[OOC] XD

[Carlyle]

I'll be reviewing sheets later tonight.

[Carlyle]

Review Time

This does not mean that you're approved as I'm still waiting for some sheets.

@Lord Orgasmo Center alignment for the picture is broken. The characterization sections seem a little light, so I would try expanding on them. Also, if you could replace the yellow hex codes with a color of your choice to match your dialogue/inner thoughts later on, that would be appreciated.

@Stern Algorithm I did have some concerns that your concept might lean into edge territory, so I'm still a bit wary. Other than that, my only other concern is that Mushirou has no last name. Not sure if that was meant to be, or if you forgot.

@Raijinslayer I like what I see so far, even if there isn't much. Noibat is a good choice, being one of my favorites.

@Denny I'd like to point out that it is Krane, not Kane. Also, if you could list out how many Erza has of each item, that would be appreciated.

@Quote5 Minor coding errors still exist, but understandable because it is a WIP. As I said with Denny, please list out the number of each item (in his case, Pokeballs). Additionally, you could add a bit more to his backstory, perhaps as to why Krane would accept him. For the last name thing, maybe he could take the name of the orphanage/town the orphanage was in, though this is just a suggestion.

[Stern Algorithm]

@Sola

Don't worry about edge, Mushirou's personality will essentially be played for laughs. And for some reason, I was under the incorrect impression that last names weren't a thing in the pokemon world since gym leaders are only referred to by one name, but then I remembered Ash Ketchum. So Mushirou's surname will be Tokugawa.

[Raijinslayer]

@Sola Noibat and Noivern are always solid, and Noivern is my second fav non-legnedary pokemon.

[Quote5]

@Sola
Alright, I'll keep that in mind, I'll try to fix those later today. Thank you for your input.

[HokumPocus]

hewwo....

Harvey

"I don't really like the c-calendars that my dad's friends always put up at the shop. Don't the women in them get c-cold?"

_{[ ❇ ] S Y N O P S I S}

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_Name

Harvey Bouffalant

_Age

18

_Gender

Male

_{Starter Pokémon}

Gear the Mareep

_{Home Region}

Orre

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_Appearance

Harvey has a head of slightly curly brown hair with tan skin and bright brown eyes, standing at around 6’1”. His wardrobe consists of fleece jackets with whatever loose jeans are lying around. He wears a pair of wiry glasses that are frequently lost, broken, stained and bent beyond repair. One could almost say that he has single-handedly supported the optometrist industry within Orre through the whirlwind combination of his daily routine and advanced level clumsiness.

He carries an olive backpack covered in holes, tears and oil stains, and inside is a small tool bag used as an improvised pokeball holder.

On his feet are a staple to all of his looks, a pair of absolutely trashed tennis shoes. When you work in environments covered in grease and Arceus knows what, its only natural that your footwear is going to suffer. A lot.

_Personality

Calling Harvey a wallflower is an understatement. He is completely and utterly terrified of having conversations with people his age, and actually meeting a wild pokemon would probably melt his brain. While he would preferably avoid any and all contact with other people, he is aware that talking is the only way to achieve his goals and will often force himself to be social, resulting in plenty of awkward situations for everyone involved.

Harvey is used to following the rules and procedures of his job to a T and will quickly enter panic mode when things don’t quite go the way they’re supposed to. He will commonly have disagreements with people who aren’t as strict as he is, but will meekly go along with what they have in mind, though not before weakly protesting.

He is at his most relaxed when around grownups. He has little experience with pokemon and tries to avoid them at all costs. Any pokemon that isn’t small and commonly owned will either mystify or scare him. Or both.

_Background

Harvey has helped around his father's motorcycle shop for as long as he's been able to remember. Sure, they definitely have their fair share of shady clients, but they're not exactly in a very nice place. Harvey himself has little experience with pokemon and has avoided them without much effort for the most part out of living in Orre his entire life and being an inside person. Just lingering around the shop and helping out in menial tasks is enough to satisfy Harvey, as the place tends to get packed pretty quick. Or at least, that´s what he deluded himself into believing at first.

Exclusively interacting with tattooed behemoths twice your age tends to have an effect on you over time, especially if you´re the sort of teenager who gets an adrenaline rush out of watching anything PG-13. Harvey grew tired of the one sided conversations had with coworkers and customers alike that consisted of him wanting context to their suspicious slang terms and then receiving it along with a toothy smile and a lesson on human anatomy. Working away from the floor as the receptionist was even worse, as the way that he´d forcefully offer drugstore candy to the rare arrivals his age and lower had certainly placed him on a list somewhere.

Fortunately change did arrive one day in the form of a Professor with a mission. Recruit nearby youths that weren´t morally vacant criminals and band together to preserve peace within the region. The sort of job reserved for those with a knack for bonding with trainers and pokemon to overcome great danger, or in other words, meant for someone the complete opposite of him. Everyone familiar with Harvey and his quirks would have never imagined him willingly signing up to such a daring undertaking, and that´s precisely why he´s gone ahead and done it. He´s self aware enough to know that his current personality is in need of some tuning up, and is prepared to do whatever it takes to be the very best, or whatever it was that those Saturday morning cartoons would always blab on about. Friendship? Yeah, he could make some friends too. All part of the plan.

Alongside him is Gear the mareep, a pokemon gifted to him by a coworker after claiming the two had good chemistry. Gear had been banging her head against a garbage can repeatedly and had caught his attention. She then plodded over to him with a mane full of motor oil, selecting him as her new trainer and not the other way around. She has been kept inside her pokeball for quite some time now, as he´s been too busy and nervous to properly interact with her. One of his first goals is to have her out for as much time as possible.

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_{Items on Hand}

An empty tool bag used to store pokeballs and a can of WD-40. There´s also a giant wrench that he forgot to take out, though it works as a great toy for Gear.

_Pokébelt

Gear the mareep. An energetic and overly curious pokemon that is oblivious to any and all danger. She enjoys loud noises and will frequently create them if things get too quiet, especially in a situation where it´s a horrible idea to do so. Keep her away from batteries.

Moveset:
-Thunderwave
-Screech
-Tackle
-N/A

_{Personal Computer}

Nein

[Dio]

@Sola Fixed up. And it was a typo on the whole Kane/Krane thing, my bad. I think I'm okay with how she is.

[Carlyle]

@Stern Algorithm Accepted.

@Lord Orgasmo Still needs a color. Once you choose one, you can post the CS in the CS tab.

@Denny Accepted.

@HokumPocus Accepted.

[Lord Orgasmo]

@Sola My color is Yellow. It's slightly brighter than the original orange

Original

Judas' Color

[Carlyle]

@Sola My color is Yellow. It's slightly brighter than the original orange

Original

Judas' Color

@Lord Orgasmo

Huh, must've skimmed over it because the color choice was similar to what had already been used in the CS template.

Sure, I guess the color works. Go ahead and post Judas in the CS tab.

[Hero]

Dahlia

"Always have grace and poise."

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_Name

Dahlia Leigh

_Age

21

_Gender

Female

_{Starter Pokémon}

Kirlia

_{Home Region}

Hoenn

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_Appearance

Standing at a slightly above average height of five feet seven inches, Dahlia's most notable trait is her long, dark blue hair with pink undertones. She has pale skin and sports a thin, willowy frame with long limbs and a few noticeable curves. Her large, bright blue eyes give her a rather innocent look, her long nose and lips giving her an elegant look. She takes very good care of herself, her hair is almost always done, nails manicured, and blemish free. She leans towards what she calls a 'simply classy' state of dress, her wardrobe consisting of simple pieces that she likes to dress up or down with accessories. Heels are her absolute favorite, though her sunglasses collection is a very close second, both often being brand name despite the rest of her clothes being whatever she got for a bargain.

_Personality

❇ Elegant ❇ Confident ❇ Observant ❇ Assertive ❇ Haughty ❇ Devious ❇ Vain ❇

_Background

Born in Lilycove City the eldest of three siblings, Dahlia has always been the type of person to do as she pleases since she was young. Despite her parents running the Lilycove Department Store, she has always had more of an interest in pokémon. Battles were nice, but were a little too straightforward, too easy and brutish for her. To her, contests always had this flourish of technique and style, so it was a given after she got her first pokémon, a Feebas, and began her journey to stardom. She adored the limelight and elegance of contests, throwing herself into her craft. After years of practice and entries, she eventually ended up earning multiple ribbons in the Beauty category.

A few years back, she met another trainer by the name of Elena. She had come from the Orre Region, and after competeing, the two became quick friends, keeping in touch for some time. When Dahlia went to visit Elena as a surprise, she found out that her friend had joined a group called Team Snagem. Despite immediately wanting to decline, Dahlia wondered why her supposed friend would want to join Snagem. Doing a small investigation of her own, she followed Elena and stumbled on an operation in which they had somehow gotten their hands on what looked like a blue Ralts and had intended to take it away. Springing into action out of impulse, a battle ensued, although she underestimated their brutishness and barely managed to escape with the Ralts in tow.

Despite going to the authorities, little was done after the matter. Apparently Team Snagem had been something of a recurring issue with Orre, a fact unknown to the Hoenn-born woman, but she found that it was difficult to do nothing. Taking the Ralts in her care, she ended up clashing with Team Snagem several times after that. It came to a head recently when a particularly violent, corrupted Sceptile critically injured her Milotic. Deciding that she needed to be smarter, not stronger, she decided to go to Professor Krane, who was rumored to have something that could help with the 'shadow' pokemon she had encountered.

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_{Items on Hand}

TBA

_Pokébelt

Kirlia - The most recent addition to Dahlia' group, being the same Ralts she had rescued. Her appearance is striking as a shiny and was likely the reason behind her capture. Her elegance needs to be worked on, but she's battle ready, so she kept her around and left the rest of her pokemon in Lilycove.

_{Personal Computer}

Misty [Milotic] - Dahlia' contest champion and longtime friend. She has won her multiple ribbons and is the most well known of all her pokémon. Due to suffering sustained injuries from Iris' blowout with Team Snagem, she is currently receiving treatment and out of commission.

[Carlyle]

@Hero I know you spoke with me about the Kirlia issue, but I think Dahlia has a bit too many Pokemon at this moment. Other than that, I did notice some stuff in your backstory, mainly Ralts being "Raltz" and this segment:

When Dahlia went to visit Elena as a surprise, she found out that her friend had joined a group called Team Snagem. Despite immediately wanting to decline, Dahlia wondered why her supposed friend would want to join Snagem.

Bit confused here, but if I'm reading this right, Elena asked Dahlia to join Snagem?

[Hero]

@Hero I know you spoke with me about the Kirlia issue, but I think Dahlia has a bit too many Pokemon at this moment. Other than that, I did notice some stuff in your backstory, mainly Ralts being "Raltz" and this segment:

<Snipped quote>
Bit confused here, but if I'm reading this right, Elena asked Dahlia to join Snagem?

@Sola

That's fine, I'll take them out (Milotic won't be available for some time due to injuries, figured it was a good example of what the Shadow Pokemon were capable of), as for the second yeah, iirc in XD Snagem was trying to recruit people to replenish their ranks.

_{also i cant spell my b}

[Carlyle]

<Snipped quote by Sola>

That's fine, I'll take them out (Milotic won't be available for some time due to injuries, figured it was a good example of what the Shadow Pokemon were capable of), as for the second yeah, iirc in XD Snagem was trying to recruit people to replenish their ranks.

_{also i cant spell my b}

@Hero

Perhaps it could just be Milotic and Kirlia?

And that's fine too. It was just a bit confusing trying to make sense of it.

[Hero]

<Snipped quote by Hero>

Perhaps it could just be Milotic and Kirlia?

And that's fine too. It was just a bit confusing trying to make sense of it.

@Sola

Sounds good!

Edit: Fixed!

[Carlyle]

@Hero It has my approval.

[Carlyle]

I'm going to see about starting this RP this week, so if we could get the remaining sheets finished sometime in the next few days, it'd be appreciated.

Also, I'll be setting the RP to full, as the only people remaining are Quote and Rai.

[Raijinslayer]

Yeeet, will get on that as soon as I can.

[Quote5]

Yeep, I really need to get on that, don't I?

[Carlyle]

Right, so, each of you can decide to have one powerful pokemon here. It can be whatever you want as long as it isn't a legendary. Charizard, Garchomp, Milotic, w/e. As long as it abides by the above rule.

Of course, it is virtual, so you won't have it outside the simulation.