[OOC] DC New Generation of Heroes

[DriveEMOut]

Hate to bother you, but is my CS accepted or not? If not, how would you like for me to improve it?
@Azure Sea

[mattmanganon]

Minute-man

Name: Jason Monroe
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Powers:

Incredibly advanced intellect (Many Metahumans are born with superior strength, wings, electrokinesis, a demonic appearance. Jason was born with something that doesn't show, something that doesn't allow him any benefit to his physical ability. He was born with a hyper-advanced brain. With an IQ of approximately 300, he has an incredibly achedemic intellect that is second to very few. He is able to absorb information at an incredible speed, has an Eidetic memory and has degrees in Physics, Biology, Chemistry, Vehicular Engineering, Structural Engineering, Robotic Engineering and others he doesn't need to name. He is a master hacker, being able to crack almost any security code within minutes, able to program anything to do anything... Also, he is fully versed with how to operate a Steam Locomotive... He got bored one day...)

Chemical Omega

A formula that he has created with the assistance of several other scientists and with notes he may or may not have stolen when he hacked his way into the Watchtower's Databases. This formula is what gives him the ability to operate in the field. A healthy dosage of Miracolo, a little bit of Venom for some super-strength, a bit of Man-Bat syrum for keen senses and flight, a few other things he doesn't want to mention and he has created a monster... Well, he has created the means to turn the consumer into a monster. A hulking monstrosity, this creature is designed for little other than combat and protection. In this form, he is granted access to the following powers

Super Strength (Whilst not as heavy a hitter as someone like Superman, he is still immensely strong. Easily able to lift 80 tons above his head and throw it)
Super Durability (Whilst not able to shrug off Depleted Uranium shells or a stab from an Nth-Metal blade, he is still far more durable than most. His thick hide will stop small-arms fire and even a knife.)
Super Stamina (Due to his incredibly metabolism, his body produces Fatigue toxins at an incredibly slow rate, allowing him to perform at peak for the entire length of his transformation.)
Super-Speed (Thanks to one part of his formula, he is able to run just as fast as he can fly, substantially faster than any other land animal.)
Flight (Thanks to the enormous wings on his back, he is able to fly at immense speeds, almost 200mph.)
Razor Teetha and Claws (He has claws that can tear through a car and eat through a bank-vault surprisingly quickly)
Aquatic Adaptation (His lungs are so efficient that they can filter enough oxygen from water to allow him to survive under it for hours at a time.)
Night Vision (Able to see perfectly in the dark)
Echolocation (In the highly unlikely event that his vision is impared, he is able to navigate via Echolocation)

Weakness'

Animalistic Instinct (Although the effects are profound, the user has almost no control over his actions and needs to be guided by others. The user can aim its agression at most)
Animal Mind Control (Any effect that could take control of the mind of an animal could easily be used to control him)
Variable Transformation time (Due to each batch being slightly different, due to the difficulty of getting ahold of the ingredients, he is unable to tell how long each dosage could last. Anywhere from 5-60 minutes seems to be the best guess)
Transformation grogginess (Due to the formula taking an incredible toll on the user, as soon as he has transformed back, he may become groggy and difficult to re-achieve his cognitive functions for a few minutes, leaving him vulnerable.)

Appearance:


When he is transformed, he turns into a enormous humanoid shape. 10 foot tall, enormous wings coming from his back, and brown fur all over his body. He also has large ears and monsterous features across his face. He wears a pair of trousers that are made of unstable molocules that allow them to grow and shrink as he transforms.
Bio:

Not done yet, but here's what there is so far so i don't lose it.

[Framing A Moose]

@mattmanganon
Hey! So I don't have any real problem with your character, but I do have a quick lore question. Now, I'm not an expert when it comes to comic book science, but from what I understand of Venom's nature as a Symbiote, every drop of his goo form is sentient, almost like a hive mind. This is why he can be torn apart and still reform around a new host. Also, I'm pretty sure that Venom's goo is able to multiply at a fast rate, which is why it's able to, in its first appearance, stretch from Peter Parker's hand up his arm, and so on. Now, for my question: wouldn't having even a trace amount of Venom in Chemical Omega be extremely dangerous, possibly resulting in the user becoming bonded with the Symbiote?

[mattmanganon]

@Framing A Moose Venom is Bane's Syrum that makes him huge.

[Azure Sea]

Hate to bother you, but is my CS accepted or not? If not, how would you like for me to improve it?

@DriveEMOut

sorry I've not looked at it as I've been REALLY busy with RL and barely having time to check my PM's ^^'

[Azure Sea]

Drake Sydell

Name: Drake Sydell
Alias: The Dragoon
Age: 17
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Arc bio:
Power or ability:
The Dragon Talisman: this ancient relic allows its wearer the ability to use the elements of each dragon soul that resides in the Talisman. To be able to use the elemental abilities, the wearer must make a bond with each dragon soul inside. Once the bond is made, the wearer can just speak the dragons name and he or she will be able to use the dragon’s elemental powers.

Dragons:
Inferno: Fire
Aqua: Water
Terra: Earth
Cyclone: Wind

Personality: Drake is a kind-hearted soul that loves to help others. He loves cracking jokes and make others feel better in times of sadness. However, he also suffers from faking his happy mood when he’s down. He doesn’t want others to know he’s sad or depressed so he fakes a happy smile to make them think he’s ok.

Bio:
Drake grew up in a normal home, even if his father walked out on him when he was young. His mother, being a single parent did her best to raise him on her own, but she soon found help in her twin sister who took up the role of his other parent as she helped raise drake when his mother couldn’t due to her work. Drakes aunt introduced him to MMA at an early age and when she surprised him with tickets to an MMA event. Drake exploded in happiness as he waited for the day to come.

When the day came he couldn’t control his excitement. She had gotten front row tickets and Drake watched as the fighters of each match brutally beat one another. He was hooked and when he turned 12, he asked if he could train to be an MMA fighter. His mother was reluctant since she knew how brutal the sport was. However, after a few begging and pleading, she gave in. He began training at a local gym near his house.

It was taxing at first as his body felt like it was going to fall apart, but after a month's’ worth of training and working on his body strength. He started to get the hang of MMA and start to show promise. Even his trainer told him he would be a great fighter in the octagon. However, fate usually has other plans.

His mother and aunt took him to the state fair to celebrate his progress. There, Drake saw a small cart selling Knick knacks and other trinkets. Drake was instantly drawn to a necklace that had a silver chain that was attached to a dragon wrapped around a pure white crystal that was the size of a pea. Drake’s aunt bought him the necklace and when he placed it on, he started to hear a small voice in his head.

For the next month, Drake trained to better his skills as an MMA fighter. Throughout that month, he kept hearing the voice again and again. However, it would relay messages to him during training like ducking, move to the left, block with your right arm. He worried he might be going crazy so he told his aunt and mother about the voice and what it said.

They didn’t seem all concerned and said it was just his brain telling him what to do next. It made sense since the voice only appeared when he fought and trained in the ring. However, he would see just what the voice was soon enough.

Three weeks after his 17th birthday, he was out shopping for his mom who had to work a double. The town he lived in was quite small so to walk from his house to the bank wasn’t a long trek. However, all the way there the voice kept saying one world. It kept repeating this word over and over again. To try and silence the voice, Drake listened to his music on his music.

At the bank, Drake waited in line to withdraw money from his part-time job. To help pay for the lessons, Drake took a job at a local diner as a dishwasher. While he waited, a man busted through the front doors brandishing a rather weird gun.

He demanded everyone on the ground and once everyone was on the ground, he began to demand money from the bank tellers. When the last teller stuffed the last bit of money into the man’s bag, police sirens echoed outside.

The simple bank robbery turned into a hostage situation as Drake at on the floor of the bank for over two hours. The man said if the police didn’t back off, he would kill a hostage. When the robber thought the police didn’t listen. The man cursed again before he grabbed a woman next to Drake and pushed her to the far wall. He pointed his gun towards the woman and when he pulled the trigger. A blue stream shot out of the barrel. In a split second the woman was frozen in ice. Once the woman was encased in ice, the man then said if the police don’t leave. He’d freeze another person.

The man then took Drake and shoved him next to the frozen woman. He pointed his gun at Drake and all Drake could hear was the voice screaming at him. Screaming the same work it had said all the way to the bank. The man pulled the trigger and the blue stream hit Drake and he felt the freezing ice on his body. It felt like knives cutting into his skin as he screamed in pain. In that moment he yelled the word the voice had been screaming: INFERNO!

The pure white crystal in the middle of his neckless turned red and flames shot out of the crystal. The flames melted the ice as the flames wrapped around his hands to create flame gauntlets, around his legs and feet to create greaves and sabatons made of flames, the flames wrapped around his head to create a Helm made of flames, and finally the flames extend from his shoulder blades to create wings made of flames.

Drake looked at his hands and was stunned at what he saw. The robber was also stunned for a moment before he shot another blue stream at Drake. Drake put up his hands to block the stream and flames shot out of the gauntlets towards the stream. The two collided in the middle and steam filled the bank. The flames overtook the stream and slammed into the robber, sending him to the opposite end of the bank. He hit the wall so hard, he was knocked out.

Drake was stunned at what he just did but he soon realized that the woman next to him was still encased in ice. He quickly turned his attention to her and placed his gauntlets on the ice. It began to melt. He was surmised that he had such full control of this new power. However, he didn’t know that this power he had, was just the tip of the iceberg. After that, Drake knew that he wanted to do. he wanted to help those who needed it. by becoming a hero, but what he didn't know was how hard that goal would be.

Appearance:

@Rex

i'll accept him :)

[Azure Sea]

Name: Thomas Richmond "Icicle"

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Powers: Cryokinesis, Marksmanship, A bulletproof stealth suit with the ability to turn invisible for a short amount of time, and a cowl that allows him to see with infrared vision.

Appearance

Everyday

Suit

Bio: Thomas was an average kid. Except for being a tech genius, he was painfully normal. Until that day on the frozen lake. When he was 13, his mother and father took him to a lake they thought had been frozen over thickly, but it was a fatal mistake. His mother and father drowned, but miraculously, before Thomas was taken into the cold grip of the water, the ice formed under him. This wonderful power was discovered at a cost, and he was unable to save his parents. Ever since then, he was adopted by a very rich and very nice man, who despite being thirty is more like an older brother. He constructed his current suit using the resources given to him by his guardian, and vowed to use his powers for good and to rid the world of crime, no matter the cost. Since then he has become a bit darker and more willing to kill the criminals he encounters.

Theme: Dark Necessities by the Red Hot Chili Peppers

@DriveEMOut

i'm alittle iffy with the whole suit thing as to me it's almost like you've made a batman with ice powers ^^'

[Azure Sea]

No worries! I'll re-write.

My Hider

Name: Maeve Hayes aka Red Haze

Age: 18

Gender: Female

Powers: Perfect aim, knowledge of pressure points.

Appearance:
Street clothes - Short red hair, combat boots, all black clothes.
Costume - Gray dirt bike and gear, a dark red helmet, and as many projectiles as she can hide on herself.

Bio: Maeve grew up in a rough neighbourhood. Her parents were the founding members of a local gang known as the Main St. Monsters: a group that committed robberies in monster costumes. Her parents wore The Swamp Thing and Bigfoot. When she was 14 there was a coupe, and her parents were killed.

Maeve and her 9 year old brother, Gilroy, should have been sent to foster care... But they discovered that their parents had never gotten them birth certificates. No documentation, no legal records... They were ghosts. So Maeve was left to raise her brother alone.

At 16 years old, Maeve was hired as a body guard by actress Kiri Henare. Along with a paycheck, Maeve and Gilroy received a place to stay and access to Kiri's tutors. But how the three met remains a mystery to most.

At 17, Maeve began spending her free hours breaking up gangs on the sly. She would knock key members out, one by one, and leave them where 'proper' heroes could bring them to justice.

Now 18, Maeve's getting good at both of her jobs. In fact, she thinks it's time her alter ego Red Haze moves up the big leagues.

@JadePencil

I'm going to let my go-gm's decide your CS's fate as i'm unable to decide as I can see the pros and cons of your char being on the team and in the RP but to me the pros a nd cons are pretty even

[DriveEMOut]

I can make the suit less like a suit and more like a kid who was lucky to get some police gear, just like a bulletproof vest under a hoodie if you want. And the cowl can be a ski mask or a motorcycle helmet.
@Azure Sea

[Framing A Moose]

@mattmanganon
Ah shit, I totally forgot this was DC! I must've got it confused with another RP I was doing a while back. Anyway, sorry, and, if @Azure Sea hasn't a problem with your CS, then you're all good!

[Framing A Moose]

@Azure Sea
Hey, quick question: how are the characters going to form the group? Will it already have been formed before the start of the RP? Will the characters even know each other?

[JadePencil]

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I'm going to let my go-gm's decide your CS's fate as i'm unable to decide as I can see the pros and cons of your char being on the team and in the RP but to me the pros a nd cons are pretty even

@Azure Sea

I mean if you're iffy on my character being in, it's probably better if I use her for some future rp

[Azure Sea]

@JadePencil it more along the lines of i'm to undecided with your char as I stated before I can see the perks of her being in the RP but as the same time why she shouldn't if I was iffy with your CS I would out right state I am lols.
@Framing A Moose I was thinking that some of the group members would already be creating the team before the RP while others like my CS {Who's the daughter of a known villain} would join alittle later

[DriveEMOut]

@Azure Sea
I edited the CS, what do you think?

[LeMonoMalo64]

I'm not sure about this.
Can new roleplayers join in? I mean, is this full yet? I'm interested.

[LeMonoMalo64]

Mostachio Pistachio

Name:Guillermo Espinosa Gutierrez
Age:24
Gender:Male
Powers:Melee:Eagle Fists. His fists are pretty wimpy by the beggining, but as he gains damage, he get's more powerful. He gains this by absorbing the damage and taking it as power instead. These are the one and only boxing gloves his dad used when he was still in a fighting career, as his mother says, these still contain some of his dad heart and passion.
Guns:He also has a few guns, his favorite one being the AK-47. He doesn't bring a lot of ammo, so he wastes them pretty quick and doesn't use them that much.
Intelligence:Not that this is a weapon, or a power. But his intelligence can lead him to cracking codes and be pretty helpful when it comes to technology. His dad's mask gives him this power, as he is sharing his intelligence and power with him.
Cape:This cape, made out of pure sweat of his father, protects Mostachio. He uses this as a shield. From the looks of it, this looks like a normal cape, but it's actually a metal cape that acts like a normal cape.
Appearance:White mask, pretty big mouth and cartoony eyes. He doesn't wear a shirt, and wears a red cape. He also wears boxing gloves, some pants and his shoes. Both white. He is bald. Pretty common design to say the least.
Bio:
Born in Mexico, on a little town with no energy for most of the time, comes Guillermo. or Mostachio
Guillermo lived a rough life in his little town, as he was sent to do a lot of stuff. He had to get the wolves and burglars out of the sheep cattle, which nearly made him lose an arm once because a pretty big wolf herd attacked him. One day, even a gang that was stealing animals from cattles once came at started beating up Guillermo because he tried defending it. He also didn't have a proper education, since he was poor and their parents didn't have money for the school materials. It wasn't until he was 12 years old, he finally got a work at a pretty small shop and earned more money than they did with the cattle. He finally went to school and his father got a job when he started his boxing career. And this was just the beggining. As his life was going to get better. Just kidding, worse.
His life went okay for some time, until his dad died because of diabetes. He was depressed to the point of suicide, he eventually got recovered after his father death.

But as for now, he was wondering. What is he going to do with his life now? The shop he used to work on is closed forever.
Then something popped up on his head. Become his dad succesor. He took the mask, the cape and the boxing gloves, then became the new Horstachio, or as he calls himself, Mostachio Pistachio

After that, he wanted to be in a relationship with a girl that he knew for a while now. Her name was Liliana. She trained Guillermo when he was just a novice. She trained him over 7 years, before he could finally tell her he was in love for her. Liliana rejected him, as he told him that he didn't want to go as far as being in a relationship. She just said she wanted to be friends only. Sad, depressed and lonely Guillermo decided it was time to retire.

He then decided to become a hero. As he could see his force can be useful to the town he lived in. The police department was not happy for this, as they called him crazy and stupid by wearing his mask. But he proved he was an actual hero by going into a burning building and getting everyone out of there. He lost an arm due to an explotion in there. He just recovered when he turned 23.

Not long after the Teen Titans called him to join them, as they saw his potential as a good teammate and saw his actions on his little town. Rejected again., as they were not interested anymore. He decided he wanted to go solo, and he did just that before trying to form an team. Now, he goes around in Mexico City walking around, watching out for any criminal who wants to break the law.

Theme:youtube.com/watch?v=2tkZwLUy9ko

I'll leave my character here anyways. Have a nice day.

[Azure Sea]

Name: Thomas Richmond "Icicle"

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Powers: Cryokinesis, Marksmanship, A bulletproof vest.
Appearance

Everyday

"Suit"

Bio: Thomas was an average kid. Except for being a genius, he was painfully normal. Until that day on the frozen lake. When he was 13, his mother and father took him to a lake they thought had been frozen over thickly, but it was a fatal mistake. His mother and father drowned, but miraculously, before Thomas was taken into the cold grip of the water, the ice formed under him. This wonderful power was discovered at a cost, and he was unable to save his parents. Ever since then, he was adopted by a fairly well off and very nice man, who despite being thirty is more like an older brother. He got his tools using the money given to him by his guardian, and vowed to use his powers for good and to rid the world of crime, no matter the cost. Since then he has become a bit darker and more willing to kill the criminals he encounters.

Theme: Dark Necessities by the Red Hot Chili Peppers

Weapons

@DriveEMOut

accepted

[Azure Sea]

@LeMonoMalo64 sorry but new CS's acceptance is closed and i'm just waiting on matt to complete his CS
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BTW FINALLY added a theme for Lyanna :)

[RumikoOhara]

[Azure Sea]

hmm what the video for rumiko?