[OOC] Relatively Generic Medieval Fantasy

[twannyman]

@Avali
@NewShoesForever

It's afternoon

[Avali]

For you maybe! It is almost 9 in the morning here! :P

[twannyman]

@Avali

May I get some more info on where Grace is and if I can just pop in there?

[EldarionI]

@NewShoesForever@twannyman What do you guys think of my writing so far? :) PM me if you want :)

[Avali]

>Most people are in the tavern.

>Grace and Arathion (@DragonofTheWest) are outside said tavern, arguing about the elves enlisting civilians to fight the war with the resistance.

[twannyman]

@EldarionI

I dislike the color's

Nah that is a joke, it's fine altough I'm used to more if I'm not like tired af

[twannyman]

@Avali

Thanks, time to write you something

[NewShoesForever]

@EldarionI

Pretty solid. Good tone and pacing. May want to insert a couple more line breaks, it looks a little monolithic.

[Avali]

Just don't go too nuts, I don't want to leave Dragon behind. I believe is more active later in the day.

@twannyman

[twannyman]

@Avali

Dw, I got some great plans, and a tired brains os not like 4-5 paragraphs

[EldarionI]

@NewShoesForever@twannyman Thanks guys :) Have you seen the post I did yesterday, I've edited the format a bit :) Do you think it looks better? :)

[NewShoesForever]

@EldarionI

Yes. It's very much more visually appealing.

[EldarionI]

@NewShoesForever Thanks :D Anything else you think I can improve on? :)

[Avali]

Much easier on the eyes. I love it.

[EldarionI]

@AvaliAnything else I can do to improve? :)

[Avali]

Nothing in particular ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

[NewShoesForever]

Nah. Nothing else springs to mind.

[EldarionI]

Thanks for helping guys :) @NewShoesForever@Avali@twannyman

[twannyman]

This is just to get into the plot and some char involvement

[Avali]

I can't respond right away.

I really don't want to leave dragon behind.