@cara214@Shadow Dragon THREE SENTENCE! I know this is a fight scene and they can be hard to write. Which is why I wasn't sure I wanted to do them this soon but you have to have more than this! Thoughts, feelings, anything.
@Shadow DragonI can understand that. That why thoughts and feelings are important. How does your character feel about flying? How hard is it to fly? How does flying affect the moves uses he's used to using? For only fighting in air once they seem to be fighting really well. @cara214
@Shadow Dragon That helps. Also I doubt any of the moves your character is doing could be done his first time fighting in air especially since he isn't used to flying.
@Shadow Dragonyep. Free doesn't mean not expectations. I have rules. There on the first pages. I've had the same rules for 5 years. It's hard to build off of posts that don't have at least three sentences and three sentences isn't that much to ask.