Boy, if this RP involves a lot of PvP, my character is f**ked. XD
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Yeah, you might be fucked, but hey, if you don't die you'll get stronger over time! xD
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You joined a Naruto thread.
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Yeah, you might be fucked, but hey, if you don't die you'll get stronger over time! xD
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Most here aren't really all that stronger than you. Unless someone is being deceitful in their CS, it seems to be balanced overall.
Boy, if this RP involves a lot of PvP, my character is f**ked. XD
Meh, your character is faster than most people, has a deadly enhanced sword, and can suffocate things from a range. I have the sinking suspicion you'd be fine.
Mage ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Well.... that's encouraging, but a bummer. I've intentionally tried to make her weak and not really an exceptional kunoichi. I've failed. XD
Dion THE ONE WHO IS CHEAP HACK ยฎ / THE SHIT, A FART.
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Seems fine. Vacuum thingie is scary, actually.
Character Theme - Die With A Smile
ใFull Name:ใ
Imai Hatake
ใNickname/Aliasใ
Monkey
ใGenderใ
Male
ใAgeใ
17
ใAge Appearanceใ
18
ใSexualityใ
Bisexual
ใVillageใ
Konohagakure
ใAlignment/Affiliation/Organizationใ
Konohagakure
ใClan/Bloodlineใ
Hatake
ใRankใ
Chuunin
ใAppearance/Wardrobeใ
Imai has a average male runners build. Lean with board shoulders, Imai is a healthy young man who stands at 6 foot even. He has snow white hair and bright blue eyes, his arm is constantly bandaged due to his burn scars. He can mostly be seen in a white V-neck T-shirts and solid color or flow print button ups.
ใPersonalityใ
Imai is a adventurous young man. He is always willing to push the boundaries and test out cautionary situations. Its in his nature to be curious, he wants to always ask "Why?" Imai has a deep thirst for knowledge and is will to put his life on the line for it. He is a bright boy, who never wants to stay in on a rainy or sunny day, he wants to go out and explore to see more of the world.
On missions, or when he is working with others, Imai is kind of annoying, never one to just "do" the job. He always wants to find out context of a situation, or motives behind ones actions. Nothing bothers him more then an unanswered question or a problem that cannot be explained. His teammates would enjoy his enthusiasm, but not like his extra initiative to really learn about a situation.
Imai's major fault is that he is a black and white kinda guy and can be dense as well. It's one of his main reasons for wanting to know the answers so much. He wants to gain a more "grey" understanding of life. Imai is not one to get mad or angry, but he is easily annoyed when others try to obstruct his thirst for knowledge.
ใHistoryใ
"No" is a peculiar word, many use it differently but it holds a simple meaning to Imai, denial of the truth. Imai was brought up in the Hatake clan, not much is know about the clan and the only defining characteristic would be the white hair. They have a small home on the outskirts of the city and only a handful of clan members. Imai was raised by a very strict father and mother, he and his older brother were raised that only the mission mattered and getting things done surpassed any personal inquiries or feelings.
It was not until he started to go to the academy that he started to ask questions. He was always being encouraged to ask about anything he did not understand, and boy did he have a lot of questions. Things he learned and things that were instilled in him started to contradict and being a never ending cycle of constant contradictions. When Imai became a Genin he was the bane of his clan, always defying his teachings and questioning his parents. The only person who would tolerate him was his older brother, who thought he would only become smarter for it.
Imai found that he loved helping people as a shinobi and being one was the only way to really get answers to any questions he had. So it became his drive for being better, and training harder, and all so he could have his questions answered. As he got older the issues become bigger and his questions got more difficult in meaning and finding answers. But that did not deter him, and this led to the biggest fight of his life, with his father. The man had watched his son and considered every question and disobedient action a shame on the clan. Soon after he became a Chunin, Imai was tested to see if any of his curiosity or knowledge seeking had really benefited him, or if it was all just luck. He had to fight his father,
and of course he lost and as payment for years and years of insubordination and shame to the clan, Imai gave up his arm to fire. That was two years ago and his arm has healed mostly, but he still keeps it covered because its sensitive. Now he continues his training, and still seeks out answers, but under the shadows for he still fears another confrontation with his dad. Imai sees the up coming Jonin exam as a way to further gain his freedom from the Hatake Clan and to get more of his questions answered.
ใEquipment/Weapons/Itemsใ
Name of Weapon or Item:
Konoha Chakra Blade
Description:
Simple Chakra Blades that, Imai uses to flow lighting chakra through for combat. He usually carries four of them at one time.
Appearance:
Name of Weapon or Item:
Spark
Description:
A Chakra Blade in the form of a katana. It is average length, perfect for his arms and its usually holstered on his back. It is used in one of his techniques.
Appearance:
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ใChakra Natureใ
Water, Lighting and Storm
ใKekkei Genkai ใ
Name of Kekkei Genkai:
Storm Release
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Jutsu:
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ใFull Name:ใ
Imai Hatake
ใNickname/Aliasใ
Monkey
ใGenderใ
Male
ใAgeใ
17
ใAge Appearanceใ
18
ใSexualityใ
Bisexual
ใVillageใ
Konohagakure
ใAlignment/Affiliation/Organizationใ
Konohagakure
ใClan/Bloodlineใ
Hatake
ใRankใ
Chuunin
ใAppearance/Wardrobeใ
Imai has a average male runners build. Lean with board shoulders, Imai is a healthy young man who stands at 6 foot even. He has snow white hair and bright blue eyes, his arm is constantly bandaged due to his burn scars. He can mostly be seen in a white V-neck T-shirts and solid color or flow print button ups.
ใPersonalityใ
Imai is a adventurous young man. He is always willing to push the boundaries and test out cautionary situations. Its in his nature to be curious, he wants to always ask "Why?" Imai has a deep thirst for knowledge and is will to put his life on the line for it. He is a bright boy, who never wants to stay in on a rainy or sunny day, he wants to go out and explore to see more of the world.
On missions, or when he is working with others, Imai is kind of annoying, never one to just "do" the job. He always wants to find out context of a situation, or motives behind ones actions. Nothing bothers him more then an unanswered question or a problem that cannot be explained. His teammates would enjoy his enthusiasm, but not like his extra initiative to really learn about a situation.
Imai's major fault is that he is a black and white kinda guy and can be dense as well. It's one of his main reasons for wanting to know the answers so much. He wants to gain a more "grey" understanding of life. Imai is not one to get mad or angry, but he is easily annoyed when others try to obstruct his thirst for knowledge.
ใHistoryใ
"No" is a peculiar word, many use it differently but it holds a simple meaning to Imai, denial of the truth. Imai was brought up in the Hatake clan, not much is know about the clan and the only defining characteristic would be the white hair. They have a small home on the outskirts of the city and only a handful of clan members. Imai was raised by a very strict father and mother, he and his older brother were raised that only the mission mattered and getting things done surpassed any personal inquiries or feelings.
It was not until he started to go to the academy that he started to ask questions. He was always being encouraged to ask about anything he did not understand, and boy did he have a lot of questions. Things he learned and things that were instilled in him started to contradict and being a never ending cycle of constant contradictions. When Imai became a Genin he was the bane of his clan, always defying his teachings and questioning his parents. The only person who would tolerate him was his older brother, who thought he would only become smarter for it.
Imai found that he loved helping people as a shinobi and being one was the only way to really get answers to any questions he had. So it became his drive for being better, and training harder, and all so he could have his questions answered. As he got older the issues become bigger and his questions got more difficult in meaning and finding answers. But that did not deter him, and this led to the biggest fight of his life, with his father. The man had watched his son and considered every question and disobedient action a shame on the clan. Soon after he became a Chunin, Imai was tested to see if any of his curiosity or knowledge seeking had really benefited him, or if it was all just luck. He had to fight his father,
and of course he lost and as payment for years and years of insubordination and shame to the clan, Imai gave up his arm to fire. That was two years ago and his arm has healed mostly, but he still keeps it covered because its sensitive. Now he continues his training, and still seeks out answers, but under the shadows for he still fears another confrontation with his dad. Imai sees the up coming Jonin exam as a way to further gain his freedom from the Hatake Clan and to get more of his questions answered.
ใEquipment/Weapons/Itemsใ
Name of Weapon or Item:
Konoha Chakra Blade
Description:
Simple Chakra Blades that, Imai uses to flow lighting chakra through for combat. He usually carries four of them at one time.
Appearance:
Name of Weapon or Item:
Spark
Description:
A Chakra Blade in the form of a katana. It is average length, perfect for his arms and its usually holstered on his back. It is used in one of his techniques.
Appearance:
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ใChakra Natureใ
Water, Lighting and Storm
ใKekkei Genkai ใ
Name of Kekkei Genkai:
Storm Release-------------------------------------------------------
Jutsu:
Name of Technique: Nimbus Cloud
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Self
Nature Type:
Storm Release
Description: Imai uses Storm Release to create a more dense cloud that is only big enough for him to stand on. He uses it to travel long distances. Its not much of a offensive jutsu and was modeled after Wukong's Nimbus cloud.
Name of Technique: Laser Blade
Type of Jutsu: Shurikenjutsu
Rank: B
Range:Short
Nature Type:Storm Release
Description: Imai uses Storm Release to cloak Spark in chakra similar to Laser Circus but more focused. It is similar to Vacuum Blade, but instead of using wind chakra he uses storm chakra to increase the damage and sharpness of his blade. This blade however is able to let off slashes of storm chakra with each loose slash. With such a high intensity of focused storm chakra, Spark is not able to keep the flow for long and after 15 minuets will melt. The blade will need time to cool down, or he can use water to cool it down.
Name of Technique: Laser Whips
Type of Jutsu: Shurikenjutsu
Rank: B
Range: Long-Mid-Short
Nature Type:Storm Release
Description:Similar to his Laser blade, Imai focuses Storm chakra into his shorter chakra blades, but instead of giving it a more fine point he takes advantage of the fluidity. He uses the chakra blades as a focus and makes to whips made of pure electricity, but they flow like whips. Each whip is (if he uses two at a time) is about 9ft long, and one is about 12ft long. These whips are as dangerous as normal whips. With enough force they can break skin and cause burns, but they lack the raw power of the laser blades. The cool down time is the same as the Laser Blade jutsu, but can also be cooled with water.
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Self
Nature Type:
Storm ReleaseDescription: Imai uses Storm Release to create a more dense cloud that is only big enough for him to stand on. He uses it to travel long distances. Its not much of a offensive jutsu and was modeled after Wukong's Nimbus cloud.
Name of Technique: Laser Blade
Type of Jutsu: Shurikenjutsu
Rank: B
Range:Short
Nature Type:
Storm ReleaseDescription: Imai uses Storm Release to cloak Spark in chakra similar to Laser Circus but more focused. It is similar to Vacuum Blade, but instead of using wind chakra he uses storm chakra to increase the damage and sharpness of his blade. This blade however is able to let off slashes of storm chakra with each loose slash. With such a high intensity of focused storm chakra, Spark is not able to keep the flow for long and after 15 minuets will melt. The blade will need time to cool down, or he can use water to cool it down.
Name of Technique: Laser Whips
Type of Jutsu: Shurikenjutsu
Rank: B
Range: Long-Mid-Short
Nature Type:
Storm ReleaseDescription:Similar to his Laser blade, Imai focuses Storm chakra into his shorter chakra blades, but instead of giving it a more fine point he takes advantage of the fluidity. He uses the chakra blades as a focus and makes to whips made of pure electricity, but they flow like whips. Each whip is (if he uses two at a time) is about 9ft long, and one is about 12ft long. These whips are as dangerous as normal whips. With enough force they can break skin and cause burns, but they lack the raw power of the laser blades. The cool down time is the same as the Laser Blade jutsu, but can also be cooled with water.
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Spanner Patron Saint of spitting on the poor
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"Just so you guys know, those who have been accepted, can post IC about their arrival to the gate of konoha" - Syn in the discord server, forgetting that some peeps didn't join it.
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Thecrash20
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Boy, if this RP involves a lot of PvP, my character is f**ked. XD
My character can't even preform above D-rank Ninjutsu...
I fear that I only played myself.
Mage ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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And of course I assume that those who live in Konoha may also post normally XD?
In this case, given my character's background (She "owns" a blacksmithing shop which sells ninja tools), anyone want to have a pre-established relation? Even if its just some "Ohey I bought some kunai from your shop and stuff", y'know. Interaction.
In this case, given my character's background (She "owns" a blacksmithing shop which sells ninja tools), anyone want to have a pre-established relation? Even if its just some "Ohey I bought some kunai from your shop and stuff", y'know. Interaction.
GM
CaliforniaState Biologist
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@Project
Don't let them scare you. You'll be fine. Maybe
Yes those who are already in konoha can make their way too and establish with each other. If no one posts by my next post I will further amass the exams.
@Thecrash20
In the words of the immortal DJ Khaled, "You played yourself"
Also we have a discord server if anyone wants that.
And I will review when I get home tonight after work.
Don't let them scare you. You'll be fine. Maybe
Yes those who are already in konoha can make their way too and establish with each other. If no one posts by my next post I will further amass the exams.
@Thecrash20
In the words of the immortal DJ Khaled, "You played yourself"
Also we have a discord server if anyone wants that.
And I will review when I get home tonight after work.
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I'm hoping to have my character by Thursday. Just been pulling a bunch of doubles, and I hate typing CS on my phone.
coGM
Seraphicide Lyfe
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This will be the main villain of the First and Second arc
Name: Seijuro Kizaru Nandate
Age|Gender: Deceased at 42 / Male
Alliance: Konohagakure
Rank: S
Clan: Seijuro utterly massacred his entire clan as a young, violent sociopathic child.
Kekkei Genkai: N/A
Traits: Seijuro is revered as the most vile, malicious, underhanded individual of his generation. He is also reluctantly infamous for his intelligence, as the most cunning and observant individual to come out of Konoha in decades. His chakra reserves are above average but not enormous. His chakra control is renowned among the finest in the world.
Age|Gender: Deceased at 42 / Male
Alliance: Konohagakure
Rank: S
Clan: Seijuro utterly massacred his entire clan as a young, violent sociopathic child.
Kekkei Genkai: N/A
Traits: Seijuro is revered as the most vile, malicious, underhanded individual of his generation. He is also reluctantly infamous for his intelligence, as the most cunning and observant individual to come out of Konoha in decades. His chakra reserves are above average but not enormous. His chakra control is renowned among the finest in the world.
Appearance: 
History: Seijuro was born into a clan with very low social status. They had no money and no name for themselves. His mother was a kind, caring woman who tried to show Seijuro as much love as she could, but she was a drug user and often neglected him without even realizing it. She would sometimes provoke his father, also a drug user but more of your classic alcoholic, who would continuously beat her into submission in front of Seijuro. His father was the most vile thing in existence in Seijuro's eyes. He would force his mother onto the bed and force her to give in to his desires every night when all she wanted was a reprieve from the nightly violence. She stayed for two reasons, one was for Seijuro's sake, and the second was because she was hooked on the drugs he would constantly supply her with.
The day came when Seijuro was seven years old where he had grown tired of his father abusing he and his mother. He had grown externally void of emotion where inside he was bitter and resentful toward both his drunken father and his neglectful mother for allowing this to go on. One day during a particularly bad fight between his parents, his father was on top of his mother who had once again been beaten to the ground, though his father did not stop this time. He was going to kill her. Seijuro, knowing love only from her albeit seldom, protected her out of instinct. Grabbing the closest weapon to him, a knife on the counter, he plunged it into his father's back, wanting nothing more than for him to die. His father fell to the floor, said he knife piercing his heart. His mother was crying and beaten to a bloody pulp. For a moment Seijuro stood lifeless, showing no emotion at all, no remorse for the killing of his father. He looked over at his mother, and for but a moment he felt sorry for her. Such a poor creature knew nothing but abuse her entire life, and while Seijuro was young, he could still see that the drugs and the drinking took precedence over taking care of him. He placed his hand on the knife in his father's back. His mother's eyes widened as she whispered to him, wondering what was going through her son's mind. For a brief moment he contemplated what he was about to do, was he simply putting his mother out of her misery? Was he exacting revenge on her for her neglectful behavior? No, he was killing the only bit of love that ever existed in him. She screamed up until the knife pierced her throat, a swift death for the poor soul. Her eyes were full of tears as she watched her only son turn into a cold blooded killer in her last moments of life.
Seijuro bounced in and out of orphanages for a several years. He would often get kicked out for fighting with the other boys who thought him a freak for never showing emotion. There was a girl in one of the orphanages who tried her hardest to bring out the good in Seijuro. That girl was Saya Akizakura. She could feel the void of emotion in Seijuro's soul, but she could also feel his pain and resentment he buried. She tried to befriend him, and he only picked her mind apart. He found out what she was, what her abilities were, without even knowing her clan at all. This scared her away from him, and soon after Seijuro regretted the fear he instilled in this poor young girl. He began to long for her, and this in turn struck fear in his own heart. And that led to even more fear, the fact that he had feelings for this girl frightened him so much that he resolved to kill her. And so he burnt down the orphanage, killing everyone inside except for Saya, who with her abilities had escaped without Seijuro's knowledge.
After this Seijuro wandered the land a young boy with no home. He learned to accept the loneliness that came with it and further buried his emotions. All he knew was pain, and he repressed this pain by killing others. Hunting for animals to feed himself brought him great joy, often forcing his prey to suffer before they died.
Eventually he found himself in the streets of Konoha stealing to get by when he didn't catch his own food. It was easier to take from others rather than find his own prey. People became his prey, until one day he was caught by a renowned medical ninja in the village. He took Seijuro in off the streets and taught him the ways of the Shinobi. He was already skilled with ninja weaponry from his days in the orphanage where the older orphans would play with shuriken and kunai with dreams of one day becoming Shinobi themselves. However this was no game for Seijuro, he took these tools seriously and practiced diligently with them. The man who took him in was impressed by this natural skill and asked Seijuro if he wanted to become a medical ninja. Seijuro had no intention at all of staying away from combat and helping heal others, though the knowledge of the human body and power that came with the path of a medical ninja fascinated him. And so through his power of manipulation and lies he took advantage of this man and studied the ways of medicine and chakra control. He picked techniques up much faster than his sensei expected. He was more than just a child prodigy, Seijuro was a genius by all means.
Several years passed and Seijuro graduated the ninja academy in mere weeks. He was a Genin for less than a year and became one of the youngest Chuunin the village had ever had age thirteen. It was at this time that a young girl began studying with his master to become a medical ninja as well. This shocked Seijuro, as it was the same girl he thought he had killed, Namine Akizakura. He always covered his face ever since becoming a ninja so for a while she didn't recognize him, however she always felt odd around him. Seijuro played the part of a manipulator so well around her that they became close, he would warp the young girl's mind and was cunning enough to turn her against her own intuition. He made her believe her own senses misguided her and were lying to her. This was a testament to Seijuro's ability to manipulate others, that he could even fool the abilities of an Akizakura. Eventually he began to grow fond of her, and instead of trying to kill her, he wanted to make her his own. He began to fall in love with her, the emotionless boy who never loved anything after his mother died suddenly had hopes and aspirations for the future. But when the time came to confess his feelings to Saya and court her to become his, she could not bring herself to accept. She loved him, that she did, but something inside of her begged her to refuse. It was a feeling too strong to ignore that not even the young Seijuro could turn her from. And so she declined, breaking the young boy's heart.
This broke Seijuro. His brief period of trying to learn to love was destroyed by his own doing. Just maybe if he had been true to her and didn't just manipulate her into loving him he would have had a chance, but his selfish intentions pushed her away. And so he could no longer be a part of her life, but he wanted so badly to kill her. But the worst of Seijuro was brought out that day. Kill her? No, that would be too easy. Instead, he would take from her everything she loved. But what did an orphan like her have to take? The village. The village she loved so much would be stricken of life. And so Seijuro resolved to become the Hidden Leaf's Nightmare.
After learning the peak medical techniques Konoha had to offer, he became a mercenary in the Leaf village's underworld. Eventually the Hokage had to personally come to Seijuro and inform him that he was being too brutal with his line of work and was bringing a bad name to the village. Seijuro laughed in the Hokage's face and told him that the village had nothing left to offer him. On Seijuro's last day in Konoha he used his sensei's own technique that he had taught to he and Saya to kill him right in front of her, splattering their sensei's blood all over her. She tried to fight back against him but Seijuro was too cunning and skilled. He could have killed her right there, and he made that known to her, and informed her that the only reason he kept her alive was to watch her suffer for the rest of her life. It was at this time that he removed his bandages and revealed himself as the one who burnt down the orphanage they met in.
Seijuro left the village a Jonin at age seventeen. He immigrated to Iwagakure on rumors he heard in the Leaf underworld that there was a man who had found immortality in Iwa. It was there that Seijuro found a puppet master who took an interest in Seijuro for his intellect and medical skill. He trained him in the art of puppetry until Seijuro inquired about why there were rumors he was immortal. The man always grew quiet and never spoke a word to Seijuro about it which only made the boy more curious. Seijuro studied this man and eventually was able to call his teacher out on his methods. "The way you walk, it sounds like hollow wood crossing the floor. You are not made of flesh." His teacher, stunned at his students ability to discern his true nature, could not let Seijuro live from this. He turned on his young student and exhausted every resource he had to kill him. Seijuro was outmatched in terms of power and experience, however his skill and wit outweighed his master. In a short time Seijuro had learned every possible way to manipulate a puppet from watching this man. And so Seijuro killed the second of his teachers and stole from him the method to becoming immortal: Human Puppetry.
It was not long after Seijuro himself became a human puppet. He covered up the death of his master and began serving in Iwagakure's ANBU black ops until he became the captain of the ANBU in under a year. It was here where he manipulated the last Tsuchikage, giving him false information that Konoha was plotting against him when he lived in the Leaf. He stirred the pot of war for months and eventually took a squad of Iwa nin out to do reconnaissance on Konoha, killed them all himself and returned to the Tsuchikage and reported that it was Konoha that slaughtered his men. The Tsuchikage blamed Konoha and began an assault on any of their Shinobi outside of the village once retaliation against this tactic grew, Iwagakure launched a full on assault against Konoha and the Second Great War began. During this war Seijuro ordered the extermination of all Akizakura clan members, and slaughtered all of Saya's remaining family, although her daughter Namine survived by being thrown into hiding. Seijuro caught wind of this trickery, and set out to kill Namine as a final act of vengeance on Saya to truly take away everything she loved.
At the end of the war Seijuro grew cocky. He had an army of human puppets at his disposal until Saya revealed to the Tsuchikage that Seijuro had been manipulating him the entire time. So of course that meant Seijuro had to kill the Tsuchikage. And so he did, and he became one of Seijuro's growing collection of human puppets, though this one was especially important as it was so realistic it was used to manipulate the people of Iwagakure as their Tsuchikage for months. Seijuro used this tool to further the war so fast that by the time the jig was up and he could no longer deny the rumors of the Tsuchikage being nothing more than a puppet which was propagated by Saya and Konoha herself, the war was already in full swing and so much blood had been spilled on both sides. At this point the war was too far gone to call off, but Seijuro was exiled from Iwagakure. And so he marched on Konoha himself with his army of puppets and set out to kill Saya's daughter Namine once and for all, but his arrogance got the best of him and he thought himself invincible. And so he was caught in a trap by the three Sannin (one of them being Saya Akizakura) and the fourth Hokage. The Hokage was killed and so was Saya, and it took the power of the two remaining Sannin and their faithful follower Jaakuna to seal Seijuro, though Jaakuna was taken to the grave along with the puppet master. Ultimately only two Sannin remained with Saya dead, one of them was Gisho, who became the Fifth Hokage.
Twenty years later, Seijuro lives again. No one knows how, his soul was sealed for certain. But somehow, some way he walks among the living.
Personality: No one can capture a snake's personality. He's just a fucking Nightmare of a human being. You're better off not getting to know this guy. He's the worst thing to ever crawl out of Konoha.
Combat Style: Seijuro uses any manner possible to keep himself out of combat because as soon as his blood is drawn from his body a side of him that rarely anyone sees is unleashed. He is a master strategist and cunning beyond measure. Only when one truly brings Seijuro to the point of rage do they have a chance of defeating him. If his opponent cannot bring out his anger and allows him to keep a level head, they stand no chance of overcoming his intellect.
Nature Release: None
The day came when Seijuro was seven years old where he had grown tired of his father abusing he and his mother. He had grown externally void of emotion where inside he was bitter and resentful toward both his drunken father and his neglectful mother for allowing this to go on. One day during a particularly bad fight between his parents, his father was on top of his mother who had once again been beaten to the ground, though his father did not stop this time. He was going to kill her. Seijuro, knowing love only from her albeit seldom, protected her out of instinct. Grabbing the closest weapon to him, a knife on the counter, he plunged it into his father's back, wanting nothing more than for him to die. His father fell to the floor, said he knife piercing his heart. His mother was crying and beaten to a bloody pulp. For a moment Seijuro stood lifeless, showing no emotion at all, no remorse for the killing of his father. He looked over at his mother, and for but a moment he felt sorry for her. Such a poor creature knew nothing but abuse her entire life, and while Seijuro was young, he could still see that the drugs and the drinking took precedence over taking care of him. He placed his hand on the knife in his father's back. His mother's eyes widened as she whispered to him, wondering what was going through her son's mind. For a brief moment he contemplated what he was about to do, was he simply putting his mother out of her misery? Was he exacting revenge on her for her neglectful behavior? No, he was killing the only bit of love that ever existed in him. She screamed up until the knife pierced her throat, a swift death for the poor soul. Her eyes were full of tears as she watched her only son turn into a cold blooded killer in her last moments of life.
Seijuro bounced in and out of orphanages for a several years. He would often get kicked out for fighting with the other boys who thought him a freak for never showing emotion. There was a girl in one of the orphanages who tried her hardest to bring out the good in Seijuro. That girl was Saya Akizakura. She could feel the void of emotion in Seijuro's soul, but she could also feel his pain and resentment he buried. She tried to befriend him, and he only picked her mind apart. He found out what she was, what her abilities were, without even knowing her clan at all. This scared her away from him, and soon after Seijuro regretted the fear he instilled in this poor young girl. He began to long for her, and this in turn struck fear in his own heart. And that led to even more fear, the fact that he had feelings for this girl frightened him so much that he resolved to kill her. And so he burnt down the orphanage, killing everyone inside except for Saya, who with her abilities had escaped without Seijuro's knowledge.
After this Seijuro wandered the land a young boy with no home. He learned to accept the loneliness that came with it and further buried his emotions. All he knew was pain, and he repressed this pain by killing others. Hunting for animals to feed himself brought him great joy, often forcing his prey to suffer before they died.
Eventually he found himself in the streets of Konoha stealing to get by when he didn't catch his own food. It was easier to take from others rather than find his own prey. People became his prey, until one day he was caught by a renowned medical ninja in the village. He took Seijuro in off the streets and taught him the ways of the Shinobi. He was already skilled with ninja weaponry from his days in the orphanage where the older orphans would play with shuriken and kunai with dreams of one day becoming Shinobi themselves. However this was no game for Seijuro, he took these tools seriously and practiced diligently with them. The man who took him in was impressed by this natural skill and asked Seijuro if he wanted to become a medical ninja. Seijuro had no intention at all of staying away from combat and helping heal others, though the knowledge of the human body and power that came with the path of a medical ninja fascinated him. And so through his power of manipulation and lies he took advantage of this man and studied the ways of medicine and chakra control. He picked techniques up much faster than his sensei expected. He was more than just a child prodigy, Seijuro was a genius by all means.
Several years passed and Seijuro graduated the ninja academy in mere weeks. He was a Genin for less than a year and became one of the youngest Chuunin the village had ever had age thirteen. It was at this time that a young girl began studying with his master to become a medical ninja as well. This shocked Seijuro, as it was the same girl he thought he had killed, Namine Akizakura. He always covered his face ever since becoming a ninja so for a while she didn't recognize him, however she always felt odd around him. Seijuro played the part of a manipulator so well around her that they became close, he would warp the young girl's mind and was cunning enough to turn her against her own intuition. He made her believe her own senses misguided her and were lying to her. This was a testament to Seijuro's ability to manipulate others, that he could even fool the abilities of an Akizakura. Eventually he began to grow fond of her, and instead of trying to kill her, he wanted to make her his own. He began to fall in love with her, the emotionless boy who never loved anything after his mother died suddenly had hopes and aspirations for the future. But when the time came to confess his feelings to Saya and court her to become his, she could not bring herself to accept. She loved him, that she did, but something inside of her begged her to refuse. It was a feeling too strong to ignore that not even the young Seijuro could turn her from. And so she declined, breaking the young boy's heart.
This broke Seijuro. His brief period of trying to learn to love was destroyed by his own doing. Just maybe if he had been true to her and didn't just manipulate her into loving him he would have had a chance, but his selfish intentions pushed her away. And so he could no longer be a part of her life, but he wanted so badly to kill her. But the worst of Seijuro was brought out that day. Kill her? No, that would be too easy. Instead, he would take from her everything she loved. But what did an orphan like her have to take? The village. The village she loved so much would be stricken of life. And so Seijuro resolved to become the Hidden Leaf's Nightmare.
After learning the peak medical techniques Konoha had to offer, he became a mercenary in the Leaf village's underworld. Eventually the Hokage had to personally come to Seijuro and inform him that he was being too brutal with his line of work and was bringing a bad name to the village. Seijuro laughed in the Hokage's face and told him that the village had nothing left to offer him. On Seijuro's last day in Konoha he used his sensei's own technique that he had taught to he and Saya to kill him right in front of her, splattering their sensei's blood all over her. She tried to fight back against him but Seijuro was too cunning and skilled. He could have killed her right there, and he made that known to her, and informed her that the only reason he kept her alive was to watch her suffer for the rest of her life. It was at this time that he removed his bandages and revealed himself as the one who burnt down the orphanage they met in.
Seijuro left the village a Jonin at age seventeen. He immigrated to Iwagakure on rumors he heard in the Leaf underworld that there was a man who had found immortality in Iwa. It was there that Seijuro found a puppet master who took an interest in Seijuro for his intellect and medical skill. He trained him in the art of puppetry until Seijuro inquired about why there were rumors he was immortal. The man always grew quiet and never spoke a word to Seijuro about it which only made the boy more curious. Seijuro studied this man and eventually was able to call his teacher out on his methods. "The way you walk, it sounds like hollow wood crossing the floor. You are not made of flesh." His teacher, stunned at his students ability to discern his true nature, could not let Seijuro live from this. He turned on his young student and exhausted every resource he had to kill him. Seijuro was outmatched in terms of power and experience, however his skill and wit outweighed his master. In a short time Seijuro had learned every possible way to manipulate a puppet from watching this man. And so Seijuro killed the second of his teachers and stole from him the method to becoming immortal: Human Puppetry.
It was not long after Seijuro himself became a human puppet. He covered up the death of his master and began serving in Iwagakure's ANBU black ops until he became the captain of the ANBU in under a year. It was here where he manipulated the last Tsuchikage, giving him false information that Konoha was plotting against him when he lived in the Leaf. He stirred the pot of war for months and eventually took a squad of Iwa nin out to do reconnaissance on Konoha, killed them all himself and returned to the Tsuchikage and reported that it was Konoha that slaughtered his men. The Tsuchikage blamed Konoha and began an assault on any of their Shinobi outside of the village once retaliation against this tactic grew, Iwagakure launched a full on assault against Konoha and the Second Great War began. During this war Seijuro ordered the extermination of all Akizakura clan members, and slaughtered all of Saya's remaining family, although her daughter Namine survived by being thrown into hiding. Seijuro caught wind of this trickery, and set out to kill Namine as a final act of vengeance on Saya to truly take away everything she loved.
At the end of the war Seijuro grew cocky. He had an army of human puppets at his disposal until Saya revealed to the Tsuchikage that Seijuro had been manipulating him the entire time. So of course that meant Seijuro had to kill the Tsuchikage. And so he did, and he became one of Seijuro's growing collection of human puppets, though this one was especially important as it was so realistic it was used to manipulate the people of Iwagakure as their Tsuchikage for months. Seijuro used this tool to further the war so fast that by the time the jig was up and he could no longer deny the rumors of the Tsuchikage being nothing more than a puppet which was propagated by Saya and Konoha herself, the war was already in full swing and so much blood had been spilled on both sides. At this point the war was too far gone to call off, but Seijuro was exiled from Iwagakure. And so he marched on Konoha himself with his army of puppets and set out to kill Saya's daughter Namine once and for all, but his arrogance got the best of him and he thought himself invincible. And so he was caught in a trap by the three Sannin (one of them being Saya Akizakura) and the fourth Hokage. The Hokage was killed and so was Saya, and it took the power of the two remaining Sannin and their faithful follower Jaakuna to seal Seijuro, though Jaakuna was taken to the grave along with the puppet master. Ultimately only two Sannin remained with Saya dead, one of them was Gisho, who became the Fifth Hokage.
Twenty years later, Seijuro lives again. No one knows how, his soul was sealed for certain. But somehow, some way he walks among the living.
Personality: No one can capture a snake's personality. He's just a fucking Nightmare of a human being. You're better off not getting to know this guy. He's the worst thing to ever crawl out of Konoha.
Combat Style: Seijuro uses any manner possible to keep himself out of combat because as soon as his blood is drawn from his body a side of him that rarely anyone sees is unleashed. He is a master strategist and cunning beyond measure. Only when one truly brings Seijuro to the point of rage do they have a chance of defeating him. If his opponent cannot bring out his anger and allows him to keep a level head, they stand no chance of overcoming his intellect.
Nature Release: None
Jutsu List
Puppet Technique
Body Flicker
Mystical Palm Technique
Chakra Scalpel
Generic Sealing - Seals tattooed on his wrists to summon his puppets
Thousand Hands Manipulation
Chakra Threads
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Jutsu Name: (Remote Puppet Seal)
Jutsu Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: C
Effective Range: 5km
Nature Type: None
Description: Seijuro places a seal upon his puppet that allows him to control the puppet without the use of chakra threads.
Drawbacks: Seijuro must remain perfectly still in a state of meditation in order to perform this technique leaving him completely open to attacks. He can only control a maximum of two puppets at once with this technique.
Jutsu Name: (Disengagement Technique)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Effective Range: Long
Nature Type: None
Description: This is Seijuro's version of the Replacement Technique. Instead of a log or what have you, Seijuro will switch places with one of his puppets, or switch two of his puppets places with each other. It requires three one-handed seals.
Drawbacks: Can only be used once every three posts. Large chakra cost for a C rank technique.
utsu Name: (Hellfire)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Effective Range: Long
Nature Type: None
Description: Seijuro's Third Tsuchikage puppet Kyoku uses a cannon hidden inside a panel on its back. The cannon fires a massive concussive blast of chakra that obliterates anything it touches. This is not Seijuro's style to be large and flashy, but certain situations call for such a maneuver.
Drawbacks: Can only be used three times per day, takes a large amount of chakra to fire, the Kyoku must be locked into the ground and is left out of commission for fifteen seconds after firing.
Puppet Technique
Body Flicker
Mystical Palm Technique
Chakra Scalpel
Generic Sealing - Seals tattooed on his wrists to summon his puppets
Thousand Hands Manipulation
Chakra Threads
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Jutsu Name: (Remote Puppet Seal)
Jutsu Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: C
Effective Range: 5km
Nature Type: None
Description: Seijuro places a seal upon his puppet that allows him to control the puppet without the use of chakra threads.
Drawbacks: Seijuro must remain perfectly still in a state of meditation in order to perform this technique leaving him completely open to attacks. He can only control a maximum of two puppets at once with this technique.
Jutsu Name: (Disengagement Technique)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Effective Range: Long
Nature Type: None
Description: This is Seijuro's version of the Replacement Technique. Instead of a log or what have you, Seijuro will switch places with one of his puppets, or switch two of his puppets places with each other. It requires three one-handed seals.
Drawbacks: Can only be used once every three posts. Large chakra cost for a C rank technique.
utsu Name: (Hellfire)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Effective Range: Long
Nature Type: None
Description: Seijuro's Third Tsuchikage puppet Kyoku uses a cannon hidden inside a panel on its back. The cannon fires a massive concussive blast of chakra that obliterates anything it touches. This is not Seijuro's style to be large and flashy, but certain situations call for such a maneuver.
Drawbacks: Can only be used three times per day, takes a large amount of chakra to fire, the Kyoku must be locked into the ground and is left out of commission for fifteen seconds after firing.
Weaponry:
The army of human puppets Seijuro had accumulated during the Second Great War were destroyed save for one.
Akumu - Seijuro himself is a human puppet. Thus, his entire body is an arsenal from Hell that has given him the moniker "The Hidden Leaf's Nightmare". His body is formed out of a chakra-hardened wood that makes it resistant to chakra based attacks, however by no means is he immune to them. They simply soften the blow giving the illusion that he can take more damage than the average man. Beneath the wooden exterior is a thin metal layer from Kyoku that is lighter than steel but still very durable, allowing him to retain his ability but adding an extra buffer of durability beneath his exterior puppet body. He has modified the bones formerly inside of his forearms into blades that shoot out of the sides of his arms at will. They are modified to be sickle-shaped blades covered with a black synthetic substance that protects them from corrosive materials. Each blade comes with a groove next to the edge that allows for the travel of a highly corrosive blood-red acid down the edge of the blade, allowing Seijuro to swing the blades causing a spray of highly corrosive acid capable of corroding most metals known to man. Contact to the human body is extremely dangerous. The acid comes from two seals on the inside of the forearms that allow the acid to drip down the blades. If necessary Seijuro can exhaust the seals potential and create an acidic flood in the area he points the seals at. Underneath his tongue is a flamethrower that uses his chakra as fuel. His feet and elbows contain compressed wind jets that allow him the ability to temporarily fly, change direction in the blink of an eye, propel himself forward at incredible speeds, or simply create a powerful concussive burst of wind to attack or defend with. The elbows take 30 seconds each to recharge and the feet can maintain flight for up to ten minutes at a time before needing a recharge time of one minute. Inside of his stomach his 21ft long small intestine has been preserved and transformed into a weapon, at the end of them is a sickle shaped blade coated with a poison that instantly numbs the motor neurons in the area effected, but leaves sensory neurons working so that the opponent cannot move but remains capable of feeling pain inflicted on them; perfect for torture. The poison spreads quickly through the bloodstream. There are seals on each of his fingers that summon numerous shuriken to rain down on his opponent. Seijuro can suppress his chakra with these seals and create invisible chakra threads attached to any weapon he throws in order to manipulate them unknowingly.
Zetsumei - Seijuro's human puppet of Mitsuki Dokugami. The puppet uses the Kekkei Genkai of the Dokugami Clan to create poisons of various natures in order to paralyze or kill its victims. Thus, Zetsumei can spew large clouds of toxins out of its mouth or create streams of toxic liquid. Touching the puppets very skin can transfer toxins off its body. The Dokugami clan are literally poisonous inside and out and this human puppet is no exception. Seijuro has given the puppet a deadly scythe and tattered black hooded cloak to go with its new appearance. The most deadly poison the puppet uses is a necrotic toxin that destroys the cells of whatever it touches in seconds and slowly spreads throughout the body within several minutes after contact. Zetsumei's ribs have been sharpened and are coated with his necrotic poison; they have been modified to protrude from the puppets chest in order to pierce his opponent, providing a close range attack. However the true purpose of the modified ribs it to be used as a cage to trap opponents daring enough to come close to Zetsumei. The puppet has seals on its hands that summon senbon and shuriken at will, using its poison abilities to coat the tools as they are summoned. The mouth of the puppet fires a spiked chain with a nine inch blade at the forefront. The chain and blade are both coated in the puppets signature necrotic poison.
Kyoku - The human puppet of the Third Tsuchikage, crafted by Seijuro after murdering him in cold blood. He used this puppet to manipulate Iwagakure for several months during the Second Great War before they figured out it was a puppet. The Third Tsuchikage possessed the Steel Release Kekkei Genkai and this human puppet takes full advantage of that. The Impervious Armor ability is used by this puppet to create a near impenetrable defense on its exterior. This ability is also used by Seijuro to help craft himself and his other puppets for defensive purposes. Any weapons used by Seijuro are also created out of this black steel, giving him an edge over users of normal steel. The Third Tsuchikage was a man of incredible stature, and Kyoku was bloated out slightly to create space so that Seijuro could actually enter and travel within the puppet as armor and manipulate it from within. The puppet uses two black steel nodachi as its main forms of combat. Kyoku utilizes a battery in either of his arms which produces an electric current to run along his weaponry and his body as a whole. Augmented by Seijuro's chakra this electricity can be turned into a short range (3 meter) field around the puppet that paralyzes opponents or can be conducted through weaponry or the puppets hands as a blade. The field of electricity paralyzes Chuunin and weaker opponents instantly but higher ranked opponents require a few seconds of staying in the field to paralyze them. He can only maintain the electric field for 15 seconds at a time with a two post cooldown. Firing a bolt of electricity as a projectile is also possible but very chakra consuming. Two spiked chains attached to six inch blades reside in either of Kyoku's elbows attached to rotating pistons that will pull in anything the chains are lodged into or wrapped around. There is a seal on the puppets wrists that fire kunai attached with rows of explosive tags. Kyoku has a signature seal located in its stomach that creates a chain of tags to be summoned, each equipped with another tag that summons more explosive tags creating a chain reaction until Seijuro forms a hand seal to detonate them all at once. Located on Kyoku's back is a panel that flips over to reveal a giant cannon. Kyoku must lock all four of his limbs into the ground before firing the cannon which uses Seijuro's chakra as a medium for its explosive power. Seijuro has enough chakra for three uses in one day, however it takes at least a minute between uses. The cannon is an S-rank technique that blows the puppet backward even with its limbs engrained into the earth.
Miscellaneous: Ghost stories of Seijuro are told in Iwa and Konoha to scare small children (and adults who know the truth about him). Some believe he is a myth, that some of the things he has done are too vile to have truly happened.
The army of human puppets Seijuro had accumulated during the Second Great War were destroyed save for one.
Akumu - Seijuro himself is a human puppet. Thus, his entire body is an arsenal from Hell that has given him the moniker "The Hidden Leaf's Nightmare". His body is formed out of a chakra-hardened wood that makes it resistant to chakra based attacks, however by no means is he immune to them. They simply soften the blow giving the illusion that he can take more damage than the average man. Beneath the wooden exterior is a thin metal layer from Kyoku that is lighter than steel but still very durable, allowing him to retain his ability but adding an extra buffer of durability beneath his exterior puppet body. He has modified the bones formerly inside of his forearms into blades that shoot out of the sides of his arms at will. They are modified to be sickle-shaped blades covered with a black synthetic substance that protects them from corrosive materials. Each blade comes with a groove next to the edge that allows for the travel of a highly corrosive blood-red acid down the edge of the blade, allowing Seijuro to swing the blades causing a spray of highly corrosive acid capable of corroding most metals known to man. Contact to the human body is extremely dangerous. The acid comes from two seals on the inside of the forearms that allow the acid to drip down the blades. If necessary Seijuro can exhaust the seals potential and create an acidic flood in the area he points the seals at. Underneath his tongue is a flamethrower that uses his chakra as fuel. His feet and elbows contain compressed wind jets that allow him the ability to temporarily fly, change direction in the blink of an eye, propel himself forward at incredible speeds, or simply create a powerful concussive burst of wind to attack or defend with. The elbows take 30 seconds each to recharge and the feet can maintain flight for up to ten minutes at a time before needing a recharge time of one minute. Inside of his stomach his 21ft long small intestine has been preserved and transformed into a weapon, at the end of them is a sickle shaped blade coated with a poison that instantly numbs the motor neurons in the area effected, but leaves sensory neurons working so that the opponent cannot move but remains capable of feeling pain inflicted on them; perfect for torture. The poison spreads quickly through the bloodstream. There are seals on each of his fingers that summon numerous shuriken to rain down on his opponent. Seijuro can suppress his chakra with these seals and create invisible chakra threads attached to any weapon he throws in order to manipulate them unknowingly.
Zetsumei - Seijuro's human puppet of Mitsuki Dokugami. The puppet uses the Kekkei Genkai of the Dokugami Clan to create poisons of various natures in order to paralyze or kill its victims. Thus, Zetsumei can spew large clouds of toxins out of its mouth or create streams of toxic liquid. Touching the puppets very skin can transfer toxins off its body. The Dokugami clan are literally poisonous inside and out and this human puppet is no exception. Seijuro has given the puppet a deadly scythe and tattered black hooded cloak to go with its new appearance. The most deadly poison the puppet uses is a necrotic toxin that destroys the cells of whatever it touches in seconds and slowly spreads throughout the body within several minutes after contact. Zetsumei's ribs have been sharpened and are coated with his necrotic poison; they have been modified to protrude from the puppets chest in order to pierce his opponent, providing a close range attack. However the true purpose of the modified ribs it to be used as a cage to trap opponents daring enough to come close to Zetsumei. The puppet has seals on its hands that summon senbon and shuriken at will, using its poison abilities to coat the tools as they are summoned. The mouth of the puppet fires a spiked chain with a nine inch blade at the forefront. The chain and blade are both coated in the puppets signature necrotic poison.
Kyoku - The human puppet of the Third Tsuchikage, crafted by Seijuro after murdering him in cold blood. He used this puppet to manipulate Iwagakure for several months during the Second Great War before they figured out it was a puppet. The Third Tsuchikage possessed the Steel Release Kekkei Genkai and this human puppet takes full advantage of that. The Impervious Armor ability is used by this puppet to create a near impenetrable defense on its exterior. This ability is also used by Seijuro to help craft himself and his other puppets for defensive purposes. Any weapons used by Seijuro are also created out of this black steel, giving him an edge over users of normal steel. The Third Tsuchikage was a man of incredible stature, and Kyoku was bloated out slightly to create space so that Seijuro could actually enter and travel within the puppet as armor and manipulate it from within. The puppet uses two black steel nodachi as its main forms of combat. Kyoku utilizes a battery in either of his arms which produces an electric current to run along his weaponry and his body as a whole. Augmented by Seijuro's chakra this electricity can be turned into a short range (3 meter) field around the puppet that paralyzes opponents or can be conducted through weaponry or the puppets hands as a blade. The field of electricity paralyzes Chuunin and weaker opponents instantly but higher ranked opponents require a few seconds of staying in the field to paralyze them. He can only maintain the electric field for 15 seconds at a time with a two post cooldown. Firing a bolt of electricity as a projectile is also possible but very chakra consuming. Two spiked chains attached to six inch blades reside in either of Kyoku's elbows attached to rotating pistons that will pull in anything the chains are lodged into or wrapped around. There is a seal on the puppets wrists that fire kunai attached with rows of explosive tags. Kyoku has a signature seal located in its stomach that creates a chain of tags to be summoned, each equipped with another tag that summons more explosive tags creating a chain reaction until Seijuro forms a hand seal to detonate them all at once. Located on Kyoku's back is a panel that flips over to reveal a giant cannon. Kyoku must lock all four of his limbs into the ground before firing the cannon which uses Seijuro's chakra as a medium for its explosive power. Seijuro has enough chakra for three uses in one day, however it takes at least a minute between uses. The cannon is an S-rank technique that blows the puppet backward even with its limbs engrained into the earth.
Miscellaneous: Ghost stories of Seijuro are told in Iwa and Konoha to scare small children (and adults who know the truth about him). Some believe he is a myth, that some of the things he has done are too vile to have truly happened.
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Character Theme - Don't mind me, I'm just enjoying my solitude
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ใFull Nameใ Koma Hitsugi
ใNickname/Aliasใ N/a
ใGenderใ Female
ใAgeใ 21
ใAge Appearanceใ 20
ใSexualityใ Bisexual
ใVillageใ
Iwagakure
ใBirthplaceใ
Iwagakure
ใAlignment/Affiliation/Organizationใ
Iwagakure
ใClan/Bloodlineใ
Hitsugi - Not a clan of note, aside from having rather remarkable skill with the bow, exceptional eye-sight to match and a few specialised archery-focused techniques.
ใRankใ
Chunin
ใChakra Natureใ
Wind
Lightning
ใAppearance/Wardrobeใ
Typically, when on a mission or attending shinobi duties, Koma's normal garb is replaced with a simple Iwagakure uniform with flak jacket and a camouflage net worn around her neck like a cloak.
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ใPersonalityใ
Koma is a quiet woman around others, typically not wanting to get into conversations and conflicts with others unless she has to and normally she's got a strong distaste for being the centre of attention. She's honest and polite with comrades to the point where she can at least exchange pleasantries and perhaps indulge them in more until she begins to feel uncomfortable.
Really she finds a pleasant sanctuary in isolation so she'll either stay within the confines of her home or be strolling around the craggy cliffs, valleys and rocky areas surrounding the village itself, mostly to avoid interaction with others as much as possible.
If placed within a team or ordered to, she will work with other shinobi to the best of her ability by putting herself out of a target's reach or by scouting and surveying an area for her allies, using smoke bombs and whatever other method possible to get out of her enemy's range.
She doesn't really think she's interesting enough to have close friends or companions, which only serves to make what conversations she does have with other people even harder due to the self-imposed pressure over making a good impression in order to try and actually make friends.
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ใHistoryใ
Koma and the Hitsugi clan aren't too known of aside from the common knowledge that they're a clan of bow users, as a matter of fact even that isn't too well known outside of other shinobi clans or the military.
Koma was born as one of two twins to a proud and happy couple known as Ranna Hitsugi and Tobi Hitsugi, her brother was named Karna Hitsugi and the family started their happy life in Iwagakure. A year after their birth Karna had fallen ill and passed away a couple of months later, it was a blow to Ranna and Tobi but they kept on going, raising little Koma as an only child and doing their best to shelter her from outside influences that might claim her life whilst she was still growing. It was safe to say that they were a little protective over their only remaining child, anyone would be after loss like that.
As she grew Koma was taught to use a bow like the rest of the family in her lineage did and once she became a full-fledged kunoichi the tools of the clan's bowmen were passed down to her to supplement her skill in the shinobi world, with the help of her father she learnt to use the bow and developed her own techniques for it. With the growth of her, her skill and her techniques, so too did knowledge about the girl herself and her clan. And due to her somewhat increased renown, the girl's parents decided to tell her about her lost brother before someone outside the family could find out and tell her instead.
Even by now the girl wasn't much of the social type, so she had no shoulders to cry on aside from her parents, whom she was angry at. She understood why they didn't tell her, but it didn't stop her getting upset and emotional about it whilst she was so young, the fact that she hadn't originally been born alone and the chance for some form of companionship was missed brewed inside her like a bad stew. In mere moments she'd felt so connected to the brother she'd once had and also so lost by the fact he wasn't there now, it made her angry and caused her to seclude herself from others whilst she waited for a mission that required her skill set.
Since then she's still had this quiet, uncertain sensation in the back of her mind, telling her to release those frustrations over her own little venting procedure, such as wallowing in solitude or hunting down a target.
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ใSpecial Traitsใ
Exceptional Eyesight and hand-eye co-ordination.
Large chakra reserves.
Excellent marksmanship.
Experienced with Genjutsu.
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ใEquipment/Weapons/Itemsใ
Name of Weapon or Item: Smoke Bombs
Description: Used mostly for causing a distraction to get her out of close combat, these are also used as a trigger to some of her genjutsu techniques.
Appearance:
Name of Weapon or Item: Chakra-infused Bow Grip
Description: A special item passed down the Hitsugi family line to all whom do take up the bow and become shinobi, using chakra moulding to give it form, the user can create a bow of any shape and size suitable to their needs and they consume chakra by forming arrows and firing them. This object can consume a lot of chakra before the user realises the extent of their chakra expenditure and so preferably requires large reserves to use effectively.
Appearance: It appears to be a simple wooden bow grip with hollowed-out dents at the top and bottom where small metal rods poke out.
Name of Weapon or Item: Camo-Cloak
Description: Another specialised item that belongs to the Hitsugi clan is the camo-cloak, when chakra is channelled through it the cloak disturbs and warps the light around the user to make them appear almost see-through. This is only good for hiding when Koma hasn't been seen yet and when she's immobile or slow-moving as it takes time for the light to warp and when she's moving too fast the cloak is completely disturbed by the amount of movement being made.
Appearance: A waist-length mesh cloak.
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ใKekkei Genkai ใ
Name of Kekkei Genkai: None
Clan: N/a
Rank N/a
Description: N/a
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Jutsu:
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ใFull Nameใ Koma Hitsugi
ใNickname/Aliasใ N/a
ใGenderใ Female
ใAgeใ 21
ใAge Appearanceใ 20
ใSexualityใ Bisexual
ใVillageใ
Iwagakure
ใBirthplaceใ
Iwagakure
ใAlignment/Affiliation/Organizationใ
Iwagakure
ใClan/Bloodlineใ
Hitsugi - Not a clan of note, aside from having rather remarkable skill with the bow, exceptional eye-sight to match and a few specialised archery-focused techniques.
ใRankใ
Chunin
ใChakra Natureใ
Wind
Lightning
ใAppearance/Wardrobeใ
Typically, when on a mission or attending shinobi duties, Koma's normal garb is replaced with a simple Iwagakure uniform with flak jacket and a camouflage net worn around her neck like a cloak.
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ใPersonalityใ
Koma is a quiet woman around others, typically not wanting to get into conversations and conflicts with others unless she has to and normally she's got a strong distaste for being the centre of attention. She's honest and polite with comrades to the point where she can at least exchange pleasantries and perhaps indulge them in more until she begins to feel uncomfortable.
Really she finds a pleasant sanctuary in isolation so she'll either stay within the confines of her home or be strolling around the craggy cliffs, valleys and rocky areas surrounding the village itself, mostly to avoid interaction with others as much as possible.
If placed within a team or ordered to, she will work with other shinobi to the best of her ability by putting herself out of a target's reach or by scouting and surveying an area for her allies, using smoke bombs and whatever other method possible to get out of her enemy's range.
She doesn't really think she's interesting enough to have close friends or companions, which only serves to make what conversations she does have with other people even harder due to the self-imposed pressure over making a good impression in order to try and actually make friends.
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ใHistoryใ
Koma and the Hitsugi clan aren't too known of aside from the common knowledge that they're a clan of bow users, as a matter of fact even that isn't too well known outside of other shinobi clans or the military.
Koma was born as one of two twins to a proud and happy couple known as Ranna Hitsugi and Tobi Hitsugi, her brother was named Karna Hitsugi and the family started their happy life in Iwagakure. A year after their birth Karna had fallen ill and passed away a couple of months later, it was a blow to Ranna and Tobi but they kept on going, raising little Koma as an only child and doing their best to shelter her from outside influences that might claim her life whilst she was still growing. It was safe to say that they were a little protective over their only remaining child, anyone would be after loss like that.
As she grew Koma was taught to use a bow like the rest of the family in her lineage did and once she became a full-fledged kunoichi the tools of the clan's bowmen were passed down to her to supplement her skill in the shinobi world, with the help of her father she learnt to use the bow and developed her own techniques for it. With the growth of her, her skill and her techniques, so too did knowledge about the girl herself and her clan. And due to her somewhat increased renown, the girl's parents decided to tell her about her lost brother before someone outside the family could find out and tell her instead.
Even by now the girl wasn't much of the social type, so she had no shoulders to cry on aside from her parents, whom she was angry at. She understood why they didn't tell her, but it didn't stop her getting upset and emotional about it whilst she was so young, the fact that she hadn't originally been born alone and the chance for some form of companionship was missed brewed inside her like a bad stew. In mere moments she'd felt so connected to the brother she'd once had and also so lost by the fact he wasn't there now, it made her angry and caused her to seclude herself from others whilst she waited for a mission that required her skill set.
Since then she's still had this quiet, uncertain sensation in the back of her mind, telling her to release those frustrations over her own little venting procedure, such as wallowing in solitude or hunting down a target.
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ใSpecial Traitsใ
Exceptional Eyesight and hand-eye co-ordination.
Large chakra reserves.
Excellent marksmanship.
Experienced with Genjutsu.
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ใEquipment/Weapons/Itemsใ
Name of Weapon or Item: Smoke Bombs
Description: Used mostly for causing a distraction to get her out of close combat, these are also used as a trigger to some of her genjutsu techniques.
Appearance:
Name of Weapon or Item: Chakra-infused Bow Grip
Description: A special item passed down the Hitsugi family line to all whom do take up the bow and become shinobi, using chakra moulding to give it form, the user can create a bow of any shape and size suitable to their needs and they consume chakra by forming arrows and firing them. This object can consume a lot of chakra before the user realises the extent of their chakra expenditure and so preferably requires large reserves to use effectively.
Appearance: It appears to be a simple wooden bow grip with hollowed-out dents at the top and bottom where small metal rods poke out.
Name of Weapon or Item: Camo-Cloak
Description: Another specialised item that belongs to the Hitsugi clan is the camo-cloak, when chakra is channelled through it the cloak disturbs and warps the light around the user to make them appear almost see-through. This is only good for hiding when Koma hasn't been seen yet and when she's immobile or slow-moving as it takes time for the light to warp and when she's moving too fast the cloak is completely disturbed by the amount of movement being made.
Appearance: A waist-length mesh cloak.
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Name of Kekkei Genkai: None
Clan: N/a
Rank N/a
Description: N/a
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Jutsu:
Name of Technique: Just out of reach!
Type of Jutsu: Genjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Short
Nature Type: Yin
Effect: A technique that is triggered by the use of Koma's smoke bombs, it alters the target's depth perception and spatial awareness as she makes her escape to disturb any ability they have to catch her. These effects give the illusion that she is, as the technique states "Just out of reach" no matter how hard they try to catch her, small steps feel like great strides yet they see her out-pacing them and always being ahead by at least a few steps.
The downside to this is that it's a simple genjutsu, anyone who knows about genjutsu would be able to figure it out once they realise something is off. It's also only really effective against the same target once.
Name of Technique: Chakra Bow
Type of Jutsu: Kyujutsu
Rank: B
Range: Short to Extreme
Nature Type: Wind, Lightning
Effect: Using the Hitsugi clan's specialised tool, the user creates a bow of their liking or requirement out of chakra, drawing and firing an arrow requires the use of chakra and if one is not careful, they could easily run low on chakra with this technique. The chakra arrows fire from this bow fly further, faster and hit harder than a standard bow, but training to know the essentials of using a bow is a must before using this tool.
The bow itself is physically intangible, preventing any part of it aside from the handle from being used to block blades or other weaponry.
Applying a chakra nature to it can amplify it's power depending on the nature;
Wind - The arrow flies even faster and unleashes a powerful gust of wind in all directions post-impact.
Lightning - This arrow unleashes a stunning field of electricity in a small 1 metre area around the impact point of the arrow.
Name of Technique: Chakra Bow - Saturation
Type of Jutsu: Kyujutsu
Rank: C
Range: Short to Long
Nature Type: Wind or Lightning
Effect: A technique used to cover an entire area (circular area, approx 100m diameter) in arrows in one shot, building up a considerable amount of charge before firing. In mid-air the arrow bursts into 50 smaller arrows that saturate the area, if attributed with an elemental affinity these smaller arrows will bear the same effects as the arrow types in the main chakra bow technique, only reduced in potency to about half their original effectiveness.
Name of Technique: Chakra Bow - Annihilation
Type of Jutsu: Kyujutsu
Rank: B
Range: Extreme
Nature Type: Lightning
Effect: This is a technique that Koma calls her "killshot" technique, the amount of chakra taken to create this arrow is currently about half of her entire reserves, but it's designed to detonate upon impact to create a chakra-based blast covering a 20 metre (diameter) area in an attempt to blow up or "annihilate" her target. It could be comparable to being hit by a bolt of lightning or struck down by god himself, if it hits.
It's main drawback is the sheer amount of time and power it takes to fire it, the chakra bow itself requiring modifications to anchor itself to the ground before firing to spare Koma from the recoil of it's shot. It is impossible to try and fire this arrow from a close range or in combat due to it's blast radius and time requirements.
Name of Technique: Chakra Bow - Eagle-Eye
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Mid to Extreme
Nature Type: n/a
Effect: A quick ninjutsu used to assist the already sharp-eyed Koma in ensuring the accuracy of her shots by vastly increasing the range of her vision. It can also supplement an acceptable amount of light for night-time use but otherwise it is mostly an aiming assistant for surveying an area or spotting a long-distance target. Unfortunately in doing this, it means she has trouble viewing things that are closer to her until she de-activates the technique.
Type of Jutsu: Genjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Short
Nature Type: Yin
Effect: A technique that is triggered by the use of Koma's smoke bombs, it alters the target's depth perception and spatial awareness as she makes her escape to disturb any ability they have to catch her. These effects give the illusion that she is, as the technique states "Just out of reach" no matter how hard they try to catch her, small steps feel like great strides yet they see her out-pacing them and always being ahead by at least a few steps.
The downside to this is that it's a simple genjutsu, anyone who knows about genjutsu would be able to figure it out once they realise something is off. It's also only really effective against the same target once.
Name of Technique: Chakra Bow
Type of Jutsu: Kyujutsu
Rank: B
Range: Short to Extreme
Nature Type: Wind, Lightning
Effect: Using the Hitsugi clan's specialised tool, the user creates a bow of their liking or requirement out of chakra, drawing and firing an arrow requires the use of chakra and if one is not careful, they could easily run low on chakra with this technique. The chakra arrows fire from this bow fly further, faster and hit harder than a standard bow, but training to know the essentials of using a bow is a must before using this tool.
The bow itself is physically intangible, preventing any part of it aside from the handle from being used to block blades or other weaponry.
Applying a chakra nature to it can amplify it's power depending on the nature;
Wind - The arrow flies even faster and unleashes a powerful gust of wind in all directions post-impact.
Lightning - This arrow unleashes a stunning field of electricity in a small 1 metre area around the impact point of the arrow.
Name of Technique: Chakra Bow - Saturation
Type of Jutsu: Kyujutsu
Rank: C
Range: Short to Long
Nature Type: Wind or Lightning
Effect: A technique used to cover an entire area (circular area, approx 100m diameter) in arrows in one shot, building up a considerable amount of charge before firing. In mid-air the arrow bursts into 50 smaller arrows that saturate the area, if attributed with an elemental affinity these smaller arrows will bear the same effects as the arrow types in the main chakra bow technique, only reduced in potency to about half their original effectiveness.
Name of Technique: Chakra Bow - Annihilation
Type of Jutsu: Kyujutsu
Rank: B
Range: Extreme
Nature Type: Lightning
Effect: This is a technique that Koma calls her "killshot" technique, the amount of chakra taken to create this arrow is currently about half of her entire reserves, but it's designed to detonate upon impact to create a chakra-based blast covering a 20 metre (diameter) area in an attempt to blow up or "annihilate" her target. It could be comparable to being hit by a bolt of lightning or struck down by god himself, if it hits.
It's main drawback is the sheer amount of time and power it takes to fire it, the chakra bow itself requiring modifications to anchor itself to the ground before firing to spare Koma from the recoil of it's shot. It is impossible to try and fire this arrow from a close range or in combat due to it's blast radius and time requirements.
Name of Technique: Chakra Bow - Eagle-Eye
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Mid to Extreme
Nature Type: n/a
Effect: A quick ninjutsu used to assist the already sharp-eyed Koma in ensuring the accuracy of her shots by vastly increasing the range of her vision. It can also supplement an acceptable amount of light for night-time use but otherwise it is mostly an aiming assistant for surveying an area or spotting a long-distance target. Unfortunately in doing this, it means she has trouble viewing things that are closer to her until she de-activates the technique.
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Renji Kurogama - Abyssal Onyx Mirror, how long does it take to crystallize an acre of land? Like how long does an opponent have to dodge this? Also specify that casting time in seconds or # of posts.
Uragiri Sakana - so he's a 16 year old Chuunin that knows both of Madara's A-ranked fire techniques? I'm not totally against the idea but I'm not totally sold on it either. And like is there a reason why he has an S ranked sealing technique with no other sealing knowledge? Again, I'm not totally against the idea but like sell me on it.
Hime Yuki - I think there were some limitations discussed on Consecutive Ice chains but otherwise accepted.
Ayame Kouken - Accepted, like the char
Ai Kabe - accepted
I'll get to the last two in a bit
Renji Kurogama - Abyssal Onyx Mirror, how long does it take to crystallize an acre of land? Like how long does an opponent have to dodge this? Also specify that casting time in seconds or # of posts.
Uragiri Sakana - so he's a 16 year old Chuunin that knows both of Madara's A-ranked fire techniques? I'm not totally against the idea but I'm not totally sold on it either. And like is there a reason why he has an S ranked sealing technique with no other sealing knowledge? Again, I'm not totally against the idea but like sell me on it.
Hime Yuki - I think there were some limitations discussed on Consecutive Ice chains but otherwise accepted.
Ayame Kouken - Accepted, like the char
Ai Kabe - accepted
I'll get to the last two in a bit
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Theme song: Evil Twins
Name: Jaakuna Aka
Alias: The Red Fox, Almighty Sage Ascended into Heaven, Fox Sage of Nine Pillars, Fox Boy (informal by his former wives.)
Real Age: 21 (At death)
Age Appearance: 20
Gender: Male
Rank: S-Class
Sexuality: Straight
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Personality: Once a Trickster, always a trickster. The host of the nine tailed fox, and the so called greatest warrior of Konoha's past was never one for being... Well, what's the word... Orderly. As a child, Jaakuna was easily bored, partially because he was often expected to be a role model. Something that never quite sat right with the jinchuriki. As he grew up, and listened more and more to some really bad advice, his tendency to break the rules was apparent. In fact, he was a bit of a rebellious flirt. Often aiming to break tradition where he could.
It didn't help that Jaakuna no matter how he tries is still restless. He adores admiration, and tends to fall into a habit of pulling pranks, or outright lying just to see how others react. In fact, some say he comes off as rather forward, and maybe too friendly. Any case, this tends to make him rather... Intolerable. A legend, but a terrible friend. No wonder he had six wives, with an intent to have nine before his passing. He may still be trying for that goal. Because he's nothing if not dedicated to a prank.
Village: Konoha - Former
History/Background:
Born of Shurui Aka, and Amai Aka, father and mother respectively. Shurui was the adviser to the Hokage, in as simple terms as it can be said. Not the 5th Hokage, but the previous. They got along well, had drinks by the river, and often enjoyed a night on the town. It was no surprise that when the host of the nine tailed fox fell ill, the Hokage made the choice to give the fox demon to Shurui's first born son. Jaakuna. On a day full of sunshine, Jaakuna was born, held up like a blessing, and then the fox was sealed inside him.
Immediately everything was business. Shurui and Amai took their jobs as parents very seriously. More so since the child they where raising was the host of the nine tailed fox demon. Strict bed times, always pushing him to be kind and wise. To make the right kind of choices. This meant his friends ended up being hand picked for him. Nothing but a bummer before you're even ten years old. But there was one friend Shurui and Amai didn't pick out for Jaakuna. Which made their friendship even tighter. Jaakuna was friends with the nine tailed fox. Their friendship knitted by one particular moment, when after being told he couldn't have cookies one night, Jaakuna snuck into the kitchen. It was the fox's idea, having fun with his young host. And that moment kept repeating. Soon, the two where reading each other's mind. Pulling the worst of pranks, and even flooding the hokage's office at one point.
But childhood ends fast, and Jaakuna had to be a genin eventually. His teacher was a private affair, at first. Within a week it was decided to put him in as the 4th member of a pre-established team. That team became the three sanin of the leaf, and Jaakuna as their very best friend. But that's a bit ahead of ourselves, isn't it? Jaakuna's trickster nature didn't exactly help him make friends. And it wasn't until their first mission that Jaakuna and Squad 13 became best friends. On the day they where tasked with a rather simple mission. An escort mission for Shurui Aka, Jaakuna's father. It was simple, for genin. Just escort him to one of the smaller side villages. Nobody expected it to go south. Bandits raided the camp in the middle of the night, taking two of squad 13 captive, and Shurui in the ensuing chaos. Jaakuna was one of the two who escaped, and the burden of such weighed on him. Despite the demands to return to the village and let a more experienced team finish the mission, Jaakuna and his remaining ally went off anyway.
That was the day that earned Jaakuna his nickname, The Red Fox. It's said that he manifested the nine tailed fox on that day, using it and his newfound power to fight his way through the bandit fortress. The boy rampaged for two days, or so the legend goes. In reality, it was about two hours. His anger, rage, all came rushing forth. It was that day he discovered just how twisted together he and the nine tailed fox where. That moment led him on another great discovery of self. Leaving the village behind to train in seclusion to balance with the monster inside him. They bickered, they struggled, and in time, their timid friendship of trickery grew to something more. A bond of brothers, a trust deeper than that of any other romance in his life. He returned to the village, a full hero. From there, his legend only grew. And he became a jonin at the age of fifteen. And by the age of eighteen he had two wives.
Unfortunately, life is not all glamour. Life is war.
Over time, Jaakuna made battle with the shinobi Seijuro. The two shinobi where considered bitter rivals, though the actual depths of their relationship, or lack there of are lost to history. But Jaakuna would never forgive Seijuro Nandate for the greatest tragedy of his life. For one day, Jaakuna had a child. A young boy, his first child. Kibo Aka. Kibo's ninja career was full of promise, taking well after his father. Until one day, Kibo's squad was ambushed. The entire squad wiped out, no bodies left behind. Just their blood. Jaakuna knew that Seijuro was behind it, and so began a crusade. The jinchuriki spent endless nights tracking down the puppet master, but each time he got close, Seijuro would vanish. Leaving Jaakuna with only his hatred, and his own red shadow.
Until one day, fate gave the dog a bone. Seijuro was tracked down, and Jaakuna rallied the other Sannin to aid him. The battle many describe as only legendary, but cannot be recounted well. None the less, Jaakuna took a fatal blow saving one of his squad, and unable to continue, offered himself up for a last ditch method to defeat Seijuro. A sealing technique. Using both Jaakuna's soul, and Seijuro's, the two warring shinobi where sealed away in a scroll. Jaakuna's soul forced to ever fight that of Seijuro. With Seijuro's body lost in the aftermath, Jaakuna's body was taken back to the village.
Jaakuna was celebrated for his life, and death. Revered by many as a sage, and buried with his weapons and clothing. The Fox Sage's body placed on display as a sign of both the great life he led, and a shining beacon for those to come next.
And then he was brought back to life.
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Tools:
Chakra Nature: Fire, Wind
Kekkei Genkai: None
Special Traits:
- High Speed Jaakuna is often considered one of the fastest shinobi who ever lived. Able to form handseals at speeds so fast it becomes impossible to tell what he just did. His high speed is often the corner-stone of his defense, as you have to hit him first before you can beat him.
- Super Strength Despite Jaakuna's fragile looking build, he's surprisingly strong. Able to lift other full grown men with one hand and throw them. This strength is mostly manifested by his tailed beast cloak, where he can throw boulders and other large rocks. This strength lets him tear through rocks with a good strong punch.
- High Chakra Reserves A side effect of being a jinchuriki for so long. His chakra reserves are rather large. Not as big as those currently jinchuriki, but he is still rather impressive compared to the usual ninja.
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Jutsu
Negative Emotions Sensing
Harem Technique
Shadow Clone Technique
Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique
Clone Great Explosion
Camouflage Technique (Unable to hide his scent.)
Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Fire Release: Great Fire Annihilation
Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning
Fire Release: Hiding in Ash and Dust Technique
Wind Release: Passing Typhoon
Wind Release: Pressure Damage
Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere
Name: (Tฤrubฤซsutokurลku) Tailed Beast Cloak
Rank: S
Range: Self Armor
Nature: None
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: A fairly simple technique where those with tailed beasts can manifest their chakra as a cloak, often with tails. While Jaakuna is no longer a jinchurika, he can still manifest his own unique cloak. The cloak acts as a deterrent, and allows him to use each of the nine tails he manifests as defensive or offensive additions to his body. This cloak augments all of his senses, and physical attributes. Making him one of, if not the fastest shinobi alive.
His speed is said to catch up to those able to teleport, but he leaves a distinct red flash when he moves, allowing significantly skilled ninja to at least figure out where he's been.
Weakness: The chakra cloak while easy to maintain, can be difficult to manifest without a moment to prepare oneself mentally. As such, the user is most vulnerable in the moments when he hasn't yet manifested the cloak.
Name: (U~iru o u~isupu) Will-o-Wisp
Rank: ?
Range: Short, Creation Technique
Nature: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: A technique believed to be unique to Jaakuna. He creates a sphere of chakra, roughly 7 inches in diameter. The sphere is manipulated by the users will, and can be embedded with different chakra natures. The different chakra used gives each orb a different use, as they can be immediately converted into B-rank or below techniques.
Ex: A fire wisp will be used to create a fireball technique. While a water or earth wisp create water and earth techniques.
Each Wisp requires the hand signs needed for the technique it is meant to mimic, with two more handseals at the end. One cast, a wisp is created in a flash, and ready to use.
Weakness: Wisps are rather obvious, and more of a utility technique. Their use comes more from allowing the user to prep techniques in advance, while allowing for hand to hand combat. As such, there is no known weakness.
Jaakuna can only manifest 5 spheres at a time, and they eventually fade after 24 hours, requiring him to make new wisps.
Name: (Wisp faiฤ asaruto) Wisp Fire Assault
Rank: A
Range: Long
Nature: Fire/Wind
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: By using his war fan and a wisp, Jaakuna causes the chakra to explode outward into a powerful rush of fire. By mixing and matching wisps he can manifest different methods of attack. By mixing in more wind wisps, the range and scale is doubled. By mixing in more fire wisps, it creates a more devastating but close range explosion.
1 Fire Wisp - A sweep of fire that can burn a manor house to the ground.
1 Fire + 1 Wind Wisp - A sweep of fire that is able to burn down two manor houses that spreads quickly.
1 Fire + 2+ Wind Wisps - A sweep of fire that can ruin an entire forest if left unchecked.
2+ Fire + 1 Wind Wisp - Instead of a sweeping forest of fire, it can instantly tear down a manor house with an explosion, rather than just burn it.
Weakness: As a specialized combo technique, it burns through Jaakuna's pre-made wisps rather quickly. As a result, while devastating, the technique denies him a wisp to use for defense or other purposes.
Name: (Hi no kitsune: Bakuhatsu-tekina iriguchi) Fire Fox: Explosive Entrance
Rank: B
Range: Contact
Nature: ?
Type: Beast Technique
Effect: Using his own speed, Jaakuna envelopes his body in chakra. The focus of his technique is almost strictly all about smashing into other objects at high speed. Tearing through stone, armor, and just about anything. This technique was used primarily to tear through structures at high speeds, to keep the nine tailed Jinchuriki mobile.
Weakness: Requires movement. As it's more about applying extra energy on impact, and protecting the user's front at high speeds. It loses most force at lower speeds.
Name: (Kasai no kitsune: Jinsei no haisui no o) Fire Fox: Life Draining Tails
Rank: B
Range: Contact
Nature: None
Type: Chakra Draining
Effect: Using his hands, or more often the tails in his chakra coat, Jaakuna drains chakra by contact. This technique drains chakra, and by doing so makes molding chakra difficult. If caught, it can be nearly impossible to escape, as he stifles the ability of others to mold their own jutsu in defense.
Name: Shuriken Shadow Clone Great Explosion Technique
Rank: A
Range: 2 meters
Nature: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: Combining both the Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique and the Clone Great Explosion Technique, Jaakuna creates a swarm of shuriken. Pelting a target with a great deal shuriken, Jaakuna then causes the clones to explode. The power of this technique allowed Jaakuna to fight his targets at a distance, while remaining mobile and not leaving himself open to other attacks.
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Name: Jaakuna Aka
Alias: The Red Fox, Almighty Sage Ascended into Heaven, Fox Sage of Nine Pillars, Fox Boy (informal by his former wives.)
Real Age: 21 (At death)
Age Appearance: 20
Gender: Male
Rank: S-Class
Sexuality: Straight
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Personality: Once a Trickster, always a trickster. The host of the nine tailed fox, and the so called greatest warrior of Konoha's past was never one for being... Well, what's the word... Orderly. As a child, Jaakuna was easily bored, partially because he was often expected to be a role model. Something that never quite sat right with the jinchuriki. As he grew up, and listened more and more to some really bad advice, his tendency to break the rules was apparent. In fact, he was a bit of a rebellious flirt. Often aiming to break tradition where he could.
It didn't help that Jaakuna no matter how he tries is still restless. He adores admiration, and tends to fall into a habit of pulling pranks, or outright lying just to see how others react. In fact, some say he comes off as rather forward, and maybe too friendly. Any case, this tends to make him rather... Intolerable. A legend, but a terrible friend. No wonder he had six wives, with an intent to have nine before his passing. He may still be trying for that goal. Because he's nothing if not dedicated to a prank.
Village: Konoha - Former
History/Background:
Born of Shurui Aka, and Amai Aka, father and mother respectively. Shurui was the adviser to the Hokage, in as simple terms as it can be said. Not the 5th Hokage, but the previous. They got along well, had drinks by the river, and often enjoyed a night on the town. It was no surprise that when the host of the nine tailed fox fell ill, the Hokage made the choice to give the fox demon to Shurui's first born son. Jaakuna. On a day full of sunshine, Jaakuna was born, held up like a blessing, and then the fox was sealed inside him.
Immediately everything was business. Shurui and Amai took their jobs as parents very seriously. More so since the child they where raising was the host of the nine tailed fox demon. Strict bed times, always pushing him to be kind and wise. To make the right kind of choices. This meant his friends ended up being hand picked for him. Nothing but a bummer before you're even ten years old. But there was one friend Shurui and Amai didn't pick out for Jaakuna. Which made their friendship even tighter. Jaakuna was friends with the nine tailed fox. Their friendship knitted by one particular moment, when after being told he couldn't have cookies one night, Jaakuna snuck into the kitchen. It was the fox's idea, having fun with his young host. And that moment kept repeating. Soon, the two where reading each other's mind. Pulling the worst of pranks, and even flooding the hokage's office at one point.
But childhood ends fast, and Jaakuna had to be a genin eventually. His teacher was a private affair, at first. Within a week it was decided to put him in as the 4th member of a pre-established team. That team became the three sanin of the leaf, and Jaakuna as their very best friend. But that's a bit ahead of ourselves, isn't it? Jaakuna's trickster nature didn't exactly help him make friends. And it wasn't until their first mission that Jaakuna and Squad 13 became best friends. On the day they where tasked with a rather simple mission. An escort mission for Shurui Aka, Jaakuna's father. It was simple, for genin. Just escort him to one of the smaller side villages. Nobody expected it to go south. Bandits raided the camp in the middle of the night, taking two of squad 13 captive, and Shurui in the ensuing chaos. Jaakuna was one of the two who escaped, and the burden of such weighed on him. Despite the demands to return to the village and let a more experienced team finish the mission, Jaakuna and his remaining ally went off anyway.
That was the day that earned Jaakuna his nickname, The Red Fox. It's said that he manifested the nine tailed fox on that day, using it and his newfound power to fight his way through the bandit fortress. The boy rampaged for two days, or so the legend goes. In reality, it was about two hours. His anger, rage, all came rushing forth. It was that day he discovered just how twisted together he and the nine tailed fox where. That moment led him on another great discovery of self. Leaving the village behind to train in seclusion to balance with the monster inside him. They bickered, they struggled, and in time, their timid friendship of trickery grew to something more. A bond of brothers, a trust deeper than that of any other romance in his life. He returned to the village, a full hero. From there, his legend only grew. And he became a jonin at the age of fifteen. And by the age of eighteen he had two wives.
Unfortunately, life is not all glamour. Life is war.
Over time, Jaakuna made battle with the shinobi Seijuro. The two shinobi where considered bitter rivals, though the actual depths of their relationship, or lack there of are lost to history. But Jaakuna would never forgive Seijuro Nandate for the greatest tragedy of his life. For one day, Jaakuna had a child. A young boy, his first child. Kibo Aka. Kibo's ninja career was full of promise, taking well after his father. Until one day, Kibo's squad was ambushed. The entire squad wiped out, no bodies left behind. Just their blood. Jaakuna knew that Seijuro was behind it, and so began a crusade. The jinchuriki spent endless nights tracking down the puppet master, but each time he got close, Seijuro would vanish. Leaving Jaakuna with only his hatred, and his own red shadow.
Until one day, fate gave the dog a bone. Seijuro was tracked down, and Jaakuna rallied the other Sannin to aid him. The battle many describe as only legendary, but cannot be recounted well. None the less, Jaakuna took a fatal blow saving one of his squad, and unable to continue, offered himself up for a last ditch method to defeat Seijuro. A sealing technique. Using both Jaakuna's soul, and Seijuro's, the two warring shinobi where sealed away in a scroll. Jaakuna's soul forced to ever fight that of Seijuro. With Seijuro's body lost in the aftermath, Jaakuna's body was taken back to the village.
Jaakuna was celebrated for his life, and death. Revered by many as a sage, and buried with his weapons and clothing. The Fox Sage's body placed on display as a sign of both the great life he led, and a shining beacon for those to come next.
And then he was brought back to life.
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Tools:
- Shuriken, Kunai, Ninja wire, basic equipment
- War Fan: Buried with Juukuna, this war fan is marked with the design of the fox. The weapon is used to amplify his fierce fire attacks.
- War Fan: Buried with Juukuna, this war fan is marked with the design of the fox. The weapon is used to amplify his fierce fire attacks.
Chakra Nature: Fire, Wind
Kekkei Genkai: None
Special Traits:
- High Speed Jaakuna is often considered one of the fastest shinobi who ever lived. Able to form handseals at speeds so fast it becomes impossible to tell what he just did. His high speed is often the corner-stone of his defense, as you have to hit him first before you can beat him.
- Super Strength Despite Jaakuna's fragile looking build, he's surprisingly strong. Able to lift other full grown men with one hand and throw them. This strength is mostly manifested by his tailed beast cloak, where he can throw boulders and other large rocks. This strength lets him tear through rocks with a good strong punch.
- High Chakra Reserves A side effect of being a jinchuriki for so long. His chakra reserves are rather large. Not as big as those currently jinchuriki, but he is still rather impressive compared to the usual ninja.
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Jutsu
Negative Emotions Sensing
Harem Technique
Shadow Clone Technique
Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique
Clone Great Explosion
Camouflage Technique (Unable to hide his scent.)
Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Fire Release: Great Fire Annihilation
Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning
Fire Release: Hiding in Ash and Dust Technique
Wind Release: Passing Typhoon
Wind Release: Pressure Damage
Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere
Name: (Tฤrubฤซsutokurลku) Tailed Beast Cloak
Rank: S
Range: Self Armor
Nature: None
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: A fairly simple technique where those with tailed beasts can manifest their chakra as a cloak, often with tails. While Jaakuna is no longer a jinchurika, he can still manifest his own unique cloak. The cloak acts as a deterrent, and allows him to use each of the nine tails he manifests as defensive or offensive additions to his body. This cloak augments all of his senses, and physical attributes. Making him one of, if not the fastest shinobi alive.
His speed is said to catch up to those able to teleport, but he leaves a distinct red flash when he moves, allowing significantly skilled ninja to at least figure out where he's been.
Weakness: The chakra cloak while easy to maintain, can be difficult to manifest without a moment to prepare oneself mentally. As such, the user is most vulnerable in the moments when he hasn't yet manifested the cloak.
Name: (U~iru o u~isupu) Will-o-Wisp
Rank: ?
Range: Short, Creation Technique
Nature: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: A technique believed to be unique to Jaakuna. He creates a sphere of chakra, roughly 7 inches in diameter. The sphere is manipulated by the users will, and can be embedded with different chakra natures. The different chakra used gives each orb a different use, as they can be immediately converted into B-rank or below techniques.
Ex: A fire wisp will be used to create a fireball technique. While a water or earth wisp create water and earth techniques.
Each Wisp requires the hand signs needed for the technique it is meant to mimic, with two more handseals at the end. One cast, a wisp is created in a flash, and ready to use.
Weakness: Wisps are rather obvious, and more of a utility technique. Their use comes more from allowing the user to prep techniques in advance, while allowing for hand to hand combat. As such, there is no known weakness.
Jaakuna can only manifest 5 spheres at a time, and they eventually fade after 24 hours, requiring him to make new wisps.
Name: (Wisp faiฤ asaruto) Wisp Fire Assault
Rank: A
Range: Long
Nature: Fire/Wind
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: By using his war fan and a wisp, Jaakuna causes the chakra to explode outward into a powerful rush of fire. By mixing and matching wisps he can manifest different methods of attack. By mixing in more wind wisps, the range and scale is doubled. By mixing in more fire wisps, it creates a more devastating but close range explosion.
1 Fire Wisp - A sweep of fire that can burn a manor house to the ground.
1 Fire + 1 Wind Wisp - A sweep of fire that is able to burn down two manor houses that spreads quickly.
1 Fire + 2+ Wind Wisps - A sweep of fire that can ruin an entire forest if left unchecked.
2+ Fire + 1 Wind Wisp - Instead of a sweeping forest of fire, it can instantly tear down a manor house with an explosion, rather than just burn it.
Weakness: As a specialized combo technique, it burns through Jaakuna's pre-made wisps rather quickly. As a result, while devastating, the technique denies him a wisp to use for defense or other purposes.
Name: (Hi no kitsune: Bakuhatsu-tekina iriguchi) Fire Fox: Explosive Entrance
Rank: B
Range: Contact
Nature: ?
Type: Beast Technique
Effect: Using his own speed, Jaakuna envelopes his body in chakra. The focus of his technique is almost strictly all about smashing into other objects at high speed. Tearing through stone, armor, and just about anything. This technique was used primarily to tear through structures at high speeds, to keep the nine tailed Jinchuriki mobile.
Weakness: Requires movement. As it's more about applying extra energy on impact, and protecting the user's front at high speeds. It loses most force at lower speeds.
Name: (Kasai no kitsune: Jinsei no haisui no o) Fire Fox: Life Draining Tails
Rank: B
Range: Contact
Nature: None
Type: Chakra Draining
Effect: Using his hands, or more often the tails in his chakra coat, Jaakuna drains chakra by contact. This technique drains chakra, and by doing so makes molding chakra difficult. If caught, it can be nearly impossible to escape, as he stifles the ability of others to mold their own jutsu in defense.
Name: Shuriken Shadow Clone Great Explosion Technique
Rank: A
Range: 2 meters
Nature: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: Combining both the Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique and the Clone Great Explosion Technique, Jaakuna creates a swarm of shuriken. Pelting a target with a great deal shuriken, Jaakuna then causes the clones to explode. The power of this technique allowed Jaakuna to fight his targets at a distance, while remaining mobile and not leaving himself open to other attacks.
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Character Theme - Lying Together
ใFull Name
Date Uchiha
ใNickname/Aliasใ
TBA
ใGenderใ
Male
ใAgeใ
21
ใAge Appearanceใ
21
ใSexualityใ
Bisexual
ใVillageใ
Konohagakure
ใBirthplaceใ
Uchiha Compound outside of Konoha
ใAlignment/Affiliation/Organizationใ
Konohagakure
ใClan/Bloodlineใ
Uchiha
ใRankใ
Chunin
ใChakra Natureใ
Yin Release, 
Fire Release, 
Water Release
ใAppearance/Wardrobeใ
As seen above. His hair is darker though.
ใPersonalityใ
Date is painfully kind and nice. His own history and situation makes he see the bright side to most situations and people too (even if there isn't one). He will give you the shit off his back (if he has one on) and treat you like you are his family. Keeping the lives of those around him safe is what drives him to become stronger. During missions he will what is required of him and taking orders is not problem, and he does so to the best of his abilities. Date is that asshole in the group who you get mad at because you can't find a reason not to like them.
He is the type to get even though, he always has a smile and open arms but in one had a knife pointed at your back. He loves to repay any debt, insult for insult and favor for favor, if Date owes you he will be the honorable man he is and get you back one way or another. For all of his caring and kindness, Date has a dark side. He silently enjoys the pain of others and will inflict it without a moments notice. Only the most skilled could see his well hidden malicious intent and even fewer call him on it. Date can be your best friend with the warmest smile waiting to stab you in the back.
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ใHistoryใ
Being born into the Uchiha main branch was no simple thing, and being born the youngest of 2 sons made Date's birth even more important. As Date grew up he saw why he was so important to everyone. His father was an old man, and he gave birth to 4 girls before he finally had a son. His oldest son would prove to be a disappointment as he could not manifest his Sharingan, and thus he and his mother were shunned by the main branch for producing a "failure." Date's older brother could not use ninjustu and had to learn Taijutsu, and even then he was mediocre at best.
Date on the other hand showed talent and promise. He stayed with his mother most of time not really wanting to deal with politics and lived a happy childhood. Eat sleep, train, repeat, it was simple and for a while to was all he needed. But Date's father grew impatient and tried to force his Sharingan active by killing wife. The old man was dying and he needed to make sure his legacy was secure so he st up everything he needed to make the boy think his mother was in grave danger. The results of this scheme could be called a success. Date at the age of ten awakened his Sharingan but lost his mother. An accident occurred and his mom was paralyzed.
This sparked a fire in him, he saw just how corrupt and dark his family was and Date did not want any part of it. So 6 years alter he moved out of the Uchiha Compound and into Konoha. His father was outraged and demanded that he return everyday to train if he wanted his room and mothers medical expenses paid for. So for years he was held at the will of his father and still is. Even after he became a Chunin and if he is not busy will report at noon sharp for training with a smile.
ใEquipment/Weapons/Itemsใ
Name of Weapon or Item: Explosive Tags and Kunai
Description: Just simple and generic explosive tags and kunai.
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ใKekkei Genkai ใ
Name of Kekkei Genkai:
The Sharingan
Clan:
Uchiha
Rank
3 Tomoe
Description:
Date's Sharingan is fully awakened. He has not tired to further into a Mangekyล Sharingan and use both the "Eye of Hypnotism and Insight."
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Jutsu:
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ใFull Name
Date Uchiha
ใNickname/Aliasใ
TBA
ใGenderใ
Male
ใAgeใ
21
ใAge Appearanceใ
21
ใSexualityใ
Bisexual
ใVillageใ
Konohagakure
ใBirthplaceใ
Uchiha Compound outside of Konoha
ใAlignment/Affiliation/Organizationใ
Konohagakure
ใClan/Bloodlineใ
Uchiha
ใRankใ
Chunin
ใChakra Natureใ
Yin Release, Fire Release, Water Release ใAppearance/Wardrobeใ
As seen above. His hair is darker though.
ใPersonalityใ
Date is painfully kind and nice. His own history and situation makes he see the bright side to most situations and people too (even if there isn't one). He will give you the shit off his back (if he has one on) and treat you like you are his family. Keeping the lives of those around him safe is what drives him to become stronger. During missions he will what is required of him and taking orders is not problem, and he does so to the best of his abilities. Date is that asshole in the group who you get mad at because you can't find a reason not to like them.
He is the type to get even though, he always has a smile and open arms but in one had a knife pointed at your back. He loves to repay any debt, insult for insult and favor for favor, if Date owes you he will be the honorable man he is and get you back one way or another. For all of his caring and kindness, Date has a dark side. He silently enjoys the pain of others and will inflict it without a moments notice. Only the most skilled could see his well hidden malicious intent and even fewer call him on it. Date can be your best friend with the warmest smile waiting to stab you in the back.
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ใHistoryใ
Being born into the Uchiha main branch was no simple thing, and being born the youngest of 2 sons made Date's birth even more important. As Date grew up he saw why he was so important to everyone. His father was an old man, and he gave birth to 4 girls before he finally had a son. His oldest son would prove to be a disappointment as he could not manifest his Sharingan, and thus he and his mother were shunned by the main branch for producing a "failure." Date's older brother could not use ninjustu and had to learn Taijutsu, and even then he was mediocre at best.
Date on the other hand showed talent and promise. He stayed with his mother most of time not really wanting to deal with politics and lived a happy childhood. Eat sleep, train, repeat, it was simple and for a while to was all he needed. But Date's father grew impatient and tried to force his Sharingan active by killing wife. The old man was dying and he needed to make sure his legacy was secure so he st up everything he needed to make the boy think his mother was in grave danger. The results of this scheme could be called a success. Date at the age of ten awakened his Sharingan but lost his mother. An accident occurred and his mom was paralyzed.
This sparked a fire in him, he saw just how corrupt and dark his family was and Date did not want any part of it. So 6 years alter he moved out of the Uchiha Compound and into Konoha. His father was outraged and demanded that he return everyday to train if he wanted his room and mothers medical expenses paid for. So for years he was held at the will of his father and still is. Even after he became a Chunin and if he is not busy will report at noon sharp for training with a smile.
ใEquipment/Weapons/Itemsใ
Name of Weapon or Item: Explosive Tags and Kunai
Description: Just simple and generic explosive tags and kunai.
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ใKekkei Genkai ใ
Name of Kekkei Genkai:
The Sharingan
Clan:
Uchiha
Rank
3 Tomoe
Description:
Date's Sharingan is fully awakened. He has not tired to further into a Mangekyล Sharingan and use both the "Eye of Hypnotism and Insight."
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Jutsu:
Name of Technique: 
Sharingan Genjutsu: Leaf Trap
Type of Jutsu: Genjutsu
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid-Long
Nature Type:Yin Release
Description: Date's genjutsu requires him to make eye contact with his Sharingan. When used the genjutsu traps the user in a torrent of fallen leafs, making them feel at peace. Date uses the leafs to his advantage to make it more real, each time one touches the target he cuts them. It can be seen through, but that is why he cuts as the leafs touch to make it more believable.
Name of Technique:Sharingan Genjutsu: Fear Stab
Type of Jutsu: Genjutsu
Rank: B
Range: Short
Nature Type:Yin Release
Description: Date uses the most practical fear of his target (like snakes or failure) and creates a illusion that puts you at the center of it, only those who have over come this fear or know Genjutsu can easily break this illusion. He uses it to immobilize his opponents and get in close for a attack. Also the illusion can be broken by out side forces like being touched or some one screaming loud enough.
Name of Technique:Sharingan Genjutsu: Uchiha Suicide
Type of Jutsu: Genjutsu
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Nature Type:Yin Release
Description:Date makes eyes contact with his target and traps them in an dark world. Then three Uchihas with Sharingans appear and hold you down, then pull out paper bombs and explode along with you. Date can either use a paper bomb to make the effects real or leave you immobilized as he gets away.
Sharingan Genjutsu: Leaf Trap Type of Jutsu: Genjutsu
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid-Long
Nature Type:
Yin ReleaseDescription: Date's genjutsu requires him to make eye contact with his Sharingan. When used the genjutsu traps the user in a torrent of fallen leafs, making them feel at peace. Date uses the leafs to his advantage to make it more real, each time one touches the target he cuts them. It can be seen through, but that is why he cuts as the leafs touch to make it more believable.
Name of Technique:
Sharingan Genjutsu: Fear Stab Type of Jutsu: Genjutsu
Rank: B
Range: Short
Nature Type:
Yin ReleaseDescription: Date uses the most practical fear of his target (like snakes or failure) and creates a illusion that puts you at the center of it, only those who have over come this fear or know Genjutsu can easily break this illusion. He uses it to immobilize his opponents and get in close for a attack. Also the illusion can be broken by out side forces like being touched or some one screaming loud enough.
Name of Technique:
Sharingan Genjutsu: Uchiha Suicide Type of Jutsu: Genjutsu
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Nature Type:
Yin ReleaseDescription:Date makes eyes contact with his target and traps them in an dark world. Then three Uchihas with Sharingans appear and hold you down, then pull out paper bombs and explode along with you. Date can either use a paper bomb to make the effects real or leave you immobilized as he gets away.
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Reviews!
Imai Hatake- accepted!
Koma Hitsugi - accepted!
Jaakuna - already reviewed you in PM, but did you add that chakra draining jutsu after? Express the parameters on how fast he can drain chakra. Like say Madara launches a huge fireball of death, can Jaakuna absorb the whole thing at once, or what's goin on here? Your vagueness knows no bounds good sir
Date Uchiha - accepted! You beat me to the first Uchiha CS, congratulations
Imai Hatake- accepted!
Koma Hitsugi - accepted!
Jaakuna - already reviewed you in PM, but did you add that chakra draining jutsu after? Express the parameters on how fast he can drain chakra. Like say Madara launches a huge fireball of death, can Jaakuna absorb the whole thing at once, or what's goin on here? Your vagueness knows no bounds good sir
Date Uchiha - accepted! You beat me to the first Uchiha CS, congratulations
Dion THE ONE WHO IS CHEAP HACK ยฎ / THE SHIT, A FART.
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Uragiri Sakana - so he's a 16 year old Chuunin that knows both of Madara's A-ranked fire techniques? I'm not totally against the idea but I'm not totally sold on it either. And like is there a reason why he has an S ranked sealing technique with no other sealing knowledge? Again, I'm not totally against the idea but like sell me on it.
I mean, fire jutsu are the most bland of all jutsu in Naruto. Even looking at these two jutsu there's nothing that really sets them apart because they're both just essentially 'I shoot fire at you lol'. If I condensed it like such and made it into a custom jutsu, you'd basically end up with EXACTLY the same thing with a different name and 'it's not Madara's jutsu' and that honestly seems like a waste of time for both of us, hence I kept them in. Also, now it takes two slots, shows off his proficiency in ninjutsu as he's meant to be a ninjutsu duelist, where as if I made it into one custom jutsu it'd be exactly the same thing and offer way less exposition because it'd not be an established jutsu. It just feels like, to me, it'd take away a lot of exposition if I made it into, say 'Sakana's fire bomb' or something dumb, ESPECIALLY if it'd be the same thing.
Kinda hard to make fire jutsu more interesting than 'lol fire shoots in ur face xD!' imho. I can change it - I just think it'd be more work both for you and me for relatively little gain.
As for the sealing - I wanted to show off his devotion to fate, which to me could be showed by having a seal that activates upon death - he's gonna die one day according to fate and he'll never know why, but at least with a seal like this, he'd take down someone with him.
And because of that it doesn't really offer much because I'd have to let him die for it to do anything at all and even then it'd be plot related - because nobody is gonna stand there and let their character get sucked up by some random seal.
I figured that with the way seals are relatively unexplained, it could've just been placed on him as Sakana has no knowledge or expertise in sealing techniques. Could've just hired someone to do it or asked a favor from someone. And if the activator is death, he doesn't even need to activate it himself, and thus needs no expertise.
However, that's with sealing techniques being so random and unexplained that we're left to fill it in on our own as opposed to having a relatively clear idea of how they work.
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@Odin Now imagine he manages to make one and only friend and at the moment of his death said friend is holding him in his/her arms and he just goes boom? Oh the guilt.
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