. Healing and durability are good, just don't do strength and speed. Hovering is also okay until it develops into flight. He's gotta be showing at least a couple of these powers to go into field work, otherwise I wouldn't have anywhere to stick him till the big team mission in Ep 4.

That's all I got.

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@Hillan Okay some notes:

Second.... as far as guys being superheroic in street clothes... that's kinda the Rookie's thing. This is the Justice League, not a bar. Gonna have to give him a suit to go with that alias, psychosis be damned.

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Quoting myself now... Since there's some new faces looking this over... with Hillan's guy and the Rookie being in street clothes I could make an opening Ep a training session with a few new heroes and somebody like Wildcat where you guys start getting your names and suits...

Just throwing that out there.

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@Hillan Okay some notes:

The sheet needs to be closer to what I was asking for. Wraith's CS had extra stuff, which is fine, however your sheet didn't have any weaknesses listed [even if it's standard human weaknesses] and the Bio/Sample Post were mashed together.

Second.... as far as guys being superheroic in street clothes... that's kinda the Rookie's thing. This is the Justice League, not a bar. Gonna have to give him a suit to go with that alias, psychosis be damned.

The powers... I'm good with the Omega Beams and prophetic visions. When I saw Tactile TK I assumed it was the clone Superboy power of dismantling stuff with a touch but there was the plethora of heightened attributes I thought would've been included with New Gods DNA. Healing and durability are good, just don't do strength and speed. Hovering is also okay until it develops into flight. He's gotta be showing at least a couple of these powers to go into field work, otherwise I wouldn't have anywhere to stick him till the big team mission in Ep 4.

That's all I got.

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I'll include a listing of weaknesses. His backstory's hardly relevant enough, and anyone who cares and suss out what's important from the sample post. I figured I'd give showing and not telling a go.
He'll prolly figure out how to use telekinesis to lift things, he doesn't need to be able to throw cars with his hands, him being able to take a hit is gonna be mundo importante. I'm not trying to have him do fieldwork from the get go, he's hardly stable enough for that. And if he would, he'd strap on some spandex from one of Batman's collections. Bruce's rolling in cash.

Heck, he could squeeze into Vixen's old tights.. Too soon?

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@Hillan Well now I'm putting it to you and @Sir Lurksalot if you want an actual training mission at the 'Tower. That's the only way I can work another couple players in without making the teams too large. It would be exclusively for those new heroes without training, an alias, or a suit.

However, if anyone is interested.... a Co-GM that can write mentors a little would be SUPER-AWESOME and I could likely go up to five Eps at once before a big team Ep. Basically the job would be to write mentors for two of the five Eps and keep everyone chill in the OOC.

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@Hillan Well now I'm putting it to you and @Sir Lurksalot if you want an actual training mission at the 'Tower. That's the only way I can work another couple players in without making the teams too large. It would be exclusively for those new heroes without training, an alias, or a suit.

However, if anyone is interested.... a Co-GM that can write mentors a little would be SUPER-AWESOME and I could likely go up to five Eps at once before a big team Ep. Basically the job would be to write mentors for two of the five Eps and keep everyone chill in the OOC.

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That works fine for me.

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Training montage? Yeah, I'm game.
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Made edits to the Episode List and groups.

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Ep. 1 - Rebirth - After the first wave of recruits are brought into Metro Tower, Batman takes a squad to investigate reports in St. Roch about a humanoid lion man.

Mentor: Batman

Group: Bulleteer, Lizard, Warden, Question
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Ep. 2 - Mad World - Brainwave causes chaos in Midway City trying to impress his peers in supervillainy.

Mentor: Green Lantern

Group: Toon Girl, Capt. Marvel, Judgement, GYPSY, New God (pre approved)
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Ep. 3 - Training Day - Batman asks a former teacher [Wildcat] to train some of the newer heroes without costumes, aliases, or any field experience.

Mentor: Wildcat

Group: the Rookie, Dark Messiah (pre approved), ANY OTHER NEW RECRUITS
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Ep. 4 - The Fallen - An alien biker falls from the stars and the League sends a team to investigate.

Mentor: Superman

Group: Mr. Clutch, Solara, Polarity Man, RAVAGER
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Ep. 5 - Kids These Days - Most of the League is turned into old folks by the villain Extant and only the unaffected heroes can save them before somebody dies.

Mentor: None

Group: Everyone will be involved in this one, either as an elderly version of yourself or one of the few who's gonna save us.

Unaffected heroes: Gonna leave this up in the air actually. After I see what you guys and gals are made of I'll make a list of who's gonna save our elderly asses.
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LOL... poor Question is the only powerless/tech less hero on the team.

Bulleteer - heightened physicals, flight, protective aura
Question - powerless
Polarity Man - suit grants strength, speed, flight, and electrical/radiation blasts
Mr. Clutch - Lex Corp sponsored hero with a super-car
Lizard - abilities similar to Killer Croc
Solara - based on Power Girl
the Rookie - super strong slacker
Warden - alien plant creature on a human host
Toon Girl - cartoon like abilities
Capt. Marvel - powers of Shazam
Judgement - human, or an angel, or a demon. Just depends.
Gypsy - stealth magic from artifacts
Ravager - daughter of Deathstroke, extra abilities
Dark Messiah - Omega beams, Darkseid connection
New God - loosely based on Forager and Bug


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the Rookie - super strong slacker
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Hey now, don't forget about his speed and toughness as well!

...Well, it's all rooted in the strength of his muscles anyway, but still! XD
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I think one of my YJ games was *about* this size, however if the interested parties get back to me we'll have nearly 20 players.

@Divine Darkness, @Pathfinder, @rocketrobie2, @Dead Cruiser

The first three of you submitted incomplete CS's [the Flash, 'Rust', and Cyborg with a twist respectively], were you still interested? Dead C. - were you still thinking about using Martian Manhunter?

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@Member 00492 I'm still around. Just been slow.
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Super down for training montage
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So... I just learned that this is a thing.



Probably a sign I've been under a rock too long when I don't even realize a whole new incarnation of Justice League is on the air.
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LOL... poor Question is the only powerless/tech less hero on the team.


Just means it's gonna be ten times cooler when he starts kicking ass.
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Just means it's gonna be ten times cooler when he starts kicking ass.


Or that much sadder when he gets his ass kicked and a female saves his butt.
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Or that much sadder when he gets his ass kicked and a female saves his butt.


That too.
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