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@tobiaxYo, so i've been following this for a bit, going back and forth whether to join or not, but i've finally decided to give it a shot. Sorry if this sheet is a bit messy and short, had to make it on my phone. I'll be sure to rework it later, but i figured that letting you weigh in on the more technical things would be useful to do.
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@HueManExcept you didn't because Genos is a cyborg for justice and revenge

@Krayzikk I get what you mean. I know what Surtr is, however, it's still a bit too... on the nose. Plus the Semblance doesn't really work.


The Semblance absolutely needs a rework, and finding a different picture is easy enough. I'll work on a second draft when I get to sit down later, but is there anything else that needs tweaking?
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haha, we have a lot of close combat specialist. this would be utter chaos.
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@Elle Santiago PUNCH 'EM IN THE FACE
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@Elle Santiago Hey, on the words of SAO abridge(and most MMOs),"Group up and hit it till it dies!" Plus, Silme's dust gives him some range options, even if it begins and ends with "throw ball of 'blank' at enemy". I do have a mkre long range character in my vault if that becomes a factor for getting accepted.

Honestly, i'm surprised that i seem to be the only one to app faunus. Also, lots of atlas representation in thid group as well.
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@Elle Santiago PUNCH 'EM IN THE FACE


Punching 'em in the face always works.
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@Raijinslayer That's because Atlas is the best kingdom.
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@LemonsSilme:"Best in being racist snobs with trees up their asses."

Also, something i didn't touch on in the sheet since I'm not certain yet, but he might have white fang sympathies/connections. Depends on whether or not tobiax wants to have them be involved in the plot or something.
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@Raijinslayer I've noticed you being in and out. And from a phone I can understand the spelling errors, but please clean them up at a later time. Also, what does CC attack mean? Also, tell me this White Fang thing.
also i made an appereance section for a reason use it people ag

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The Semblance absolutely needs a rework, and finding a different picture is easy enough. I'll work on a second draft when I get to sit down later, but is there anything else that needs tweaking?

Not going to lie, I like it as a trait, but then some things are going to need to be tweaked, and it just can't be a Semblance. Maybe a bit of the history as well?
I do have a mkre long range character in my vault if that becomes a factor for getting accepted.

Shouldn't be a problem. The character(s) I'm bringing in already cover(s) range fairly decently. Plus it'll make things more interesting.
Honestly, i'm surprised that i seem to be the only one to app faunus. Also, lots of atlas representation in thid group as well.

As of yet, yes. And that is a touch surprising yeah. I had expected more. Yeah, there is a lot of Atlas, but with Lemons, it can't be helped.
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@Krayzikk Also, please individual links for character theme(s) instead of a giant unguided playlist?
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@tobiaxCC=Crowd Control, though A.O.E works as well. Basically, he can use dust to make attacks that will likely effect the area around him, with a focus on restricting or repositioning his opponents. As for the white fang connection, I've hade it be in the previous incarnations of this character that he has had some connection with the White Fang, usually as a foreign member, as he harbors a rather intense prejudice against humans, as well as Faunus who he deemed to be 'domesticated' by their attempts to hide their animalistic features. I could likely work something similar here, only I'm not sure if it fits this time around. This Silme is a lot more mild for most of his life, and it isn't until recent events that he has gained his view of all humans as being untrustworthy and self-serving.

As for the appearance thing, I preferred to wait until I got to a computer before writing something like that up, as I tend to ramble and what not.

Edit: As a side note, what do you think of the Semblance? The theme I'm building Silme around is the Fenrir myth, or at least, my interpretation of the myth that cast the wolf in a more sympathetic light. While I think I have a good idea for the personality down and backstory, I'm having trouble coming up with a good semblance. The one I have now seems okay, but if you have any ideas on how to improve the concept or any other possible ideas, I'd love to hear them.
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@tobiax

Forgot to mention... if you need help with the GMing or making stuff, I'd be happy to help.
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@tobiaxCC=Crowd Control, though A.O.E works as well. Basically, he can use dust to make attacks that will likely effect the area around him, with a focus on restricting or repositioning his opponents. As for the white fang connection, I've hade it be in the previous incarnations of this character that he has had some connection with the White Fang, usually as a foreign member, as he harbors a rather intense prejudice against humans, as well as Faunus who he deemed to be 'domesticated' by their attempts to hide their animalistic features. I could likely work something similar here, only I'm not sure if it fits this time around. This Silme is a lot more mild for most of his life, and it isn't until recent events that he has gained his view of all humans as being untrustworthy and self-serving.

As for the appearance thing, I preferred to wait until I got to a computer before writing something like that up, as I tend to ramble and what not.

Edit: As a side note, what do you think of the Semblance? The theme I'm building Silme around is the Fenrir myth, or at least, my interpretation of the myth that cast the wolf in a more sympathetic light. While I think I have a good idea for the personality down and backstory, I'm having trouble coming up with a good semblance. The one I have now seems okay, but if you have any ideas on how to improve the concept or any other possible ideas, I'd love to hear them.


I'm not going to restrict your character's beliefs for this. He can be a White Fang Sympathizer just fine. Being under direct orders, however, might be a bit tricky. Thanks for clearing up CC.

Not what I meant exactly. I meant the image. It's cool though. (And I occasionally read Silme as slime for some reason. My eyes just trick me that way.)

Ah, I see. I'd suggest a lash-like weapon or something, but that's just me. I do like Silme's Semblance- even moreso with that in mind.

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Forgot to mention... if you need help with the GMing or making stuff, I'd be happy to help.

Oh, thanks, that's much appreciated. I'll keep you in mind.
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@tobiaxI feel the whip, but it's a tad too . . .technical for the ball of savagery that i imagine him to be, but I'll think on it. As for the white fang stuff, he wouldn't be apart of the White Fang, at least not currebtly, if i did go that route. More like a former member that called the quits after a certain moment. Still thinkin' but i'll keep ya up to speed on it.
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@tobiax IT'S M'BOI
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@LemonsYe. So, I'm guessing you are interested in how Aven/Mal and Tori would interact?
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