I'd be happy to edit whatever needs editing, However I think you'll find I never agnoledged his control of your character percius. So I doubt I need to do any edits of my own.
As you can see all she did was drool over him a little. However if I'm wrong please let me know what I need to change, I don't remember ever giving agknoledgement of the blacksmith doing anything but help phina c: . @avali
Just wondering if anyone has any objections to me creating the character of Hal the tavern owner and having him bring the secret leader of the Resistance?? :) Thoughts?? :)
You should always keep the arc going until you can join the rest of us :) Makes the world more believable, like there's other things going on in the world :)